The document provides feedback from test audiences on shots from a draft film. It lists 7 criticisms of various shots, with issues including poor framing, characters not being fully in frame, dialogue being unclear, lack of shot variation, shaky camera work from not using a tripod, and a continuity error in an point-of-view shot. The feedback aims to improve clarity, visual composition, audio quality, and continuity between shots.

1. Assignment 29
Draft 1
Audience
feedback
Tom Glasgow

2. Criticism 1
 This shot here when shown to our target
audience there have been several
complaints that this shot is not clear when
introducing the characters but sets the
scene well.

3. Criticism 2
 There is a problem with this shot here as
the framing is poor and you cannot show
our whole body.

4. Criticism 3
 There is another criticism this shot here is
not really clear that this is the antagonists
point of view also the dialogue from joey
you cannot here due to the distance that
the camera is away from him and a few
sound errors caused by the wind.

5. Criticism 4
 This part is all filmed in one shot, there's no
shot variation. Also framing again is an
issue which occurs through out this draft.

6. Criticism 5
 This shot here there is no use of a tripod so
therefore the shot is shakey and the
quality is reduced.

7. Criticism 6
 Again framing is poor here and quality is
poor this can only be improved by re-
shooting this shot again

8. Criticism 7
 This shot here again is poor quality and
there is a huge continuity error where the
point of view shot jumps forward while
walking.