This document appears to be a portfolio for a writing course focused on writing for children. It includes poems, short stories, and reflections written by the author. It is dedicated to her husband and newborn son. The portfolio contains four sections - poems and reflections, critiques and reflections on those critiques, a writing philosophy essay, and concluding notes about the author.
This document provides information about a book titled "British Poetry" published by Spring Season Publications in India. It includes details such as the publisher, authors, date of first publication in 2020, ISBN number, and copyright information. The book is part of the SPSN series and focuses on British poetry. It contains preface information and a table of contents listing 10 solution series/chapters from June 2015 to December 2019 with sample questions and answers related to British poetry.
Vol. 4 scripture proverbs, illustrated, annotated, and appliedGLENN PEASE
NOTE: This rare book by a very popular Bible scholar of the past is now a collectors item that you can purchase for 49 dollars. This free copy has a number of spelling errors but it still conveys the full value of why it is so popular.
This is the final section of the amazing book by an amazing author.
Vol. 2 secular annotations on scripture texts.GLENN PEASE
NOTE; This book is available for 26 to 46 dollars because it is a collector's item, but you can read it here free. It has defects in ways but still conveys the wisdom of this great author of the past.
Here are some potential topics for a Mother's Day sonnet:
- Memories of childhood and mom's love and care
- Appreciation for all she has done through the years
- Qualities that make her the best mom
- Hopes that she knows how much she is loved
- Wishes for her on her special day
Choosing one focused topic will allow you to explore it more deeply within the 14 lines.
This document contains 8 poems for discussion in a literary appreciation course. The poems cover a range of themes including the fleeting nature of youth and beauty, love, nature, war, and death. The poems are written by well-known authors such as William Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, William Butler Yeats, and Thomas Hardy.
This story follows Florens, a 16-year-old slave girl living on the D'Ortega plantation. D'Ortega owes a debt to Jacob Vaark, who collects by taking Florens instead of payment. Florens is unhappy to be separated from her mother and brother. She goes to live with Jacob, his wife Rebbeka, and their servants on his farm. The story explores Florens' difficulties adjusting to her new life and servitude over time.
The summaries analyze several poems provided in the document.
1. The first poem discusses a child with a dirty face who got dirty from various play activities like digging in the dirt, biting buttons, and more. Imagery, end rhyme, and a silly tone are used.
2. The second poem analyzes two Robert Frost poems, noting their use of rhyme schemes, imagery, and themes of longing and admiration for nature.
3. The third poem provides analysis of three additional poems, noting their use of rhyme, metaphor, personification, and themes of life, expectation, and tenderness.
Wordsworth's poems "The Brothers" and "The Ruined Cottage" both explore themes of longing and being left without answers through their central characters. In "The Brothers", James longs for his brother Leonard who left for sea, while Leonard dreams of returning home. Similarly, in "The Ruined Cottage", Margaret longs for her husband who abruptly left for war. Both poems also reflect on the inevitability of death through the characters' losses and deteriorating states.
This document provides information about a book titled "British Poetry" published by Spring Season Publications in India. It includes details such as the publisher, authors, date of first publication in 2020, ISBN number, and copyright information. The book is part of the SPSN series and focuses on British poetry. It contains preface information and a table of contents listing 10 solution series/chapters from June 2015 to December 2019 with sample questions and answers related to British poetry.
Vol. 4 scripture proverbs, illustrated, annotated, and appliedGLENN PEASE
NOTE: This rare book by a very popular Bible scholar of the past is now a collectors item that you can purchase for 49 dollars. This free copy has a number of spelling errors but it still conveys the full value of why it is so popular.
This is the final section of the amazing book by an amazing author.
Vol. 2 secular annotations on scripture texts.GLENN PEASE
NOTE; This book is available for 26 to 46 dollars because it is a collector's item, but you can read it here free. It has defects in ways but still conveys the wisdom of this great author of the past.
Here are some potential topics for a Mother's Day sonnet:
- Memories of childhood and mom's love and care
- Appreciation for all she has done through the years
- Qualities that make her the best mom
- Hopes that she knows how much she is loved
- Wishes for her on her special day
Choosing one focused topic will allow you to explore it more deeply within the 14 lines.
This document contains 8 poems for discussion in a literary appreciation course. The poems cover a range of themes including the fleeting nature of youth and beauty, love, nature, war, and death. The poems are written by well-known authors such as William Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, William Butler Yeats, and Thomas Hardy.
This story follows Florens, a 16-year-old slave girl living on the D'Ortega plantation. D'Ortega owes a debt to Jacob Vaark, who collects by taking Florens instead of payment. Florens is unhappy to be separated from her mother and brother. She goes to live with Jacob, his wife Rebbeka, and their servants on his farm. The story explores Florens' difficulties adjusting to her new life and servitude over time.
The summaries analyze several poems provided in the document.
1. The first poem discusses a child with a dirty face who got dirty from various play activities like digging in the dirt, biting buttons, and more. Imagery, end rhyme, and a silly tone are used.
2. The second poem analyzes two Robert Frost poems, noting their use of rhyme schemes, imagery, and themes of longing and admiration for nature.
3. The third poem provides analysis of three additional poems, noting their use of rhyme, metaphor, personification, and themes of life, expectation, and tenderness.
Wordsworth's poems "The Brothers" and "The Ruined Cottage" both explore themes of longing and being left without answers through their central characters. In "The Brothers", James longs for his brother Leonard who left for sea, while Leonard dreams of returning home. Similarly, in "The Ruined Cottage", Margaret longs for her husband who abruptly left for war. Both poems also reflect on the inevitability of death through the characters' losses and deteriorating states.
This document contains a summary of the poetry featured in Issue 9 of Creatrix magazine. It lists the selectors, editors, poets, and provides short excerpts from 3 poems: "Shotholed With Moonshine" by Jan Napier, "half" by Janet Jackson, and "Picking Mulberries At the Dewings" by Elio Novello.
1. The story takes place in a small Louisiana town during a storm. Alcee Laballiere takes shelter at the home of Calixta and Bobinot when the storm hits.
2. While trapped in the house by the storm, Alcee and Calixta engage in a passionate sexual encounter. Neither feels guilt about the infidelity.
3. When the storm passes, everyone returns safely home and the affair remains a secret, with no apparent negative consequences. The story explores themes of sexuality, fidelity, and gender roles.
The document is a collection of nature poetry and short prose pieces by the author nisheedhi. It contains over 50 brief passages describing observations of the natural world, memories from childhood, and reflections on themes like seasons, landscapes, plants and animals. The pieces range from 3 to 13 sentences and provide vivid sensory details and imagery related to the outdoors.
This document provides a list of 10 horror novels recommended for Halloween reading. It begins with classic novels like The Exorcist and Dracula. Stephen King's It and The Stand are also featured. Less well-known works like Ghost Story by Peter Straub and The Historian by Elizabeth Kostova are included. The document encourages readers to consider writing and self-publishing their own horror stories. It concludes by advertising Xlibris' self-publishing services and October special offers.
This document contains 20 poems written in April 2014. The poems cover various topics such as souvenirs, mist, butterflies, trees, dreams, narration, earth day, gold, songs, turbans, children's inventories, uncles, old stories, physiology, torque, tinsel, inside thoughts, death, lampposts, hand holding, laundry, outlines, and unplugging. The poems range from 3 to 25 lines in length and explore philosophical and imaginative ideas through descriptive language and metaphor.
This document contains a dedication letter and collection of poems written by Madelaine Boyer for her brother James Michael as part of a poetry dedication project. The letter introduces several poems Madelaine wrote about memories with James, including "James" which is an acrostic poem describing his characteristics, "Little Brother" about their relationship, "Baseball" about James' love of the sport, and "The Pool" and "Chickens" about summer memories. The document also includes several famous poems selected for James, with short explanations for each choice, such as Shel Silverstein's "Listen to the Mustn'ts" to encourage him.
This document provides background information on the novel Madame Bovary by Gustave Flaubert. It introduces the protagonist Charles Bovary and describes his upbringing in a rural Norman village as the son of a retired surgeon. It details Charles' early education, from his first day at school where he was mocked for his name, to being sent to boarding school in Rouen by his parents so that he could study medicine. The summary establishes Charles Bovary as the main character who the novel will explore.
