Special Paragraphs
Class 7
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Most Important Ps
Opening Paragraph
Closing Paragraph
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Opening Ps: Objectives
 Reader’s attention and interest
 Main idea
 Signal about the direction
 Tone of the essay
 Hook
A model paragraph
"Working part-time as a cashier at the Piggly Wiggly has given me
a great opportunity to observe human behavior. Sometimes I think
of the shoppers as white rats in a lab experiment, and the aisles as
a maze designed by a psychologist. Most of the rats—customers, I
mean—follow a routine pattern, strolling up and down the aisles,
checking through my chute, and then escaping through the exit
hatch. But not everyone is so dependable. In this paper I am going
to argue that there are three distinct types of abnormal customer:
the amnesiac, the super shopper, and the dawdler."
("Shopping at the Pig")
https://www.thoughtco.com/introductory-paragraph-essays-and-
reports-1691081
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Strategies
Commitment
Introduction to the topic.
Announcement of Intention
Key Facts
 Hook: a quotation etc.
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Closing Ps: Objectives
 Impression:
–no loose ends
–no unanswered questions
 Winding up a subject without
lapsing into clichés
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Strategies
 Linking words
 Summarize the Main Points
 Link the End to the Beginning
 Make a Recommendation
Linking words
 as can be seen
 in the final analysis
 all things considered
 as shown above
 after all
 in summary
 in conclusion
 in short
 in brief
 in essence
 to summarize
 by and large
 to sum up
 on the whole
 all in all
 Thence, Thus,
Therefore
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Home assignment
 Revise the Opening
and Closing
Paragraphs of your
paper
 Comment
 Read

Editing 2: Special paragraphs

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    Zsolt Almási: EssayWriting I, Special Ps 2 Most Important Ps Opening Paragraph Closing Paragraph
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    Zsolt Almási: EssayWriting I, Special Ps 3 Opening Ps: Objectives  Reader’s attention and interest  Main idea  Signal about the direction  Tone of the essay  Hook
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    A model paragraph "Workingpart-time as a cashier at the Piggly Wiggly has given me a great opportunity to observe human behavior. Sometimes I think of the shoppers as white rats in a lab experiment, and the aisles as a maze designed by a psychologist. Most of the rats—customers, I mean—follow a routine pattern, strolling up and down the aisles, checking through my chute, and then escaping through the exit hatch. But not everyone is so dependable. In this paper I am going to argue that there are three distinct types of abnormal customer: the amnesiac, the super shopper, and the dawdler." ("Shopping at the Pig") https://www.thoughtco.com/introductory-paragraph-essays-and- reports-1691081 2020.03.23. Zsolt Almási: Essay Writing I, Special Ps 4
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    Zsolt Almási: EssayWriting I, Special Ps 5 Strategies Commitment Introduction to the topic. Announcement of Intention Key Facts  Hook: a quotation etc.
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    Zsolt Almási: EssayWriting I, Special Ps 6 Closing Ps: Objectives  Impression: –no loose ends –no unanswered questions  Winding up a subject without lapsing into clichés
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    Zsolt Almási: EssayWriting I, Special Ps 7 Strategies  Linking words  Summarize the Main Points  Link the End to the Beginning  Make a Recommendation
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    Linking words  ascan be seen  in the final analysis  all things considered  as shown above  after all  in summary  in conclusion  in short  in brief  in essence  to summarize  by and large  to sum up  on the whole  all in all  Thence, Thus, Therefore 2020.03.23. Zsolt Almási: Essay Writing I, Special Ps 8
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    Zsolt Almási: EssayWriting I, Special Ps 9 Home assignment  Revise the Opening and Closing Paragraphs of your paper  Comment  Read