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Copywriting for Recruiters
5 Fast Fixes
What do you
write?
What do you
write?
Job descriptions / Job
postings / Tweets / LinkedIn
updates / Sponsored posts /
Facebook posts / Instagram
captions / InMails / Cold
emails / Offer emails /
Negotiation emails /
Scheduling emails / Emails to
hiring managers / Decline
emails / Blog posts /
Employer brand content /
Careers website copy
Recruiting
= copywriting
Recruiting
= copywriting
Good copy gets someone to
do something
Recruiting
= copywriting
user curious about your
company
Good copy gets the career
site visitor to look at
openings
Good copy gets someone to
do something
Good copy gets the
potential applicant to apply
Good copy gets the
candidate to seriously
consider your company
Good copy gets the hiring
What writing
training do
you get?
What writing
training do
you get?
You are a
copywriter
➊ 
Why fix it
➋ 
Before & after
➌ 
How to try it
➍ 
Practice exercises
5 fast writing fixes
for recruiters
You’ll get a
workbook
➊
Write it like
you’d say it
➊
Write it like
you’d say it
WHY
I’d rather talk to a
✔ person ✘ organization
➊
Write it like
you’d say it
BEFORE
The ideal candidate excels in
a fast-paced work
environment.
➊
Write it like
you’d say it
AFTER
You love it when things
get busy.
➊
Write it like
you’d say it
BEFORE
If no current listings match
your qualifications, submit a
general application for
consideration on future
openings.
➊
Write it like
you’d say it
AFTER
Don’t see a job for you?
Apply anyway. We’ll
automatically consider you
for future openings.
➊
Write it like
you’d say it
TRY IT
Say your message out loud
Type what you say
➋
Talk about “you”
not “we”
➋
Talk about “you”
not “we”
WHY
♡ myself
➋
Talk about “you”
not “we”
BEFORE
Our team is top notch.
➋
Talk about “you”
not “we”
AFTER
You’ll join a top notch team.
➋
Talk about “you”
not “we”
BEFORE
We’re hiring a senior
software engineer at ACME
Tech and I noticed your
credentials match our
requirements …
➋
Talk about “you”
not “we”
AFTER
Your credentials are a strong
match for the senior
software engineer opening
here at ACME Tech …
➋
Talk about “you”
not “we”
TRY IT
Start sentences with “you”
5 you’s to 1 we
Say their name
➌
Turn features
into benefits
➌
Turn features
into benefits
WHAT
Feature = what the job offers
Benefit = how it improves
my life
➌
Turn features
into benefits
WHY
Features describe,
benefits sell
➌
Turn features
into benefits
BEFORE
With our remote work
program, you can work from
home 3 days a week.
➌
Turn features
into benefits
AFTER
Spend more time with your
family and less time in traffic,
3 days a week.
➌
Turn features
into benefits
BEFORE
Responsible for
outbound sales
➌
Turn features
into benefits
AFTER
Own outbound sales
performance
➌
Turn features
into benefits
TRY IT
Imagine the candidate saying
“so what?”
Focus on time, pain,
pleasure & identity
➍
Format for
breezy reading
➍
Format for
breezy reading
WHY
Easier to skim
= more likely I’ll read it
➍
Format for
breezy reading
BEFORE
At this time, we have filled
all openings for this position.
However, we are continuing
to actively hire and update
our listings. We encourage
you to apply for any
positions that interest you.
➍
Format for
breezy reading
AFTER
The position is now filled.
We’re still hiring lots, though.
Keep watching our website
for new listings.
Apply again!
➍
Format for
breezy reading
BEFORE
Qualifications include two
years experience in a talent
acquisition capacity,
familiarity with introductory
social media and
internet-based candidate
sourcing methodologies,
experience utilizing
enterprise-level applicant
tracking systems, and a
➍
Format for
breezy reading
AFTER
You’ve got 2+ years in talent
acquisition. Know the
sourcing basics. Can find
your way around an
enterprise ATS.
Important: You’re a team
player.
➍
Format for
breezy reading
TRY IT
Dumb it down!
Choose simple words
Write short sentences
Break up paragraphs
Aim for Grade 3 to 5
readability
➎
Make the
next step easy
➎
Make the
next step easy
WHY
Easier to do
= more likely I do it
➎
Make the
next step easy
INSTEAD OF
Apply now
➎
Make the
next step easy
WRITE THIS
Start your application
➎
Make the
next step easy
INSTEAD OF
Learn more about our
company.
➎
Make the
next step easy
WRITE THIS
87% of employees would
recommend working here to
friends.
Discover why.
➎
Make the
next step easy
TRY IT
What action do you want?
Can you:
Break out a first step?
Reduce the effort required?
Increase the appeal?
➊
Write it like you’d say it
➋
Talk about “you” not “we”
➌
Turn features into benefits
➍
Format for breezy reading
➎
Make the next step easy
5 fast writing fixes
for recruiters
Copywriting
for recruiters
Hands-on workshop
➊
Fast writing fixes
➋
Use structure to persuade
➌
Write JDs, emails & social
➍
Tackle problems & bad news
➎
Shortcuts & tools
recruitingsocial.com
christian@recruitingsocial.com

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