This cover letter lacks focus and professionalism. It uses an outdated salutation of "Madam or Sir" and focuses too much on the applicant's background and experiences using "I" repeatedly rather than connecting their qualifications to the opportunity. The inclusion of bullet points and lack of a heading or conclusion also make it a poor cover letter that provides little added value over the attached resume.
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How to write a personal statement... that’s not boring, cheesy, clichéd, generic, overwrought, or underwritten. A personal statement that introduces the unique, smart, mature, humble, ready-for-grad-school, ready-for-the-world YOU!
A persuasive speech is a speech that is given with the intention of convincing the audience to believe or do something.
The aim of a persuasive speech is to inform, educate and convince or motivate an audience to do something. You are essentially trying to sway the audience to adopt your own viewpoint.
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How to Write a Personal Statement for Grad SchoolMT Calhoon
How to write a personal statement... that’s not boring, cheesy, clichéd, generic, overwrought, or underwritten. A personal statement that introduces the unique, smart, mature, humble, ready-for-grad-school, ready-for-the-world YOU!
A persuasive speech is a speech that is given with the intention of convincing the audience to believe or do something.
The aim of a persuasive speech is to inform, educate and convince or motivate an audience to do something. You are essentially trying to sway the audience to adopt your own viewpoint.
Hello! Kindly click like button if the article/presentation is helpful. Thank you :)
I've been thinking about design in the broad sense. Design as "plan[ning] for something new to happen," per Nigel Cross's 2011 book, and as "creat[ing] possibilities," per Klaus Krippendorff's 2007 paper.
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Pronoun Agreement - Number, Person, & Special CircumstancesAudrey Lynn
This Power Point gives examples of how to use pronouns in sentences. The main focus is pronoun number and person. It also gives examples of ambiguous/vague antecedents, collective nouns, and indefinite pronouns.
I've been thinking about design in the broad sense. Design as "plan[ning] for something new to happen," per Nigel Cross's 2011 book, and as "creat[ing] possibilities," per Klaus Krippendorff's 2007 paper.
So when I recently re-watched An Ecology of Mind, Nora Bateson’s documentary film about her father, I focused on Gregory Bateson as a designer. These are my slides for a talk with Jeff Bloom’s class on An Ecology of Mind, in the College of Education at Northern Arizona University.
Easiest Way to Write a Thesis StatementCustomWriting
This useful and detailed guide will help you create great thesis statements easily and without any trouble at all!
Great tips created by our academic professionals with over 6 years of experience.
Looking for more academic help?
Check out our website: www.custom-writing.org
Today, let's take a look at body paragraphs and three of the elements that should be within each body paragraph. To write strong body paragraphs, you need to make sure they are structured clearly and organized well.
Pronoun Agreement - Number, Person, & Special CircumstancesAudrey Lynn
This Power Point gives examples of how to use pronouns in sentences. The main focus is pronoun number and person. It also gives examples of ambiguous/vague antecedents, collective nouns, and indefinite pronouns.
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Bad Cover Letter Example
1. Good example of a really
BAD Cover Letter.
Hello Madam or Sir,
My name is Badtu Dabon. Since you are reading this, I want to thank you for the
opportunity to introduce myself and see how well I fit the Marketing and Sales Leadership
Training Internship.
I used to be an Equity Analyst with experience on both the Buy and Sell sides working with
equity, fixed income and option products. Some of my responsibilities were:
Cash Flow, Income Statement and Balance Sheet analysis
Construction of Valuation and Profit/ Loss models and impact analysis
Programming of asset allocation models containing equity, fixed income and options
Trade capture, verification and fail review in order to minimize Firm exposure
Now I am a first year MBA student at Boston University concentrating on Finance with a
focus in Capital Markets. This program at boston University, which contains a specialized
curriculum in Capital Markets, is allowing me to leverage not only my undergraduate
education where I had a dual concentration in Finance and Accounting but also my prior
work experiences. I currently hold Series 7, 63 and 65 securities licenses and I am studying
for the CFA level 1 exam.
Most recently I worked for Morgan Stanley where I was the primary liaison on a new Bond
trading software program linking the inventories of over 70 Brokers and Dealers. The
project allowed me to work directly with internal and external Traders, Portfolio Managers
and technology teams. Prior to that I was in Goldman Sachs’ Analyst Program where I
worked on their Institutional Equities trading desk in a middle office role. Working with
both Trading and Sales I ensured proper post-trade positions, prices and confirmations.
I thrive in a fast paced, results driven environment; I bring a passion for Marketing and Sales
along with a hands on atention to detail. I am looking to apply my analytical and quantitative
skills, along with my commitment to constant improvement to a Sales and Trading
internship where I can immediately contribute and personally continue to grow
professionally.
I appreciate the time you will take to review my résumé, and hope you find, as I do, that I
have excellent skills and background.
All the best
No heading
Outdated salutation
I, I, I, I, I, I…I
Badtu Dabon Bullet points in a traditional
cover letter
Little to no added value over
the (attached) résumé
Typos
Unprofessional ending