- Audience members provided feedback on ways to improve the plot of a horror film involving a character named Chase who is obsessed with Penelope. Suggestions included Penelope faking her feelings for Chase to create more suspense, Chase torturing Penelope, and revealing hints about Chase's true identity that scare Penelope away from him. - Based on this feedback, the improved plot has Chase move to a new school where he immediately falls for Penelope. Though she finds him weird and possessive, Penelope invites Chase to a sleepover with her friends. At the sleepover, Chase reveals his psychotic nature by killing Penelope's friends, trapping her in her home to torture

2. IMPROVEMENTS/OPINIONS
• ONE OF THE IMPROVEMENTS WE RECEIVED FROM THE AUDIENCE WOULD BE FOR PENELOPE TO FAKE HER FEELINGS
FOR CHASE. THIS MEANS THAT SHE SHOULD FOOL THE AUDIENCE AS WELL AS THE YOUNG BOY INTO BELIEVING SHE'S
IN LOVE AND THEN SUDDENLY ESCAPE CAUSING MORE SUSPENSE AND HORROR FOR THE AUDIENCE.
• WE WERE ALSO ASKED A QUESTION WHICH WAS WHAT DOES HE DO WITH HER? IN OUR ORIGINAL IDEA THE ANSWER
IS NOTHING AS HE ONLY MANIPULATES HER EMOTIONALLY, HOWEVER, NO TORTURE AND PAIN IN INFLICTED,
HOWEVER, FROM THIS QUESTION WE MAY ADD CHASE TORTURING PENELOPE.
• ONE OF THE AUDIENCE MEMBERS ALSO ASKED US WHAT THE AIM AND PURPOSE WAS FOR CHASE AND WHY HE WAS
DOING ALL THIS. THE ANSWER TO THIS QUESTION IS THAT HE WAS DOING THIS FOR LOVE AS HE STRONGLY BELIEVED
THAT PENELOPE HAD AND COULD ONLY BE HIS. IN HIS MIND HE CAN SEE A FUTURE WITH HER WHICH HE HAS A
MISSION TO MAKE A REALITY AND THIS IS SUPPORTED BY HIS MENTAL CONDITION.

3. • ONE AUDIENCE MEMBER BROUGHT UP THE IDEA OF TIME AND THE FEAR WHICH IS IMPLICATED TO THE
AUDIENCE KNOWING THAT THERE IS NO ESCAPE FOR AN INNOCENT CHARACTER. THIS WILL DEFINITELY BE
INCLUDED IN OUR NEW PLOT AS WE HAVE DECIDED THAT SHE IS NOW GOING TO BE HELD CAPTIVE INSTEAD OF
HER WANTING TO FOLLOW THE KILLER. THIS NOW WILL CREATE TENSION BETWEEN THE AUDIENCE AS HER
FATE IS UNKNOWN.
• THE LAST IDEA WE RECEIVED FOR OUR PLOT WOULD BE TO ADD HINTS THROUGH OUT THE FILM WHICH
SLOWLY BEGINS TO REVEAL CHASE’ REAL IDENTITY WHICH SCARES PENELOPE AWAY FROM HIM AS SHE WAS
BEGINNING TO FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM. THIS THEN LEADS TO CHASE HAVING TO FORCE PENELOPE INTO DOING
THINGS SHE DOES NOT WANT TO.

4. IMPROVED PLOT
• CHASE MOVES TO A NEW SCHOOL BECAUSE OF HIS TROUBLED BACKGROUND HE HOPES FOR A NEW START MEETING
NEW PEOPLE. HE IMMEDIATELY FALLS IN LOVE WITH PENELOPE AND PENELOPE ALSO ACKNOWLEDGES HIM. HE
SLOWLY BECOMES ACCEPTED IN THEIR FRIENDSHIP GROUP. HE BEGINS TO BOND WITH PENELOPE, HOWEVER, SHE
IMMEDIATELY SEES CHASE ACTING WEIRD AND CONCERNING AS HE USES POSSESSIVE TERMS TO REFER TO HER AS
WELL AS DEMONSTRATING TO THE GROUP THAT HE BELIEVES HE IS A DOMINATING PERSON. THIS IMMEDIATELY
BEGINS TO CONCERN PENELOPE, HOWEVER, SHE DOES NOT CONSULT HER FRIENDS AND KEEPS IT TO HERSELF. THEY
THEN HAVE A SLEEPOVER AT PENELOPE’S HOUSE . SHE INVITES HER USUAL 3 FRIENDS AND ALTHOUGH WITH DOUBT
AND SUSPICION SHE IS CONVINCED BY HER FRIENDS TO INVITE CHASE. ONCE AT THE SLEEPOVER CHASE THEN
DECIDES TO REVEAL HIS INNER PSYCHO KILLING EACH ONE OF PENELOPE'S FRIENDS LEAVING HER TILL LAST
TRAPPED IN HER OWN HOUSE WITH A MANIAC. THE FILM ENDS WITH PENELOPE BEING TORTURED AND DRAINED
AND BEING PHYSICALLY UNABLE TO COPE ALTHOUGH CHASE BELIEVES HE STILL CAN HAVE A FUTURE WITH HER.