The document provides reading assignments from various chapters, stories, poems, and essays in a literature textbook. It includes instructions to read about different elements of fiction and poetry like plot, character, setting, point of view, language and style, theme, and irony and symbolism. It also lists themes for different weeks that include the creative process, the individual and community, and internal struggle and meditation. Students are asked to read critical essays and apply critical theories in their analysis of the assigned literature.
This document provides a psychological assessment of Artemis Fowl from the time he was 13 years old. It describes some of Artemis' early criminal activities and accomplishments, noting his intellect exceeded most humans. It suggests Artemis' criminal behavior was driven by his desire to restore his family's fortune after his father disappeared during a business venture. The document then provides context on Artemis' family background and his avoidance of other teenagers. Finally, it includes an excerpt from a new book in the Artemis Fowl series, setting up Artemis receiving a mysterious message related to the disappearance of his father.
This document contains summaries of literary devices and techniques used in a book. It analyzes examples from different pages that use similes, metaphors, personification, irony, direct and indirect characterization, foreshadowing, and internal and external conflict. The summaries briefly explain how each example fits the given literary element in 1-2 sentences.
The poem discusses the merits of using rhyme in poetry. It argues that rhyme is an important tool for poets and should not be dismissed as outdated. While rhyming poetry may be less common today, rhyme can be used subtly and effectively to enhance a poem. Famous poets like William Butler Yeats and Seamus Heaney have successfully used rhyme in their works. Overall the poem encourages poets not to abandon rhyme entirely from their creative toolbox.
This document contains poems by various authors on the themes of love and relationships. It includes three poems: Lord Byron's "When We Two Parted" which describes the pain of a separation from a lover; Percy Bysshe Shelley's "Love's Philosophy" about the interconnectedness of all things through love; and Robert Browning's "Porphyria's Lover" about a man who strangles his lover in a moment of passion.
This document is a collection of poems and passages from the author's memories and experiences living in a small, simple hut near the beach and mountains. The summaries focus on the key themes:
1) The author finds solace and refuge living alone in a simple hut near the beach and mountains, taking refuge from the world in the quiet serenity of nature.
2) Memories of the past, both happy memories from childhood as well as lost loves, keep the author company and provide comfort and faith during lonely nights.
3) Nature, especially the sea, plays a central role in the author's daily life and reflections, bringing both calm during clear mornings but also mystery and stories from the past
This document is the first chapter of a fictional story. It introduces the main character, Reyna, a gnome who is traveling through a snowy valley in search of Magis Sparkmantle, a wise gnome rumored to have magical abilities. Reyna hopes Magis will teach her some of his magic. She finds Magis at a dwarven outpost, and asks if he will take her on as a student to learn his "tricks" with magic. Magis seems excited by the prospect of having a student.
Between Life and Death is a new Supernatural Thriller centered in historical Natchez, Mississippi. The main character James Earl Williams has inherited something unusual that he doesn't want to receive. With the inheritance he has also picked up a tormenting enemy, invading every facet of his daily life and nightly dreams. Raised in New Jersey, James has never imagined that anything supernatural exists outside of books or movies, but that's all about to change.
This suspense novel is about first-love, death, spirituality, ghosts, moral ethics and consequences and much, much more. Colorful characters will make you angry, laugh, and cringe with heartfelt life situations.
However, make no mistake, this is almost 600 pages of Horror Novel. There is enough reality and creep in the story to make you look behind you in the dark and question the noises you hear in the night.
Thank you for all the local interest!
David Pyle
The document discusses the traditional elements of fairy tales and princesses, including magical creatures, spells, and expectations of princesses. It then presents a modern retelling of a fairy tale about a princess who encounters a frog claiming to be an enchanted prince. The story subverts expectations by having the princess reject the prince's request to marry and be his servant.
The document describes a product line of drinks called Jax Drinks that are themed after popular books and movies. Some example drinks include Butter Beer, Blood Light, and drinks themed after Harry Potter, Twilight, and Star Wars. The target customers are people ages 3 and up who enjoy imaginative drinks. The drinks would be sold in locations like malls, food courts, and drive-throughs near businesses. The document proposes marketing the drinks through a TV commercial showing a family enjoying Jax Drinks themed after their favorite stories.
This document provides guidance on how to properly cite sources within presentations. It recommends including a source line on slides with borrowed graphics that cites the original source. For quotes, statistics, or important information from other sources, the source should be cited either in parentheses after the quote or on a source line. A works cited list citing all sources in the required style should be included at the end.
This document contains a summary of the poetry featured in Issue 9 of Creatrix magazine. It lists the selectors, editors, poets, and provides short excerpts from 3 poems: "Shotholed With Moonshine" by Jan Napier, "half" by Janet Jackson, and "Picking Mulberries At the Dewings" by Elio Novello.
1. The story takes place in a small Louisiana town during a storm. Alcee Laballiere takes shelter at the home of Calixta and Bobinot when the storm hits.
2. While trapped in the house by the storm, Alcee and Calixta engage in a passionate sexual encounter. Neither feels guilt about the infidelity.
3. When the storm passes, everyone returns safely home and the affair remains a secret, with no apparent negative consequences. The story explores themes of sexuality, fidelity, and gender roles.
The document is a collection of nature poetry and short prose pieces by the author nisheedhi. It contains over 50 brief passages describing observations of the natural world, memories from childhood, and reflections on themes like seasons, landscapes, plants and animals. The pieces range from 3 to 13 sentences and provide vivid sensory details and imagery related to the outdoors.
This document provides a list of 10 horror novels recommended for Halloween reading. It begins with classic novels like The Exorcist and Dracula. Stephen King's It and The Stand are also featured. Less well-known works like Ghost Story by Peter Straub and The Historian by Elizabeth Kostova are included. The document encourages readers to consider writing and self-publishing their own horror stories. It concludes by advertising Xlibris' self-publishing services and October special offers.
This document contains 20 poems written in April 2014. The poems cover various topics such as souvenirs, mist, butterflies, trees, dreams, narration, earth day, gold, songs, turbans, children's inventories, uncles, old stories, physiology, torque, tinsel, inside thoughts, death, lampposts, hand holding, laundry, outlines, and unplugging. The poems range from 3 to 25 lines in length and explore philosophical and imaginative ideas through descriptive language and metaphor.
This document contains a dedication letter and collection of poems written by Madelaine Boyer for her brother James Michael as part of a poetry dedication project. The letter introduces several poems Madelaine wrote about memories with James, including "James" which is an acrostic poem describing his characteristics, "Little Brother" about their relationship, "Baseball" about James' love of the sport, and "The Pool" and "Chickens" about summer memories. The document also includes several famous poems selected for James, with short explanations for each choice, such as Shel Silverstein's "Listen to the Mustn'ts" to encourage him.
This document provides background information on the novel Madame Bovary by Gustave Flaubert. It introduces the protagonist Charles Bovary and describes his upbringing in a rural Norman village as the son of a retired surgeon. It details Charles' early education, from his first day at school where he was mocked for his name, to being sent to boarding school in Rouen by his parents so that he could study medicine. The summary establishes Charles Bovary as the main character who the novel will explore.
The document provides reading assignments from various chapters, stories, poems, and essays in a literature textbook. It includes instructions to read about different elements of fiction and poetry like plot, character, setting, point of view, language and style, theme, and irony and symbolism. It also lists themes for different weeks that include the creative process, the individual and community, and internal struggle and meditation. Students are asked to read critical essays and apply critical theories in their analysis of the assigned literature.
This document provides a psychological assessment of Artemis Fowl from the time he was 13 years old. It describes some of Artemis' early criminal activities and accomplishments, noting his intellect exceeded most humans. It suggests Artemis' criminal behavior was driven by his desire to restore his family's fortune after his father disappeared during a business venture. The document then provides context on Artemis' family background and his avoidance of other teenagers. Finally, it includes an excerpt from a new book in the Artemis Fowl series, setting up Artemis receiving a mysterious message related to the disappearance of his father.
This document contains summaries of literary devices and techniques used in a book. It analyzes examples from different pages that use similes, metaphors, personification, irony, direct and indirect characterization, foreshadowing, and internal and external conflict. The summaries briefly explain how each example fits the given literary element in 1-2 sentences.
