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DIARY ENTRIES
Laura and Beth
HYPOTHESIS
 We think that the diary entries will have changed over time.
 The modern diary entry will use more slang
 We think the modern text will have a range of complex sentences
with multiple clauses.
 We think the older text will use different spellings compared to
the modern text.
DIFFERENCES
 We think that modern and old entries will include differences such
as:
 Lexis choice
 The way it is presented
 The subject
 Grammar
SIMILARITIES
 Even though the pieces will be different there will be some
similarities these include:
 A narrative structure with descriptive language.
 Opinions of the writer.
 The use of first person.
 No non-fluency features
METHODOLOGY
 We used the internet to find our resources because we knew there was
going to be a wide range to chose from. We also used books from the library;
however did not find a suitable resource.
 We found that if we searched an explorers name with the words ‘diary
entry’ that it would be easy to find an example.
 We selected the text by Edmund Hillary to compare with Captain Cook’s
because it was similar in the fact that it was both about exploring and
adventure and also by a famous explorer.
LEXIS
CAPTAIN COOK TEXT (1775)
 This was created using
Concordle. We eliminated the
words ‘the, and, is, are, was, had,
it, a, with, for. By doing this is
just made it more precise.
 The words which were used
the most were more specialist
lexis for example ‘indignation’,
‘natives’ ‘canibals’.
LEXIS
HILLARY’S
 This was also made using
Concordle.
 The most used words are
specialist lexis again; this is a
similarity between the two texts.
 Some words which were used
a lot were ‘ridge’, ‘camp’,
‘summit’. These are specialist
lexis.
CAPTAIN COOK
HILLARY’S
DISCOURSE
Similarities
 Paragraphing
 Purpose
Differences
 Layout
 Graphology
GRAMMAR
 Captain Cook might of not had a great understanding of standard
grammar in 1775.
 Both texts use first person pronoun such as ‘I’ and ‘I've’
 Both texts use past tense
GRAMMAR
1.36
1.37
1.38
1.39
1.4
1.41
1.42
Cook's Hillary's
Number of syllables per word
Cook's
Hillary's
GRAMMAR
0
5
10
15
20
25
Cook's Hillary's
Average of words per sentence
Cook's
Hillary's
SPELLING
 Samuel Johnson’s ‘Dictionary of the English Language’ was first
published in 1755. Captain Cook’s text was written in 1775, so by this
time spelling and vocabulary was pretty much definite. However, there
are some examples in which Captain Cook has used spellings in
which have changed over time.
 ‘Scul’ = skull
 ‘Canibals’ = cannibals
GRAPHOLOGY
 Hillary’s uses an image which links to the diary entry. Hillary is
enable to use a image because he is using a blog meanwhile Captain
Cook is written and he had no way of getting images.
PRAGMATICS
 In Cook’s diary he may have used elevated and specialist lexis, such
as ‘avidity’ and ‘Natives’
 He also assumes that the readers will be familiar with the chosen
lexis.
 In Hillary’s diary he also uses special lexis, for example ‘summit’
 Hillary also include precise times to begin a new paragraph. For
example ‘at 4:00am’ and ‘At 6:30am’
CONCLUSION
 The findings supported our hypothesis as it showed spelling has
changed over the years.
 However our hypothesis was incorrect as the findings showed that
Cook’s diary included complex sentences as there was an average of 23.65
words per sentence, in comparison of 16.05 in Hillary’s diary.
 Hillary’s diary did not include as much slang as what we expected, we
think this is because he knew it would be published and wanted it to
sound professional.
EVALUATION
 We thought that finding the correct comparison text was difficult
because there is not many new up to date explorers who write diary’s
as they tend to write books.
 Once we had found the comparison text we found it easy to see
the similarities and differences between the two texts using the
quantitative resources.
BIBLIOGRAPHY
 http://mars.nasa.gov/blogs/index.cfm?FuseAction=ShowBlogs&BlogsID=2
83
 https://onlinemeuseumneilarmstrong1337.wordpress.com/neil-armstrong-
journal-entry/
 http://muskaanspsn.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/diary-entry-adventure-
camps.html
 http://www.aucklandmuseum.com/about-us/blog/2013/hillarys-everest-
diary-entry-for-29-may

