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Drafting Of Ideas
A2 Media – Elise Daniels
Within this presentation I will be presenting some basic ideas of three
possible ideas of trailers. I will also be gaining feedback from my chosen
 target audience for my chosen trailer. I will provide a brief description,
      what I like about the trailer and why I did or didn’t choose it.
Possible Trailer 1 -
 The outline of this film is based on a group of friends who plan on breaking in
      on their local school after rumours of the school being haunted. They all
      plan on staying in the school for the whole night where they investigate
      different areas of the school and conduct a séance to make contact with
        the spirit and see if the rumours are true. As their night progresses it
      becomes evident that they are not the only ones in the school and weird
   things start happening. One by one each of the friends begin to go missing
              and getting out of the school becomes harder and harder.
  I liked this idea based on the idea of it focusing on students and turning a
    school environment into something creepy. I believe it would be appealing
          for students, as there are always rumours of ‘ghosts’ and ‘strange
                               happenings’ within schools.
   Although I decided not to use this idea based on the school always being
   busy with other students and it being hard to shoot based on the timings of
       day. This means it wouldn’t be creepy enough and there were to many
                                      distractions.
 Characters – 4-6 students and 2 other characters to act as the spirits.
           Possible film names – Lost in the dark / Alone
                Setting – Grace Academy Darlaston
Possible Trailer 2 -
 Trailer 2 is based on a film where a group of bullies at a school physically and
  mentally torture a female student know as Amy at their same school. So much
   so that the girl writes a suicide letter, heads out to a local forest and is never
  found again. No one knows if she's alive, she died or someone abducted her.
      The guilt stricken bullies decide to head out to the forest where she went
   missing and find Amy. It then becomes apparent that someone is hunting the
                      4 bullies down. Is it Amy or is it Amy's killer?
   I liked the thriller storyline of this possible trailer as I believe it would build
  suspense during the creation. Again it is also includes students within the film,
    meaning it would appeal to my chosen target audience. Although I decided
  not to chose this trailer, based on the development of this storyline in the next
       slide. I believe I have made the storyline more of a horror genre, not just
     focusing on thriller like this possible trailer. I want to include suspense and
                                            horror.
 Characters – 4 students,1 character to play Alice,1 mystery character.
                  Possible film names – Innocence
       Setting – Grace Academy Darlaston and a forest area.
Possible Trailer 3 -
           Trailer 3 is based on 2 girls who have arranged a forest party in the
       middle of no where, where they are going to camp for the night. Although
        rumours suggest that a mystery stalker roams the forest killing innocent
           people who cross his path. Both girls get lost in the forest and begin
           to realise that someone is watching and following them. The night is
         fast approaching and no escape is known. The stalker is hunting these
girls down and they can't escape. He manages to capture both girls. Know it’s up to
                            them to survive and escape the torture.
  The reason I liked this possible trailer was based on it focusing on both a horror
          and thriller genre. I believe the horror will involve individuals who like the
      concept of a film that includes, killings, injuries etc. The thriller genre will then
       involve those who love suspense, twists and those who want to know more
                                       about the storyline.
                Based on this, Trailer 3 would be my chosen trailer to film.

Characters – 2 girls to play Jasmine and Alice. 1 character to play stalker.
                    Possible film names – Paranoid
               Setting – Range of forest and park area's.
Possible Trailer
  The drafting of my trailers all consist of horror and thriller genre's. I have
chosen to let people around the same age as myself to choose which trailer
  I should create. This is based on the target audience and I believe they
should have in put in which is the most interesting. I did not just want to use
           my own personal opinion, I wanted to included others.
   I have copied each description of the three possible trailers and asked
   around 30 students and family members to read each section and the
             choose one choice and write their preferred option.

                 I then counted up the results to find that -
                                 Trailer 1 - 9
                                 Trailer 2 - 5
                                Trailer 3 – 16
 Based on these results I chose Trailer 3. Feedback I received explained
  they would find trailer 3 more interesting and they wanted to know more
information about the stalker. Other feedback consisted of the participants
                  liking the suspense and horror build up.