The poem discusses the merits of using rhyme in poetry. It argues that rhyme is an important tool for poets and should not be dismissed as outdated. While rhyming poetry may be less common today, rhyme can be used subtly and effectively to enhance a poem. Famous poets like William Butler Yeats and Seamus Heaney have successfully used rhyme in their works. Overall the poem encourages poets not to abandon rhyme entirely from their creative toolbox.
This document contains poems by various authors on the themes of love and relationships. It includes three poems: Lord Byron's "When We Two Parted" which describes the pain of a separation from a lover; Percy Bysshe Shelley's "Love's Philosophy" about the interconnectedness of all things through love; and Robert Browning's "Porphyria's Lover" about a man who strangles his lover in a moment of passion.
This document is a collection of poems and passages from the author's memories and experiences living in a small, simple hut near the beach and mountains. The summaries focus on the key themes:
1) The author finds solace and refuge living alone in a simple hut near the beach and mountains, taking refuge from the world in the quiet serenity of nature.
2) Memories of the past, both happy memories from childhood as well as lost loves, keep the author company and provide comfort and faith during lonely nights.
3) Nature, especially the sea, plays a central role in the author's daily life and reflections, bringing both calm during clear mornings but also mystery and stories from the past
This document is the first chapter of a fictional story. It introduces the main character, Reyna, a gnome who is traveling through a snowy valley in search of Magis Sparkmantle, a wise gnome rumored to have magical abilities. Reyna hopes Magis will teach her some of his magic. She finds Magis at a dwarven outpost, and asks if he will take her on as a student to learn his "tricks" with magic. Magis seems excited by the prospect of having a student.
Between Life and Death is a new Supernatural Thriller centered in historical Natchez, Mississippi. The main character James Earl Williams has inherited something unusual that he doesn't want to receive. With the inheritance he has also picked up a tormenting enemy, invading every facet of his daily life and nightly dreams. Raised in New Jersey, James has never imagined that anything supernatural exists outside of books or movies, but that's all about to change.
This suspense novel is about first-love, death, spirituality, ghosts, moral ethics and consequences and much, much more. Colorful characters will make you angry, laugh, and cringe with heartfelt life situations.
However, make no mistake, this is almost 600 pages of Horror Novel. There is enough reality and creep in the story to make you look behind you in the dark and question the noises you hear in the night.
Thank you for all the local interest!
David Pyle
The document discusses the traditional elements of fairy tales and princesses, including magical creatures, spells, and expectations of princesses. It then presents a modern retelling of a fairy tale about a princess who encounters a frog claiming to be an enchanted prince. The story subverts expectations by having the princess reject the prince's request to marry and be his servant.
The document describes a product line of drinks called Jax Drinks that are themed after popular books and movies. Some example drinks include Butter Beer, Blood Light, and drinks themed after Harry Potter, Twilight, and Star Wars. The target customers are people ages 3 and up who enjoy imaginative drinks. The drinks would be sold in locations like malls, food courts, and drive-throughs near businesses. The document proposes marketing the drinks through a TV commercial showing a family enjoying Jax Drinks themed after their favorite stories.
This document provides guidance on how to properly cite sources within presentations. It recommends including a source line on slides with borrowed graphics that cites the original source. For quotes, statistics, or important information from other sources, the source should be cited either in parentheses after the quote or on a source line. A works cited list citing all sources in the required style should be included at the end.
This document summarizes 5 everyday activities as life games: 1) Walking to college with streets as levels and obstacles like time, 2) Making dinner with challenges of cooking quickly and properly, 3) Shopping with the task of getting a list of items where each aisle is a different level, 4) Catching the train with obstacles of tickets, phone, and different transportation levels, and 5) Work with challenges of arriving on time, cleaning, serving customers, and completing missions to be successful.
Chloroplasts are organelles found in plant cells where photosynthesis occurs, providing plants with energy. They contain chlorophyll which makes them green and are disc-shaped structures 2-10 micrometers wide. Plant cells contain 10-100 chloroplasts which work with mitochondria to produce energy for the cell through similar processes, while the smooth endoplasmic reticulum was voted as less important because its functions do not directly affect chloroplast functions.
This document describes a health and fitness game involving questions about sports and food, with physical tasks assigned for incorrect answers rolled on a dice. The goal is to be the first player to complete a stick figure drawing by adding muscle groups for each task completed, including biceps, forearms, quadriceps, calves and a six-pack. Completing all nine muscle groups makes a player the winner.
This document describes a health and fitness game involving questions about sports and food, with physical tasks assigned for incorrect answers rolled on a dice. The goal is to be the first player to complete a stick figure drawing by adding muscle groups for each task completed, including biceps, forearms, quadriceps, calves and a six-pack. Completing all nine muscle groups makes a player the winner.
CIS is dedicated to providing excellent client-centered services to the HMC community by promoting the mission of HMC with reliable, innovative, and convenient technology. CIS provides customer support that is friendly, knowledgeable, and responsive while collaborating with clients to develop effective solutions.
This story is about a young girl who finds a nest of baby birds in a hollow tree trunk near her home. She visits them every day to watch them grow from tiny pink creatures into feathered birds. When the trees bloom in spring signaling it is time for the birds to leave the nest, the girl cannot find them. She discovers only four velvet feathers left behind in the hollow trunk. Upset, she wonders what went wrong and cries, missing the birds she had watched over. The story explores a child's experience of caring for wildlife and feeling loss when they inevitably leave the nest.
This document summarizes a group project to create a psychological thriller film. It outlines that the genre is psychological thriller, with themes of reality, death, perception, mind, existence, identity, and purpose. Research was conducted on camera techniques like handheld camera shots. Alfred Hitchcock was also studied as an inspiration. The target audience is ages 15 to 34. Marketing plans include posters, magazine covers, and a teaser trailer. The brief synopsis is about a man who watches the world through his camera but doesn't see that the world is watching him. The budget is set at $15 million and Warner Brothers is chosen as the production company.
Robert Frost was one of America's most famous 20th century poets. He published his work in several collections including A Boy's Will (1913), North of Boston (1914), and New Hampshire (1923). Frost wrote extensively about nature and rural life in New England. His poems often used intricate rhyme schemes and explored philosophical themes. Some of his most well known poems are "The Road Not Taken," "Stopping by Woods on a Winter Evening," and "Fire and Ice." Frost received numerous honors including four Pulitzer Prizes for his influential poetry.
The document is a collection of poems and information about different poetry forms written by a student. It includes examples of acrostics, haikus, cinquains, diamantes, free verse poems, a character poem, and a rap poem about holidays. The student also selects Winnie the Pooh as their favorite poet and includes an example of one of Pooh's poems.
Here is a summary of the key events in Harper Lee's novel To Kill a Mockingbird using the structure of the Hero's Journey:
- Atticus Finch, a lawyer in 1930s Maycomb, Alabama, accepts the challenging case of defending Tom Robinson, a black man accused of raping a white woman, despite facing prejudice and threats of violence.
- Throughout the trial, Atticus courageously pursues justice and equality while also protecting his children from racism. However, his challenges are not over when Tom is wrongly convicted and later killed.
- After Bob Ewell attacks his children in vengeance, the mysterious Boo Radley saves them. This crisis brings transformation and revelation, with Atticus recognizing the lessons he has
This document provides summaries of poems by several notable American poets from the 2000s including Maya Angelou, Gwendolyn Brooks, Billy Collins, Rita Dove, Robert Hass, Ted Kooser, Stanley Kunitz, Mary Oliver, and others. It includes short biographies of each poet as well as samples of their poetry. The samples range from a few lines to a full poem and cover topics such as nature, aging, relationships, and social commentary.
Literature can be categorized into two major types: prose and poetry. Prose includes genres like novels, short stories, plays, essays, biographies, news reports and orations. Poetry can be narrative, lyric or dramatic. Narrative poetry tells a story through verse, like epics, ballads and metrical tales. Lyric poetry expresses emotions through short, simple forms like sonnets, odes and psalms. Dramatic poetry includes genres meant to be performed, like comedies, tragedies and farces. Certain literary works from around the world have had significant influence, such as religious texts like the Bible and Quran, and classics like the Iliad, Mahabharata and Arabian Nights
The document contains examples of different poetry forms and genres including haiku, acrostic poems, cinquains, and free verse poems. It also provides instructions and examples for creating poems in these styles. The student has written several original poems in each style and included summaries of other students' poems.
