The new footage adds context and clarity to the overall narrative of the video. Flashback scenes are used effectively to advance the story. The editing, pace, and use of techniques like fades and slow motion fit well with the song. However, a shot of the character's eyes is unnecessary and does not further the plot or lyrics. Some color correction could help link shots together and provide continuity for a clearer narrative, such as keeping internal scenes similarly lit and distinguishing flashbacks.

2.  The new footage adds more depth to
the video and the overall narrative is
much clearer now.
 The flashback style scenes are effective
and help the narrative to flow.
 The pace of the video and editing
accurately fits the pace of the song (via
the use of fades, slow motion, long takes
etc.)

3.  The shot of Zoe’s eyes is unnecessary and
does not add anything to the storyline, or
even link to the lyrics.
 Some of the shots need the colours
correcting – this would link the shots together
and give the music video continuity and a
clear narrative. For example the internal
shots should have similar colours and lighting,
and the flashback scenes should be different
to ensure there is no confusion for the
audience.