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Diary Entries Investigation

  • 2. HYPOTHESIS  We think that the diary entries will have changed over time.  The modern diary entry will use more slang  We think the modern text will have a range of complex sentences with multiple clauses.  We think the older text will use different spellings compared to the modern text.
  • 3. DIFFERENCES  We think that modern and old entries will include differences such as:  Lexis choice  The way it is presented  The subject  Grammar
  • 4. SIMILARITIES  Even though the pieces will be different there will be some similarities these include:  A narrative structure with descriptive language.  Opinions of the writer.  The use of first person.  No non-fluency features
  • 5. METHODOLOGY  We used the internet to find our resources because we knew there was going to be a wide range to chose from. We also used books from the library; however did not find a suitable resource.  We found that if we searched an explorers name with the words ‘diary entry’ that it would be easy to find an example.  We selected the text by Edmund Hillary to compare with Captain Cook’s because it was similar in the fact that it was both about exploring and adventure and also by a famous explorer.
  • 6. LEXIS CAPTAIN COOK TEXT (1775)  This was created using Concordle. We eliminated the words ‘the, and, is, are, was, had, it, a, with, for. By doing this is just made it more precise.  The words which were used the most were more specialist lexis for example ‘indignation’, ‘natives’ ‘canibals’.
  • 7. LEXIS HILLARY’S  This was also made using Concordle.  The most used words are specialist lexis again; this is a similarity between the two texts.  Some words which were used a lot were ‘ridge’, ‘camp’, ‘summit’. These are specialist lexis.
  • 11. GRAMMAR  Captain Cook might of not had a great understanding of standard grammar in 1775.  Both texts use first person pronoun such as ‘I’ and ‘I've’  Both texts use past tense
  • 13. GRAMMAR 0 5 10 15 20 25 Cook's Hillary's Average of words per sentence Cook's Hillary's
  • 14. SPELLING  Samuel Johnson’s ‘Dictionary of the English Language’ was first published in 1755. Captain Cook’s text was written in 1775, so by this time spelling and vocabulary was pretty much definite. However, there are some examples in which Captain Cook has used spellings in which have changed over time.  ‘Scul’ = skull  ‘Canibals’ = cannibals
  • 15. GRAPHOLOGY  Hillary’s uses an image which links to the diary entry. Hillary is enable to use a image because he is using a blog meanwhile Captain Cook is written and he had no way of getting images.
  • 16. PRAGMATICS  In Cook’s diary he may have used elevated and specialist lexis, such as ‘avidity’ and ‘Natives’  He also assumes that the readers will be familiar with the chosen lexis.  In Hillary’s diary he also uses special lexis, for example ‘summit’  Hillary also include precise times to begin a new paragraph. For example ‘at 4:00am’ and ‘At 6:30am’
  • 17. CONCLUSION  The findings supported our hypothesis as it showed spelling has changed over the years.  However our hypothesis was incorrect as the findings showed that Cook’s diary included complex sentences as there was an average of 23.65 words per sentence, in comparison of 16.05 in Hillary’s diary.  Hillary’s diary did not include as much slang as what we expected, we think this is because he knew it would be published and wanted it to sound professional.
  • 18. EVALUATION  We thought that finding the correct comparison text was difficult because there is not many new up to date explorers who write diary’s as they tend to write books.  Once we had found the comparison text we found it easy to see the similarities and differences between the two texts using the quantitative resources.
  • 19. BIBLIOGRAPHY  http://mars.nasa.gov/blogs/index.cfm?FuseAction=ShowBlogs&BlogsID=2 83  https://onlinemeuseumneilarmstrong1337.wordpress.com/neil-armstrong- journal-entry/  http://muskaanspsn.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/diary-entry-adventure- camps.html  http://www.aucklandmuseum.com/about-us/blog/2013/hillarys-everest- diary-entry-for-29-may

Editor's Notes

  1. 2) We think this is because the language we use in everyday has become more colloquial. As technology has evolved diary entries have appeared on blogs, this also encourages the use of taboo and slang. 4) Because the education system has become much more stable and advanced
  2. There might be archaic language within the old entry which people will not understand today. One is more likely to be using technology and one is hand written. will be slightly different because they are written by different people. The sentences in the modern entry will be more complex
  3. As it is describing events that happen to the explorers As it is written by one person it will include all their thoughts and feelings As its written by them Even though they have errors they are able to correct them and plan what they are going to write before writing it
  4. We chose 5 words from each text. This graph shows the use of the word gentlemen has decreased over time, this suggests that in modern society people are more likely to use address terms such as ‘man’ or ‘men’ which show the formality has decreased. Cannibals was spelt wrong in Cook’s diary, however just before 1750, they did spell it like that shown in the graph. This shows the spelling has changed over time.
  5. We chose 5 words from each text. In 1820 the use of the word ‘north’ was common. However it has decreased since then, this could possibly be because technology has changed meaning the modern society now use satnav's rather than compasses. The modern society are not familiar with these direction terms as they are use very vaguely, for example ‘go forward’
  6. 1) Each entry will include separate paragraphs 2) They both share the purpose to explain and describe adventures, they are also used to entertain the reader. 3)Captain Cook’s is hand written which could suggest words are not interpreted correctly, meanwhile Hillary uses a blog layout, this means that the grammar could be different because of spell check. 4) Hillary’s diary uses graphology to match the narrative.
  7. 1) We can tell this because he uses incomplete sentences, at the end he doesn’t finish ‘Custom and worthy of imitation by every rational being-’. 3) This is because they are talking about something that has already happened
  8. As shown in the bar graph, Cook’s diary includes more syllables per word than Hillary’s. Which suggests he is more educated and elevated.
  9. This supports the idea of Cook being more educated as he includes more words per sentence in comparison to Hillary.
  10. An example of a misspelled word to us in 2015, is ‘skull’. In Captain Cook’s diary entry he has spelt it ‘scul’. Another example is ‘Canibals’ which should be spelled ‘cannibals’.
  11. 1) because he assumed that a big audience would read his entries. 3) as he assumes his diary will be published, which could suggest that he wanted to sound intelligent. 4) By using these precise times it creates a narrative structure