The document is a collection of poems and poetry exercises from a student's poetry anthology. It includes definitions and examples of different poetry forms like acrostics, haikus, cinquains, and more. The student provides their own original poems in each form.
This document contains various poetry forms written by Geena and collected from other sources, including Kenn Nesbitt poems. It includes what's poetry, acrostics, haikus, cinquains, diamantes, free verse, and more. Geena provides examples of each form with subjects like chocolate, bubbles, leaves, and flowers. Kenn Nesbitt poems are also included about homework machines and headless towns.
This document summarizes different poetic forms including:
- Ballads which tell stories in a musical way using four line stanzas with a rhyme scheme of ABAB.
- Sonnets which have either the Shakespearean or Petrarchan form with 14 lines in iambic pentameter.
- Blank verse which is unrhymed poetry with a regular meter, typically iambic pentameter.
- Free verse which has no set rhyme or meter.
It provides examples of different poems to illustrate each form.
This document contains several poems about youth and growing up submitted by Dylan James. The poems explore themes of nostalgia, change, friendship, and perceptions of youth. One poem reflects on friends graduating high school and drifting apart. Another discusses warped views of one's younger years. The poems showcase the complex feelings associated with life transitions from youth to adulthood.
This document provides analysis of key phrases or passages from various literary works. It includes the source text, a key phrase or words identified in the text, a brief explanation or answer for the meaning of the key phrase, and sometimes additional contextual details. Some examples analyzed include passages from Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Romeo and Juliet, Sonnet 116, The Raven, and others. The document examines elements of plot, character, theme, imagery, tone and other literary devices across different genres.
The document contains various poetry forms and examples submitted by students, including acrostics, haikus, cinquains, and free verse poems. It also provides information on poets like Ken Nesbitt and defines different poetry genres and structures. The student demonstrates their understanding of poetry through original creations in various forms.
The document is a magazine called "The Path" that is dedicated to publishing works from emerging writers and helping shorten their path to publication. It includes various poems, essays, and short stories from over 20 contributing authors. The magazine is published semi-annually and provides submission guidelines for authors interested in being considered for future issues.
This issue of the Haiku Journal Roadrunner features:
1) A special feature interview with poet Grant Hackett about his background and approach to haiku and one-line poems.
2) A selection of recent one-line poems by Grant Hackett on the theme of "tiny mortal drums".
3) A translation of haiku by early 20th century Japanese poet Fujiki Kiyoko, known for her involvement in the Shinkō (New Rising) haiku movement in the 1930s.
This presentation is prepared to assist students to understand American Poet's Robert Frost's famous sonnet Design.
This presentation is not a mere creation of the author, as it is based on various sources and purely designed to assist students in their examination. Quality of this presentation cannot be compared with original text and genuine resources. Students are advised to prefer the authentic texts and resources for better results.
This document contains 59 short poems or fragments on various themes including nature, life, death, memory, and the passage of time. The poems range from 3 to 6 lines and explore ideas through minimal yet vivid language and imagery. Overall, the collection provides a glimpse into the human experience and condition through concise and impactful poetic expressions.
This story describes the terrifying Ms. Toulsky, a third grade teacher known for her extreme teaching methods and motto "They will learn one way or the other." Most students do not last long in her class. The story focuses on know-it-all Donald Donaldson, one of the few students who had survived so far. However, during a history lesson Donald openly criticizes the subject, causing Ms. Toulsky to fly into a rage. The story cuts off just as Ms. Toulsky marches toward Donald with her history book, leaving the reader to imagine the frightening consequences.
This document provides an introduction to poetry, discussing various poetic elements and techniques. It begins by defining poetry and noting that it uses musical language to capture intense experiences. It then explains that poetry has a speaker and is formatted differently than prose, often using lines and stanzas. The document goes on to discuss several key elements of poetry, including rhythm, sound devices like rhyme and alliteration, and imagery. It emphasizes that both the left and right brains are used in analyzing and understanding poetry.
Literary devices, poetic structures, and techniques are essential for analyzing poems. Some key elements discussed include:
1) Literary devices like metaphor, simile, personification and irony are used to create vivid impressions or hidden meanings. Meter, rhyme, and punctuation are also important for poetic flow.
2) Poetic structures include stanzas made of lines, with techniques like enjambment, caesura and end-stopped lines controlling the rhythm.
3) Understanding devices and structures is necessary to fully appreciate poems and extract their intended messages, thoughts, and ideas. Poetry aims to communicate through creative use of language.
This document contains various poetry forms and examples submitted by students, including acrostics, haikus, cinquains, diamantes, free verse poems, character poems, riddle poems, and more. Definitions and guidelines are provided for each form. The student has also included biographical information about their selected poet, Ken Nesbitt.
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Courtney M. Riggin
Fall 2011--LL ED 597G
Writing for Children
Dr. Susan Campbell Bartoletti
Pennsylvania State University
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This portfolio is dedicated to my husband, Justin Thomas Riggin,
who patiently listens to all my tales...
and sometimes helps me discover them;
and to my newborn son, Thomas Walker Riggin,
in honor of the stories he will hear, experience, and create throughout his life.
It is dedicated to these two fellows because,
as I like to tell them,
they are my favorites.
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Table of Contents
Part One
Poem: Autumn Fort 6
Reflection: Autumn Fort 8
Poem: Sunday Best 9
Reflection: Sunday Best 11
Poem: A Letter to Rain 12
Reflection: A Letter to Rain 13
Poem: Messy Room 14
Reflection: Messy Room 15
Short Story: The Feast of the After-Christmas Birds 16
Reflection: The Feast of the After-Christmas Birds 21
Part Two
Critique One 23
Critique One Reflection 25
Critique Two 26
Critique Two Reflection 28
Critique Three 29
Critique Three Reflection 30
Critique Four 31
Critique Four Reflection 32
Writing Philosophy: An Essay 33
Part Three
Author’s Note 36
Biography 37
Blurbs 38
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PART
ONE
Poem: Autumn Fort
Reflection: Autumn Fort
Poem: Sunday Best
Reflection: Sunday Best
Poem: A Letter to Rain
Reflection: A Letter to Rain
Poem: Messy Room
Reflection: Messy Room
Short Story: The Feast of the After-Christmas Birds
Reflection: The Feast of the After-Christmas Birds
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Autumn Fort
As the first Autumn winds whipped through the air,
I hollered for my brother across the yard,
and barely glimpsed his outline as he darted behind a bush.
I dashed around the bush to catch up with him,
leaning into my turn like a rodeo barrel racer;
the bush must have been the size of a funnel cake stand—
the kind with windows and wheels that travels around from fair to fair, circus to circus, and
show to show.
As the swiftly-moving clouds sprinkled sunlight like a disco ball across the lawn,
I suddenly stopped, frowned, and turned round and round looking for him,
I shuffled my feet through the fallen leaves until I heard the soft, smooth sound of a single
harmonica chord.
When the harmonica went silent, I moved closer, staring at the bush’s curtain of leaves;
suddenly his hand burst through a thick vine,
pushing it aside in one sweep,
scattering leaves from the branches like confetti tossed toward a parade float.
As the leaves were caught by the wind and carried through the playful sprays of sunlight,
I realized the branch was only a thin wall of leaves covering a secret space—
I crawled into the entrance and saw the open room he had chopped inside the bush
with the garden shears meant for pruning mother’s holly bushes.
I looked around the room—
I liked the walls and ceiling of gnarly, leaf-studded branches
And the roots and limbs that stood like ballroom pillars across the room;
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I liked the spongy floor of twigs and damp leaves
And the way the earth smelled like black pepper and cinnamon sprinkled on the pages of
my favorite books.
As my brother disappeared through the leaf curtain to build a new secret fort,
I decided the room needed a table and two chairs, a vase of flowers,
and a welcome rug to make it just right.
