This is what I made for giving a pitch to venture capitalists about a business model I developed in 2009. A couple of intuitive pictures, figures and messages. I'm sure it will be enjoyable.

1. Writing and Speaking
Breakthrough
Motivation Market analysis
Problem Competitors
Solution Underlying magic
Business model Next step
Menlo Innovations
Tommy Kim
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2. Mantra
The purpose of my life is
TO EXPRESS MY INNER BEING
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3. Problems
1. Linguistic logic differences
2. Korean accent
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4. How to get over?
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5. Business Model
Student Tutor
Service
Provider
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6. Student’s Interface
Sunghee Park : Choose tutor to revise your writing
College : University of Pennsylvania
Major : Political Science, BA
Editing History : 21 papers | view feedback
Customers Rating :
Tuition Fee : $5 / paper
College : University of Michigan, Ann Arbor
Major : Electrical Engineering, BSE
Editing History : 56 papers | view feedback
Customers Rating :
Available Time : 10-12p.m., Mon. to Fri.
Tuition Fee : $8 / paper
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7. Student’s Interface
Sunghee Park : Apply in the market
Topic : Internship in Menlo Innovations
Relevant Tags : internship, computer, international
Status : Waiting for revising / edit status
Posting Time : 5 minutes ago, 02/11/2009
Due time : 9 a.m., Tuesday, February
Number of pages : 2 pages
Edit your posting
Topic : Birthday party with house mates
Status : Revised by Michael Marcantonio, 02/09/2009
Topic : Comparison between iPod and iPhone
Status : Revised by Matt Murvey, 02/07/2009
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8. Tutor’s Interface
Rob Cerato : Revise for your student
Original Version Working Version
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9. Tutor’s Interface
Rob Cerato : Upload your video clip
Topic : Internship in Menlo Innovations
Rob Cerato
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University of Michigan
Financial Engineering, BA
History : 56 papers
Rating :
Tuition Fee : $8 / paper
Click here to copy the address of this video clip
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10. Revenue Mechanism
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11. Revenue Mechanism
40% 60%
Sunghee Rob
Service
Provider
$2/paper $3/paper * 3p = $9/hour
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12. 1, 2, 3
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13. 1, 2, 3
st ranked country
1
in spending excessive
money on education
* OECD Report for Education in Korea
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14. 1, 2, 3
other education
1/ of total
2
46% English education
54% education expenses
on English
** National Statistic Office in Korea
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15. 1, 2, 3
120,000
110,083
103,394
90,000
83,728 Biggest foreign
60,000
3
students in
consecutive years
30,000
2006 0
2007
2008
*** U.S. Immigration and Customs Enforcement
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16. Targets
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17. Targets
Proficiency
Exam
Practical Pure
Purpose desire
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18. Competitors
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19. Chung Dam Institute
• Targets youth education
• Advanced learning model
• Systematic and organized
• Expensive tuition
• Limited access
• Unproven tutors
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20. Telephone Conversation
• Call from native speaker
• Conversation for 10 min
• Video clips, MP3 files
• Small size
• No star player
• Expensive (i.e. $150/month )
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21. Underlying Magic
Accent Reduction Institute
Creditability
• Quality Control
• Guide line for Tutors
• Video lectures for Students
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22. Next Step
Set a budget and Collect samples & Tailor program to
resources feedback the specific needs
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