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    Class 44
    EWRT 1A
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    Agenda


Vocab     Exam 5
Discussion
    Rhetorical   Strategies
Monroe‟s     Motivated Sequence
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    Vocabulary Exam #5

     You have 20 minutes
     to take the quiz.

     May the odds be ever
     in your favor!
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             Rhetorical Strategies
Antithesis
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                             Antithesis
     “joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity”
      [paragraph 2]

     “the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a
      vast ocean of material prosperity” [3]

     “rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the
      sunlit path of racial justice” [6]

     “This sweltering summer of the Negro’s legitimate discontent
      will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom
      and equality.” [7]

     “sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into
      an oasis of freedom and justice.” [19]


Metaphor and simile
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               Metaphor                               Simile
       “battered by the storms of       "No, no, we are not satisfied, and
        persecution”                      we will not be satisfied until 'justice
                                          rolls down like waters, and
       “staggered by the winds of        righteousness like a mighty
        police brutality."                stream.'"

                                         the Emancipation Proclamation
       "The whirlwinds of revolt”
                                          came “as a joyous daybreak”
       “beautiful symphony of
        brotherhood.”

       “signing a promissory note”

       “bad check”


Examples
+ Specific Examples                      General Examples
   Mississippi, New York [paragraph     “slumsand ghettos of
    13]                                  our northern cities”
   Mississippi, Alabama, South          [paragraph 14]
    Carolina, Georgia, Louisiana [14]
                                         “the   South” [25]
   Georgia [18]
                                         “From
                                              every
   Mississippi [19]                     mountainside” [40]
   Alabama [22]
                                         “fromevery village and
   New Hampshire [32], New York         every hamlet” [41]
    [33], Pennsylvania [34], Colorado
    [35], California [36], Georgia
    [37], Tennessee [38], Mississippi
    [39]
                                                        Anaphora
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                       ANAPHORA
   “One hundred years later…” [paragraph 3]

   “Now is the time…” [paragraph 6]

   “We must…” [paragraph 8]

   “We can never (cannot) be satisfied…” [paragraph 13]

   “Go back to…” [paragraph 14]

   “I Have a Dream…” [paragraphs 16 through 24]

   “With this faith, …” [paragraph 26]

   “Let freedom ring (from) …” [paragraphs 27 through 41]
                                                   Repeated Words
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    Commonly Repeated Words

         freedom (20 times)

         we (30 times), our (17 times), you (8 times)

          nation (10 times), America (5 times), American (4
        times)

         justice (8 times) and injustice (3 times)

         dream (11 times)


        Parallelism
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                  Parallelism

     “Go back to Mississippi, go back to
      Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go
      back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana.”
     “from every village and every hamlet, from
      every state and every city”
     “allof God‟s children,” no matter if they are
      “black men and white men, Jews and
      Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics”
    Allusion
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                              ALLUSION
   “Five score years ago…” [paragraph 2] refers to Lincoln‟s famous Gettysburg
    Address speech which began “Four score and seven years ago…” This allusion
    is particularly poignant given that King was speaking in front of the Lincoln
    Memorial.

   “Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness” [and the rest of paragraph 4] is a
    reference to the United States Declaration of Independence.

   Numerous Biblical allusions provide the moral basis for King‟s arguments: “It
    came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.” [paragraph
    2] alludes to Psalms 30:5 “For his anger is but for a moment; his favor is for a
    lifetime. Weeping may linger for the night, but joy comes with the morning.“

   “Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of
    bitterness and hatred.” [paragraph 8] evokes Jeremiah 2:13 “for my people
    have committed two evils: they have forsaken me, the fountain of living
    water, and dug out cisterns for themselves, cracked cisterns that can hold no
    water.“
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Monroe‟s Motivated Sequence
     Steps one and two!
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                          The Attention Step

   In the attention step, speakers call attention to the situation.
    King, speaking from the steps of the Lincoln Memorial, calls attention to
    Lincoln‟s signing of the Emancipation Proclamation, the situation of the
    Negro today (“One hundred years later, the Negro still is not free.”), and
    the fact that the words of the Constitution and Declaration of
    Independence granting all people the unalienable rights of
    life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness have not been fulfilled.
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    The Need Step
   For the need step, speakers describe the
    difficulty, trouble, distress, crisis, emergency, or urgency. King
    says, “Instead of honoring this sacred obligation [what the Constitution
    and Declaration of Independence promise], America has given the Negro
    people a bad check, a check that has come back marked „insufficient
    funds.‟” And why have they come to Washington, D.C.? — to “remind
    America of the fierce urgency of now.”
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                         Homework

     Post    #48: Refine and develop the "Attention
        step" in your speech. Use the techniques we
        practiced in class to make it grab the readers
        attention. Introduce your problem!
     Post    #49: Refine and develop the "Need step"
        in your speech. Describe the
        difficulty, trouble, distress, crisis, emergency, or
        urgency. (Its Seriousness)
       Speeches begin Wednesday, December 5th.
        Everyone should be prepared to go first.