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“Autumn Fort”
Reflection
I grew up in a rural community in Alabama. Our house rested on a 600-acre pecan orchard
surrounded by woods. Our yard alone covered 3 acres of Earth. In this yard, there was a bush the
size of a traveling funnel cake stand—maybe even larger—and one afternoon my brother revealed
to me that he had cleared the branches and leaves from the middle of the bush to create the effect of
a room big enough for me to stand and twirl around in. I could probably have managed a decent
cartwheel, too. In real life, my older brother has always been evasive and romantic in his endeavors,
which was how I hoped to portray his character in the poem. In both real life and the poem, he
revealed the hideaway to me only after he had decided to move on to something bigger and better. I
took over the fort and made it my own, just like the girl in the poem. It is a wonder all that chopping
did not kill the bush; but as I grew up, it grew back to its original density with health and vigor.
Although my parents have since moved to a new house nearby, the bush still stands.
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Sunday Best
The pictures etched in the stained glass windows show people
silent, kneeling, and listening—
never playing, singing, or dancing.
Their images echo the well-known rule,
Shhhhhh…
Be still!
The stiff wooden pews hold people sitting like wooden soldiers
mirroring the faces of the stained-glass people
staring straight ahead at the priest in his long black robes and heavy silver cross,
And he reminds us from the pulpit,
Shhhhhh…
Be still!
Everyone pretends not to notice Mama
trying to catch my little brother as he scampers by;
scurrying under the pews and out again, marching up and down the rows,
She’s reaching,
He escapes,
She hisses,
Shhhhhh…
Be still!
I sit very straight with my hands in my lap— I am old enough to know how to act.
The preacher asks us to bow our heads for prayer.
Brother scurries by, hopping like a jackrabbit,
He giggles
And it echoes through the heavy pine beams.
They seem to roar,
Shhhhhh…
Be still!
A gray-haired man watches with a scowl,
Then he turns his face
But I can see him chuckle.
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A matron in a high-necked wool dress shakes her head and frowns,
Then she holds her handkerchief to her mouth
And her eyes crinkle from the smile she hides.
Brother escapes Mama’s grasp again,
He croons as another giggle rises from his belly.
She begs,
Shhhhhh…
Be still!
I try to be silent, but I giggle too.
Then the gray-haired man and the matron look at each other
And laugh out loud.
And all the people throw back their heads in a chorus
of noisy laughter.
Who says we should be so quiet?
Who says we should be so still?
As the organ begins the closing hymn,
the sun strikes through the stained glass
casting a honey-glow on the faces of the people
in the rigid wooden pews
and commands them,
Stand and sing!
Stand and sing!
Stand and sing!
Stand and sing!
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“Sunday Best”
Reflection
I grew up in a very traditional church atmosphere—and I still prefer traditional services.
However, since I have moved away from my childhood church, they have had a series of issues with
preachers. One of these preachers was plagued by depression. The church congregation wanted to
give him a chance even though his illness often caused him to totally miss church services without
any notice, leaving the congregation members to divvy up responsibilities and lead their own
services in his absence(yes, this is a true story!).
One of these Sundays when the preacher didn’t show up, I happened to be visiting. I was
deeply impressed by the way the congregation honored the essence of their reason for coming to
church and collaborated to thread together a makeshift, informal service (even though they are
accustomed to proper and predictable). Their version was one of the most touching and enjoyable
services I have attended.
I was remembering this incident one Sunday as I sat watching a toddler. I was wondering
why he had been allowed to come into the service and why the mother wasn’t taking him out of the
sanctuary when I suddenly remembered that spontaneous, totally improvised service at my
childhood church. I looked around and an old man caught my eye. From time to time, he would turn
toward the boy and mother with a sour expression. “He’s ticked,” I thought with confidence. Then,
the little boy suddenly escaped and ran up to the man’s pew and slid into the seat next to him. The
man’s face lit up. The boy made lots of racket. The man laughed. I jotted down my observations of
this exchange, and the idea for this poem was born.
This is a piece I will continue to work on. Originally, the poem was not child-centric. I only
submitted it to the workshop once, so the revisions have been heavily focused on modifying the
poem from an adult-centric observation to a child-centric piece. I am still struggling with
structuring the lines and achieving the voice of the on-looking child. My next revisions will focus
more on achieving a more playful, casual tone as well as tightening the structure so that the lines
form a repetitious rhythm and the “Shhhhh… be still!” lines are more predictable for a child
listening to the poem.
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A Letter to Rain
Dear Rain,
I don’t know why you catch such a racket.
As soon as the weather man says, “Rain, rain, rain!”
boring grown-ups and stodgy kids throw up their hands,
and they moan, moan, moan
as if the forecast for your arrival was the same as,
“Everyone will step in chewed-up, gooey gum today,
and it will stink like canned asparagus.”
But Rain, I don’t agree.
You make me want to parade through your showers cheering, “You’re here, You’re here!”
I throw on my slick raincoat and galoshes and try to trap your wind in my open umbrella.
I imagine your raindrops are candied sprinkles falling
to cover the rooftops, parking lots, and sidewalks like giant cakes squares;
I watch your droplets race down the windows of cars and buildings.
Even after you’ve left, I can watch the squishy earth rise up between my toes
and flood my toenails:
I pretend the murky water is ocean waves
and I am a lifeguard or a surfer or a sandcastle artist;
and then I stir up the waves and become a dancer,
splashing the water to the rhythm of my feet
and making the puddles swirl and splatter.
Rain,
I especially like when you visit in summer
because it’s like a gigantic sprinkler has been turned on
for us to play in together.
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“A Letter to Rain”
Reflection
I wrote this piece by accident. It was born from the assignment in which we listed ten things
found in nature. I was frankly not in the mood, so I listed the most obvious—“rain” made the list
because at the time it was raining outside. As I was reviewing the list (in a better state of mind!),
“rain” caught my eye. For a split second I was going to write about what one can do on a dreary,
rainy day. Then, I thought… maybe a child wouldn’t always see a rainy day as dreary. In fact, I
suddenly remembered that I loved rainy days until I started fixing my hair and putting on makeup
in junior high school. As a child, I thought rainy days were exciting and even a bit enchanting. So, I
decided to write a “Letter to Rain” from a child who happens to enjoy rainy days. I wanted the child
to seem as if he or she was concerned that people’s general reaction to “rain” was something that
hurt “Rain’s” feelings.
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Messy Room
Pssst! C’mere and let me tell you something:
A messy room can promote an average middle-school kid
to the ranks of the coolest college guys.
All you have to do is smear greasy fingers across the wall
after snacking on Tator Tots; eat funnel cakes in bed
and let the powdered sugar and fried ringlet crumbs
fall between the layers of sheets; let the dust pile up
until you can make mini moguls on the window sill
and surfaces, lounge around with a pack of long-haired dogs
and let them shed their fur and slather their drooling tongues across
everything a soapy mop might clean; leave glasses of half-drunk milk
in every nook and cranny until they curdle and stink and eventually
harden in the bottom of the glass; then pop them out and
whittle little carvings from the sour-smelling slabs
and place them on display.
Well, now I gotta go. It’s almost time for the bash of the year—
Everyone who’s anyone will be there—
And anyone who’s not will be a loser at school on Monday.
My gang of guys will be here any minute...
Oh wait a sec, my mom’s calling me—
“WHAT? But Mooooooom, why do I have to clean my room
before I can go to the party?”
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“Messy Room”
Reflection
Writing “Messy Room” was one of the assignments that removed me from my comfort zone.
One of my personal tendencies I have noticed this semester is to automatically slip into a detached,
nostalgic voice. I also tend to be drawn more towards complexity and formality in meaning and
tone rather than just sitting down to write fun, lighthearted pieces. Children seem to generally
prefer playful pieces, so my hope was that in writing a few, I could gradually become more
comfortable balancing “fun” and “funny” with profound meanings and poetic language.
This is not a poem I would want to share with the general public— that “cool” means
“irresponsible” is just not the sort of message I want to send. Kids get that message enough from
pop culture and peers. I had several suggestions to remove or totally rewrite the ending. My goal
was to achieve a point in a lighthearted, Shel Silverstein way. The last stanza is meant to convey the
point that you won’t actually get anywhere if you live by the “messy is cool” philosophy—maybe my
intentions make the piece a little too pedantic, which is another reason I wouldn’t strive to
distribute it. I tried to rework the last stanza rather than delete it in an effort to keep a bit of
humorous ethics to the piece.
