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My Senior High Journey Critique
1. Blessy Joy Osorio May 18, 2023
12-Platinum Critiquing a Blog
Creative Non-Fiction
“MY SENIOR HIGH SCHOOL JOURNEY”
1. How does the blog begin?
- The blog begin with the author introducing himself and gave some basic information
about him and started to share what he feels about his journey as a Senior High School
student.
2. What are the strengths and weaknesses of the text?
- The blog is connected with its title because the author focuses on his experiences and
memories in senior high school. But, I encountered a capitalization error in the text, the
writer capitalizes a word that does not require a capital letter and he does not capitalize
a word that requires one.
3. What is the impact of the blog on your belief or experience?
- The author and I had the same experiences in senior high school year. Like him, I met
people who are I didn't imagine I'd be friends with and improved myself to be a better
person than I ever thought I could be.
4. How effective is the author in presenting and supporting his arguments?
- The author presented and support his arguments by stating the struggles and
challenges he encountered in his senior year which he is proud to have overcome.
5. What is your general judgment or commentary on the article?
- The author needs to improve his grammar to avoid grammatical and capitalization
error. He also needs to learn words that are associated with what he wants to pertain to
avoid repitition of words in one paragraph. But overall, the blog still provide
informations, insights and experiences that can inspire readers.
2. Blessy Joy Osorio May 18, 2023
12-Platinum Critiquing a Blog
Creative Non-Fiction