Class 44

  • 1.
    + Class 44 EWRT 1A
  • 2.
    + Agenda Vocab Exam 5 Discussion Rhetorical Strategies Monroe‟s Motivated Sequence
  • 3.
    + Vocabulary Exam #5  You have 20 minutes to take the quiz.  May the odds be ever in your favor!
  • 4.
    + Rhetorical Strategies Antithesis
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    + Antithesis  “joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity” [paragraph 2]  “the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity” [3]  “rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice” [6]  “This sweltering summer of the Negro’s legitimate discontent will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom and equality.” [7]  “sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.” [19] Metaphor and simile
  • 6.
    + Metaphor Simile  “battered by the storms of  "No, no, we are not satisfied, and persecution” we will not be satisfied until 'justice rolls down like waters, and  “staggered by the winds of righteousness like a mighty police brutality." stream.'"  the Emancipation Proclamation  "The whirlwinds of revolt” came “as a joyous daybreak”  “beautiful symphony of brotherhood.”  “signing a promissory note”  “bad check” Examples
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    + Specific Examples General Examples  Mississippi, New York [paragraph  “slumsand ghettos of 13] our northern cities”  Mississippi, Alabama, South [paragraph 14] Carolina, Georgia, Louisiana [14]  “the South” [25]  Georgia [18]  “From every  Mississippi [19] mountainside” [40]  Alabama [22]  “fromevery village and  New Hampshire [32], New York every hamlet” [41] [33], Pennsylvania [34], Colorado [35], California [36], Georgia [37], Tennessee [38], Mississippi [39] Anaphora
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    + ANAPHORA  “One hundred years later…” [paragraph 3]  “Now is the time…” [paragraph 6]  “We must…” [paragraph 8]  “We can never (cannot) be satisfied…” [paragraph 13]  “Go back to…” [paragraph 14]  “I Have a Dream…” [paragraphs 16 through 24]  “With this faith, …” [paragraph 26]  “Let freedom ring (from) …” [paragraphs 27 through 41] Repeated Words
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    + Commonly Repeated Words  freedom (20 times)  we (30 times), our (17 times), you (8 times)  nation (10 times), America (5 times), American (4 times)  justice (8 times) and injustice (3 times)  dream (11 times) Parallelism
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    + Parallelism  “Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana.”  “from every village and every hamlet, from every state and every city”  “allof God‟s children,” no matter if they are “black men and white men, Jews and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics” Allusion
  • 11.
    + ALLUSION  “Five score years ago…” [paragraph 2] refers to Lincoln‟s famous Gettysburg Address speech which began “Four score and seven years ago…” This allusion is particularly poignant given that King was speaking in front of the Lincoln Memorial.  “Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness” [and the rest of paragraph 4] is a reference to the United States Declaration of Independence.  Numerous Biblical allusions provide the moral basis for King‟s arguments: “It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.” [paragraph 2] alludes to Psalms 30:5 “For his anger is but for a moment; his favor is for a lifetime. Weeping may linger for the night, but joy comes with the morning.“  “Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred.” [paragraph 8] evokes Jeremiah 2:13 “for my people have committed two evils: they have forsaken me, the fountain of living water, and dug out cisterns for themselves, cracked cisterns that can hold no water.“
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  • 13.
    + The Attention Step  In the attention step, speakers call attention to the situation. King, speaking from the steps of the Lincoln Memorial, calls attention to Lincoln‟s signing of the Emancipation Proclamation, the situation of the Negro today (“One hundred years later, the Negro still is not free.”), and the fact that the words of the Constitution and Declaration of Independence granting all people the unalienable rights of life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness have not been fulfilled.
  • 14.
    + The Need Step  For the need step, speakers describe the difficulty, trouble, distress, crisis, emergency, or urgency. King says, “Instead of honoring this sacred obligation [what the Constitution and Declaration of Independence promise], America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check that has come back marked „insufficient funds.‟” And why have they come to Washington, D.C.? — to “remind America of the fierce urgency of now.”
  • 15.
    + Homework  Post #48: Refine and develop the "Attention step" in your speech. Use the techniques we practiced in class to make it grab the readers attention. Introduce your problem!  Post #49: Refine and develop the "Need step" in your speech. Describe the difficulty, trouble, distress, crisis, emergency, or urgency. (Its Seriousness)  Speeches begin Wednesday, December 5th. Everyone should be prepared to go first.