So, I’m sure you would like to know why I revised and included a poem I don’t like. One of
the main reasons is because of the cool and irreverent tone. I think the voice is consistent and
convincing. I included it merely to show my flexibility as a writer—and because it was such an
important discipline for me to create and revise the piece.
In the final revision, I chose to play with colloquialisms to more greatly influence the
narrator’s voice. In addition, I tried to apply more of my classmates’ suggestions—with the
exception of replacing the term “mini moguls” with a more common image. After considering it, I
decided that “moguls” are common enough for anyone who has attempted snow sports or watched
the winter Olympics—and if the child reader doesn’t know the term it would be a good one to learn!
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The Feast of the After-Christmas Birds,
A Picture Book
When green polka-dots sprout on the trees,
and pink
and purple
and red
and yellow starbursts
pop from the tight buds,
and the warmth finally drives the nip away
That’s when she remembers the birds.
There was a River Oak tree behind the blueberry patch
where she found them,
living in a hole
deep in the trunk
near the ground.
The hole wound down
and around
and through the trunk,
and there,
tucked in the cool, dark bottom,
were four baby birds.
They were only scrawny creatures
wrapped in pink skin and tissue
with ugly stems for legs
and gaping beaks
on spindly necks.
She hurried to see them every day.
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Between chores. Before school. After school.
And soon, they began to look fuzzy
(like an odd peach that had sprouted spindly stretches of limbs)
and still so pink
but with a tinge of brown and gray.
And then, they grew
soft and plump
with feathers of grayish-brown
like the mud scooped from puddles after a spring rain.
She wanted them to play
in the polka-dotted trees,
the blueberry patch,
and the bright starburst blooms.
But Father said,
“Don’t touch them
or the mother might get spooked by your scent
and leave them.”
So instead, she left them gifts
of little china teacups filled to the rim with nuts
and seeds
and dried red berries.
And she left cotton fluff she pulled from her pillow
and even some very curly pencil shavings.
Then one day, the birds were gone.
She searched through the patches of brush
where the blueberries had all been picked,
and the starbursts
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were already beginning to wilt
and fade.
And then she saw them.
No, not them—not the birds—
she saw four velvet feathers
resting at the bottom of the hole.
Her legs shook.
Her lip quivered.
She searched through the brush
and did not find the birds.
She turned from the tree
and felt warm tears begin to drip
down her cheeks.
What went wrong?
She was sure she hadn’t touched them—
But she had gazed
and lingered
and left so many gifts.
School began.
She studied. She played. She laughed some, too.
But she could not—she did not—
talk about the birds.
Nor did she forget them.
Christmas came.
She and her father decorated an evergreen tree.
Christmas went.
She helped her father take down the tree.
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He said,
“Maybe we should have an After-Christmas Tree this year.”
And she agreed.
So, she helped him make garlands of dried red berries
and pinecone ornaments gilded with peanut butter, cereal, nuts, and seeds
to lace throughout the After-Christmas Tree
for the squirrels.
And then, they came.
No, not they—not the squirrels—
the birds came.
Four grown-up birds the creamy color of rain-puddle mud
fluttered around her After-Christmas Tree.
Every day the snow whipped fresh drifts,
And every day they came
until
the winter bluster surrendered
and the feast of the After-Christmas Tree
was over.
But, the birds seemed…
very busy.
And one day,
in the hole
at the bottom
of the River Oak Tree
she heard a fragile chirp.
And behind the blueberry patch,
she heard another,
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And near a green polka-dotted tree,
There was another,
And then,
in the pink
and purple
and red
and yellow
starbursts,
she heard a lot of fragile chirps.
And Father said,
“I think we need to put out a bigger bird bath.”
And after many teacups of treats,
she once again
found nothing but a soft pile of feathers
where the birds had been.
And this time,
she understood.
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The Feast of the After-Christmas Birds
Reflection
This poem is based on an idea I jotted down two years ago and decided to begin writing it
out this semester. At the time of the inspiration, we lived in Charlotte, NC. Even though our house
was just two miles from the bustling uptown, we had a large fenced-in backyard. It was the kind of
yard where something was always in bloom. One spring day, I noticed a hole at the bottom of a tree.
I looked in the hole and saw four gaping, hungry beaks begging me for gourmet worms to eat. I had
seen bird nests in the rafters of porches, nestled in rooftop eaves, and in the limbs of branches, but I
had never seen one in a hole in a tree trunk so close to the ground. Suddenly, this story just came to
me, and I have loved the idea since. Now, I must get it right, which I am learning reluctantly
requires “killing my darlings”, as Dr. Bartoletti quoted.
But, I think it’s close.
In my last round of revisions, I tried to focus on cutting words, phrases, and entire stanzas—
especially from the end. It’s amazing how deleting words take hours upon hours more than it takes
to string words together.
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PART
TWO
Critique One
Critique One Reflection
Critique Two
Critique Two Reflection
Critique Three
Critique Three Reflection
Critique Four
Critique Four Reflection
Writing Philosophy: An Essay
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Critique One
By: Paula White
For: Courtney Riggin’s “The Barn Loft”
Lesson 5 Workshop
The Barn Loft
After presents had been ripped open and cake eaten down to the chocolate-streaked
cardboard platter and the leftover ice cream had melted in the trash bags and begun to seep out of a
hole onto the garage floor attracting an army of ants, Allie asked if we wanted to see their old barn.
This sounds a bit like passive voice~you might want to rethink this opening as occuring rather than
a recollection-
We all ran behind her with our party hats hanging from our necks or jutting off our mouths
like beaks.This scene has child-centric qualities ~I see the kids running and laughing with the hats
hanging off of their faces. I like this imagery.
She was right. The barn was old. The red paint had faded to a chalky hue that made it look
as if a fog stood between our little group and the barn. Vines climbed up the looming clapboard
walls, and the metal roof was rusted and dented. Inside, it smelled like hay, manure, and horse
musk. I could hear Allie's three horses blowing and shuffling inside their dark stalls. The air was
cold and with each snort and blow, a little gust of steam puffed through the feeding trough window
at each stall. Perhaps you can pick a tense and present the whole piece in that tense.
"What's up there?" Lucia asked Allie. We all looked to the wooden ladder, draped with
cobwebs and dusted with hay remnants, earth, and pollen. Dried mud clumps clung relentlessly to
the tops of each rung--probably left by someone's boots.
Your story could start here-"Follow me!" Allie whispered mysteriously. We all made our
way silently, single file, up each ladder rung, each one of us hoping not to meet the weaver of the
white, sticky webs.
I was the last one up, and as I crawled over the ledge at the top rung, I saw what I thought
must be God's spirit itself piercing like a beam across the open loft. The effect was from the sunlight
filtering through a broken window, catching the hay particles waltzing through the air. Bales were
stacked up along the walls as high as the ceiling. “This must be what ‘holy ground’ looks like,” I
thought. Allie was showing the group a shoebox coffin where she had buried her dead pet Finch the
year before. It had mummified perfectly so that it looked as if it would hop up chirping at any
moment. “Well, that’s all there is to see up here!” Allie announced. The group--no longer silent and
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mystified-- began to clamor a perfect word choice-down the ladder. I thought I'd take just a few
more moments to gaze at what I was sure must have been the spirit of God wafting I like this word
choice, but I'm wondering if your reader will understand that this is a spiritual piece-is it? You say
"holy ground" and allude to the hereafter when you mention death and a coffin (although only with
a pet)...Are you setting up the plot to unfold as a spiritual journey? Just wondering... across the
room. Suddenly, I couldn't hear the voices of the girls any more. Where had they gone? How had
they gotten out of earshot so fast? Then I looked down the ladder I had come up just minutes ago
and my knees began to shake. I realized with terror that I couldn't climb down.
This beginning unfolds not only as a mystery but also as a spiritual journey of sorts. You
mention "God's spirit itself" and "the spirit of God" and "holy ground." Are these mentions strictly
denotations? They carry some weight. Will the reader take the spiritual journey in which you seem
to be alluding?
