This document describes the progression of drafts for a magazine contents page. The first draft was plain but filled out more over subsequent drafts. Feedback on the second draft recommended removing 'pg.' from page numbers and shrinking a feature box to use space better. The final draft looked most realistic by using space well and linking a picture to text for clarity, while also adding a page number and logo.

7. This was my first draft for my
contents, as you can see
it’s a little plain, but as the
drafts goes on the space
fills up and the contents
look better.

8. In my second draft I was
told to get rid of the ‘pg.’
next to the numbers, so it
would look more realistic
and also make the feature
box smaller since it was
wasting a little space.

9. In this draft it started to look
more realistic as this was my
final draft, I used the space
a bit more and organized it
more too linking the picture
the text so it wasn't
confusing. I also added a
page number at the top
and my magazine logo to
make it look a little more
professional.