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Drafting 2

  • 1. Drafting Of Ideas A2 Media – Elise Daniels
  • 2. Within this presentation I will be presenting some basic ideas of three possible ideas of trailers. I will also be gaining feedback from my chosen target audience for my chosen trailer. I will provide a brief description, what I like about the trailer and why I did or didn’t choose it.
  • 3. Possible Trailer 1 - The outline of this film is based on a group of friends who plan on breaking in on their local school after rumours of the school being haunted. They all plan on staying in the school for the whole night where they investigate different areas of the school and conduct a séance to make contact with the spirit and see if the rumours are true. As their night progresses it becomes evident that they are not the only ones in the school and weird things start happening. One by one each of the friends begin to go missing and getting out of the school becomes harder and harder. I liked this idea based on the idea of it focusing on students and turning a school environment into something creepy. I believe it would be appealing for students, as there are always rumours of ‘ghosts’ and ‘strange happenings’ within schools. Although I decided not to use this idea based on the school always being busy with other students and it being hard to shoot based on the timings of day. This means it wouldn’t be creepy enough and there were to many distractions. Characters – 4-6 students and 2 other characters to act as the spirits. Possible film names – Lost in the dark / Alone Setting – Grace Academy Darlaston
  • 4. Possible Trailer 2 - Trailer 2 is based on a film where a group of bullies at a school physically and mentally torture a female student know as Amy at their same school. So much so that the girl writes a suicide letter, heads out to a local forest and is never found again. No one knows if she's alive, she died or someone abducted her. The guilt stricken bullies decide to head out to the forest where she went missing and find Amy. It then becomes apparent that someone is hunting the 4 bullies down. Is it Amy or is it Amy's killer? I liked the thriller storyline of this possible trailer as I believe it would build suspense during the creation. Again it is also includes students within the film, meaning it would appeal to my chosen target audience. Although I decided not to chose this trailer, based on the development of this storyline in the next slide. I believe I have made the storyline more of a horror genre, not just focusing on thriller like this possible trailer. I want to include suspense and horror. Characters – 4 students,1 character to play Alice,1 mystery character. Possible film names – Innocence Setting – Grace Academy Darlaston and a forest area.
  • 5. Possible Trailer 3 - Trailer 3 is based on 2 girls who have arranged a forest party in the middle of no where, where they are going to camp for the night. Although rumours suggest that a mystery stalker roams the forest killing innocent people who cross his path. Both girls get lost in the forest and begin to realise that someone is watching and following them. The night is fast approaching and no escape is known. The stalker is hunting these girls down and they can't escape. He manages to capture both girls. Know it’s up to them to survive and escape the torture. The reason I liked this possible trailer was based on it focusing on both a horror and thriller genre. I believe the horror will involve individuals who like the concept of a film that includes, killings, injuries etc. The thriller genre will then involve those who love suspense, twists and those who want to know more about the storyline. Based on this, Trailer 3 would be my chosen trailer to film. Characters – 2 girls to play Jasmine and Alice. 1 character to play stalker. Possible film names – Paranoid Setting – Range of forest and park area's.
  • 6. Possible Trailer The drafting of my trailers all consist of horror and thriller genre's. I have chosen to let people around the same age as myself to choose which trailer I should create. This is based on the target audience and I believe they should have in put in which is the most interesting. I did not just want to use my own personal opinion, I wanted to included others. I have copied each description of the three possible trailers and asked around 30 students and family members to read each section and the choose one choice and write their preferred option. I then counted up the results to find that - Trailer 1 - 9 Trailer 2 - 5 Trailer 3 – 16 Based on these results I chose Trailer 3. Feedback I received explained they would find trailer 3 more interesting and they wanted to know more information about the stalker. Other feedback consisted of the participants liking the suspense and horror build up.