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Critique One Reflection
This particular critique was helpful to me for two reasons. First, Paula showed me another
option for my opening lines when she pointed out “Your story could start here.” I realized as I re-
read that she was right. It would be a much more interesting opening line and more likely to hook
the reader right away—or at least not make the reader work very hard in the first sentence. In this
first draft, the story’s opening line is long and descriptive. It’s a good sentence, as several other
critiques pointed out, but it also asks too much of the reader too soon. I don’t want my reader to
have to work so hard in the beginning—at least not until the second sentence of the story! Paula’s
suggestion brings the reader right into the story’s action. What’s more, it works out so perfectly to
switch a few lines around, I don’t even need to lose much from the descriptions I really like.
Second, Paula’s questions about the spiritually-charged descriptions in the last paragraph
made me realize the kind of character I am introducing—and it dawned on me, I like her! Originally,
I set out to write about a mysterious barn loft. I ended up seeing that I was writing about a little girl
who fits in well on the outside but feels very different within herself. Yes, Paula. This is a story
about “a spiritual journey of sorts”—I just didn’t know it until this critique helped me see it!
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Critique Two
By: Lisa Moe
For: Courtney Riggin’s “Autumn Fort”
Lesson 11 Workshop
I felt like I was discovering the fort along with your character. What a great idea! Kids and forts go
hand-in-hand, don't they? :-)
Yellow: sophisticated wording that feels too old for the speaker
Blue: great word choice
Purple: exceptionally awesome imagery
Green: This seem to assign the speaker to a specific gender. If that’s the intent, you’ve done
well. If you’d like to make the poem relevant to all children who fantasize about such a fort,
perhaps you might change this detail to something more gender-neutral.
Autumn Fort
As the first Autumn winds whipped through the air,
I hollered for my brother across the yard,
and barely glimpsed his outline as he darted behind a bush.
I dashed around the bush to catch up with him,
leaning into my turn like a rodeo barrel racer;
the bush must have been the size of a funnel cake stand—
the kind on wheels that travels around from fair to fair, circus to circus, and show to show.
As the swiftly-moving clouds sprinkled sunlight like a disco ball across the lawn,
I suddenly stopped, frowned, and turned round and round looking for him,
I shuffled my feet through the fallen leaves until I heard the soft, smooth sound of a single
Harmonica chord.
When the Harmonica went silent, I moved closer, staring at the bush’s curtain of leaves;
suddenly my brother’s hand burst through the draping foliage,
pushing it aside in one sweep,
scattering leaves from the branches like the confetti tossed toward a parade float carrying
Miss America.
As the leaves were caught by the wind and carried through the playful sprays of sunlight,
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I realized the branch was only a thin wall of leaves covering a secret space—
I crawled into the entrance and saw the open room my brother had chopped inside the bush
with the garden shears meant for pruning mother’s holly bushes.
I looked around the room—
I liked the walls and ceiling of gnarly, leaf-studded branches
And the roots and limbs that stood like ballroom pillars across the room;
I liked the spongy floor of twigs and damp leaves;
I liked the fresh smell of wet earth and cool air;
As my brother exited through the leaf curtain to build a better fort,
I decided the room needed a table and two chairs, a welcome rug,
and a vase of flowers to make it just right.
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Critique Two Reflection
Throughout the semester, Lisa has offered so many helpful suggestions. I love reading her
stories and admire her skill, so I always perk up a little as I read her critiques on my own writing,
feeling that perhaps some secret potion to acquire some of her talent might be hidden in her
suggestions.
At some point during our workshop experience, Lisa began a color-coding technique. It is an
orderly approach that makes it easy to skim through the critique, picking out the good and the bad.
She also seems to identify and focus on select facets of craft for each workshop rather than pointing
out everything that needs work in one sitting. I have found that this approach helps me focus more
productively on revisions because the editing load seems more manageable. For example, the first
time I posted “Autumn Fort”, she focused on areas that seemed wordy and phrases with nice
consonance. In this particular critique from a later posting of “Autumn Fort”, she focused on word
choices and images that work versus those that do not. She highlighted the images that were
“exceptional” and the wording that was “good” so that I could easily skim through those sections
while editing, knowing that she considered them valuable. She then highlighted the wording that
did not work, specifically stating that the reason was the age-appropriateness of the word choices. I
think her approach has worked for me on many occasions because it is direct, constructive, and
concise.
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Critique Three
By: Courtney Riggin
For: Jennifer Fliss
Lesson 6 Workshop
Walking through the rolling hills of rural Pennsylvania in the fall is like nothing else.
I shiver from the chill of the early morning crispness still left in the air.
I smell the faint scent of wood burning furnaces keeping families warm whose homes are nestled
deep in the forest glens.
I watch the sun illuminate a kaleidoscope of colors on trees whose leaves have turned into hues
harvested straight from a preschoolers crayon box. This line is beautiful, yet it doesn’t read easily.
It’s not far from great! Just tighten or clarify.
I hear the snapping and splintering of breaking branches as deer cautiously search for food amidst
amid/among the protection and shelter too similar in meaning? Maybe choose one of the massive
towering pines.
I am captivated by the beauty of God’s untouched canvas.
The wonder of nature is all around me.
Its simplicity is mesmerizing and its wonder is inspiring.
I am at peace.
Turquoise: I love the structural repetition of I verb in these lines. I especially love the build up to “I
am”. “I am” is such a strong yet concise phrase. It’s so full of confidence and vigor, not to mention
it’s ties back to the Old Testament in which God declares himself the great “I Am”. It leads perfectly
into your graceful, humble use of “God’s untouched canvas”. In fact, it makes the whole poem feel as
if it’s on the move! Therefore…
Purple: I would remove these lines altogether. Try having your last two lines be your “I am”
statements. I don’t think the poem will lose anything by tossing these out—they’re a bit sentimental
and abstract anyway.
Yellow: Try editing for better word choices or more meaningful concrete images in these areas.
And last, great use of consonance/alliteration throughout!
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Critique Three Reflection
For this critique, I tried Lisa’s color-coded approach. In looking back, I don’t know why I
didn’t continue offering critiques this way. It forced me to focus on a few specific areas of
improvement— which as I stated in my Critique Two Reflection, makes it easier on the author to
edit thoroughly and fruitfully. It also helped me elaborate on the highlighted areas more concisely.
In reviewing this critique, I like to think that Jenn sat down with a mug of peppermint cocoa and
pretzels (which is a lovely combination if you’ve never tried it!) and had a stress-free, productive
editing session.
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Critique Four
By: Courtney Riggin
For: Kelly White
Lesson 11 Workshop
Hey Kelly!
I agree with the other two comments on watching pronouns and wordiness and making dialogue
more concise. Here are two specific suggestions:
The scent of a wood fire pit burning in the crisp fall air floated through the air as groups of people
walked across the large, dirt parking lot situated on a hill where crops were once planted.
I still think it’s distracting to repeat the word “air” so close together. I’ve offered a remedy
below. I think this remedy also shortens your introduction just enough so that there are fewer
words padding your lovely details:
The scent of a wood fire pit burning filled the crisp fall air as groups of people walked across
the large, dirt parking lot situated on a hill where crops were once planted.
Crowds of people stood in line to see how long it would take them to conquer the 1 ½ mile
track where monsters lingered and dead ends played the spoiler to progressing closer to the exit of
the maze. This sentence still doesn’t make sense to me…
Also, I like the way you switched the perspective from your original piece! It makes it a
totally new story in the same setting. If you like the way it turned out from this perspective, I say
leave it and work within the text for revising. If you still aren't head over heels for it AND are up for
doing a total revision again :) , I suggest keeping the story as close as possible to the original one
that included you and your friends but write it from the child's viewpoint. In that viepoint, we won't
know what the mom and dad are doing. In this version, the story almost focuses too much on the
parents' fear-- and therefore their perspective-- and too little on the child's experience of being lost
in a strange, crowded place.
Whatever you decide, I also think you could consider starting the story with less of a scene
description and more of the immediate action. Re-read it looking for points of energy and
determine if any of those areas would make an interesting beginning. Then, tie in your scene
descriptions (which as VERY good!) within or immediately after the action of the opening.
I'd be interested to see how you approach these final revisions! It's a great piece with a lot
of options.
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Critique Four Reflection
I appreciate criticism more than praise in writing workshops. For that reason, I like to give
more criticism than praise. Granted, I certainly want to know what works and what strikes the
reader as particularly poignant; but in connection with laud, I want to know what stands in stark
contrast as weak , ambiguous or unnecessary. I want to know what drags my story down—and I
want to know bluntly without having to interpret the feedback.
I also like open-ended suggestions or proposals that contain several options when someone
feels that the story simply isn’t working. I want to know what revisions the critic thinks would turn
failure into potential.
There was one particular workshop critique where I felt I was reading a story with
potential—but one that (in my view) needed to be re-worked in order to reach its potential as a
child’s story. Kelly submitted the story twice. The first time it was written from her point of view as
an adult. The second time, it included more of the child’s story but the point of view was 3rd-person
with a strong focus on the mom. The first time I read it, I felt it was a good start. The story could
easily be relevant to a child’s experience or fear of being lost in a crowded public place. I tried to
make several suggestions for revision while maintaining that the story still needed to focus more on
the child’s viewpoint. In other critiques, I have commented on all the areas I see room for
improvement. In this particular critique I tried to focus on one main area while offering a small
handful of mechanical suggestions.
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Writing Philosophy: An Essay
My philosophy of children’s literature centers around the belief that reading is a
multifaceted experience that should be productive as well as pleasant. It should be something
enjoyable and relevant; yet it is also one of the ways we constantly improve our use and
understanding of language as well as our experiences of the world and its cultures. This is
especially true for children. It often seems that children learn new words and ways of stringing
sentences together more quickly and easily than adults. Therefore, they should be exposed to the
diversity of language early on while they still have pictures to support the text and before they
begin claiming a preference for only one type of style, subject, or genre.
In Lesson One, I stated that children’s books “should challenge [child readers] with new
words, turns of phrases, more complex tones and sentence structures” in order to “demonstrate the
endless possibilities of language.” Although this basic belief has not changed, it has been enhanced
and modified. In looking back over my reviews from the workshops, it’s obvious that I have been
trying to learn how to apply my own philosophy to writing effectively for children. My reviewers
certainly noticed. In almost every workshop I had comments such as, “I question the use of these
terms. I dont' see them as child centric,” and , “I don't hear those terms coming out of child's
mouth,” and, “I can't picture a child using such terms.” Sometimes these comments would be in
relation to descriptions such as, “Do kids really notice the colors and intricacies of birds?” At times I
felt defensive— I remember noticing the colors and intricacies of birds as a child. Why can I only
use words a child would say? Why should I patronize child readers and assume they only want to
read books with words they already know and use? Am I supposed to cater to a child’s perspective
to the point of stifling their growth and learning? Then I found myself doubting my beliefs and
wondering, Am I really that far off with my philosophy… or do I just need more practice applying it?
And the answer that came was—as it so often is—both. They are right; and I am right, too.
In my original statements, I claimed that using this type of language might mean creating
“combinations of simple words with complex syntax—or complex words with simple syntax—used
in interesting ways.” Or it might mean writing a book about an experience so relevant to a child’s
life that the language has room to spiral “into a complexity the child can relate to simply because
the subject is mundane and well-known, even if the words are not.” I made these statements in
Lesson One, but I don’t think I have been working to apply them as if they are the philosophy by
which I write. In hindsight, I should have practiced my philosophy more acutely. I could have
written a piece about brushing teeth and used advanced vocabulary and onomatopoeia; and then I
could have written a piece describing an Indian marketplace using more familiar words and images
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since the experience would be so new. These are exercises I hope to use in my freewriting as I exit
this course.
In addition to nailing the use of sophisticated wording in children’s literature, other areas I
hope to improve include wordiness, identifying unnecessary lines and stanzas, locating the “real”
beginning and ending, avoiding too many descriptors and metaphors, tightening the structure, and
understanding the way beat and meter work rather than making decisions based solely on how it
feels. I think if I can continue to improve in these areas, this will also help my rich word choices
work.
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Author’s Note
This portfolio represents a journey of sorts. Compiling it got me wondering, Why
don’t I think of myself as a writer? I certainly enjoy writing and feel compelled to write
often. Perhaps I cannot see myself as a “writer” because I am not published; or maybe it is
because I have an everyday job; or possibly it is merely that I am too busy to be a writer.
In the first several weeks, this course quickly extinguished any logic I might have
argued these reasons carried. I do not need special certification or ordination to be a
writer, as I would to be a priest or a nurse. I do not need a series of books published in my
name and listed in Oprah’s book club to call myself a “writer”, just as I do not need to be
accepted to the Boston Marathon to call myself a runner. Being a writer simply means
appreciating writing, carving out time for it often, and working diligently to revise drafts. In
short, being a writer means being a person who writes.
Now, this is not to say I use the term irreverently. I would not call myself a runner if
I only ran 1.4 miles once a year. I call myself a runner because running is something I am
dedicated to doing several times a week. On the other hand, I do not call myself a
photographer even though I take pictures—this is because taking pictures is not something
that drives me or touches my brain in a place that determines my sanity for that particular
moment, nor is it something I strive to improve and work into my daily routine, like
running. I am not dedicated to photography. I simply take pictures.
Considering this, I think I can begin to whisper quietly to myself in a mirror each
morning, You are a writer. Therefore you must value the calling you have answered and carve
out some time to write today. So I whisper into empty spaces where only I can hear, I am a
writer. And I write.
Maybe soon I will be able to whisper in someone’s ear. And maybe soon after that, I
can whisper the words to a group of people. And maybe someday, I can say it aloud in
ordinary conversation without missing a beat.
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Biography
Courtney Riggin is currently completing her last course in the M.Ed. in Curriculum
and Instruction program at Pennsylvania State University. She also has a Post-
Baccalaureate certificate in Family Literacy and a B.A. in English from Auburn University.
In her career, Courtney teaches reading to children who have language-based
learning disorders or attention deficits. She is in the process of completing her certification
in the Orton-Gillingham approach, which is an individualized, multisensory, phonetic-based
program specifically used to teach reading and writing to students with dyslexia.
She and her husband, Justin, recently moved from Greenville, SC to Columbus, GA,
where she has started a new job at a large private school. She says, “It’s an exciting position
to be in because it will be the school's first venture in using the Orton-Gillingham approach
with students who have language processing differences. In fact, it is the first school in
Columbus to implement Orton-Gillingham for struggling readers. I feel like a pioneer!”
Courtney says her husband is a handsome and ambitious construction manager. In
the four years they have been married, his job has transferred them to five different states.
“It makes for great writing material!” she says. They hope to settle in or near Atlanta, GA in
the next several years. In their spare time, Courtney and Justin are also renovating a 1960’s
ranch-style home to fit their tastes and invite more daylight into a drab, outdated home.
They hope to renovate more homes in the future, making dark, ugly houses light and
charming one mortgage at a time.
Most importantly, Courtney and Justin had their first child—a boy—on 11-11-11.
Thomas Walker Riggin came into the world two weeks early at 6 lbs 11 oz, and he has been
teaching them many lessons and skills since his arrival! They are thankful beyond words
for his health and presence (and overall adorable-ness!).
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Blurbs
Courtney is by far the most innovative and imaginative writer I know. Her use of
hyperboles is exquisite and I have never once been disappointed reading her work.
-Ashleigh Land, Atlanta, GA
Attorney
Riggin is a marvelous author! Her imaginative and wholesome tales weave beautiful story
and lessons to be enjoyed by all ages. My students and children ask for stories to read again
and again...and I certainly don't mind obliging!
-Lydia Knizely Johnson, Mobile, AL
Director of Children’s Ministry
Always a delight...Ms. Riggin's writings are at once a cozy warm sweater to the soul and a
jolt of stimulating peppermint mocha to the brain. She never disappoints!
-Betsy Mazzola, Hatchechubbee, AL
Teacher
Courtney is one of the most creative writers I've met. From beginning to end, her writing
captivates you and makes you want to dive in to each of her stories. Her knowledge in
historic English literature is also extremely impressive.
-Rachel Wright, Auburn, AL
Artist, Blogger, and Graphic Designer
Courtney’s superior linguistics and literary eloquence glisten as she captures the hearts of
both young and old, speaks as a proponent of the forgotten middle class, and encourages
Americans to take the road less traveled.
-Todd McGilliss, Athens, GA
Entrepreneur