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Art Criticism A Whole Language Approach To Art
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For centuries societies have understood the
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in classical literature from which they drew inspiration for
paintings and sculptures. The document argues that the obvious
meeting place for the two disciplines of art and language is the
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language skills. In fc,ur sections this document: (1) reviews the
tenets of whole language philosophy; (2) argues that art is a whole
language that holds the same tenets as whole language; (3) explains
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Art Criticism:
A Whole Language Approach to Art
by Rita A. Niblack
For centuries societies have understood the importance of art in
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relationship to other disciplines. Many of the greatest artists were also great
writers and poets. (Michelangelo is a good example.) Many artists were
extremely well educated and used their extensive classical literary backgrounds
as the source of subject matter and the inspiration for their paintings and
sculptures. (Rubens, Rembrandt, Turner and even Picasso demonstrate this.)
Art and language are inherently related.
To me, an obvious meeting place of the two disciplines of art and language
is the field of art criticism. Art criticism is talking and writing about art.
Here is a place where our students can do art in a whole language way.
Furthermore, art criticism is a necessary part of art instruction, and provides a
vehicle for the classroom teacher who may not feel adequately trained to teach
art.
My talk today has four parts. First, I would like to review the tenets of
whole language philosophy. Next, I want to convince you of the fact that art is a
whole language and therefore holds the same tenets that whole language does.
Third, I would like to explain what art criticism as a system, or model to talk
about art in a whole !anguage way. Finally, we'll try out those ideas by actually
doing some art criticism together.
i. What is the whole language philosophy?
Whole language is a philosophy which stresses the following ideas about
language:
A. The wholP comes before the partsi.e. whole meaning is more
important than the individual components (i.e. individual sentences,
phrases, etc.).
B. Oral and written language are emphasized. One learns to speak and
to write by listening and by reading. One learns to read by being
read to and by writing.
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3. C. Tasks the students are given should be authentic, rather than
isolated exercises. By authentic we mean that it is relevant to the
students' lives. Children write books about themselves, their
families, events with which they are familiar. Students learn to
spell words that are in the literature they read, or are necessary to
the writing they do. Long lists of verbs to conjugate, nouns to make
plural, or sentences to punctuate correctly, of themselves don't
have any relevance to the student.
D. The goal of whole language is that all children become skilled
learners of language. Language includes writing and reading.
E. .Language skills are acquired in the process of using language, not in
an isolated way (i.e. exercises which you look for subjects, nouns,
etc.)
F. Words have meaning in context of literature, rather than on an
isolated word list.
G. Writers create meaning in the process of writing.
11. How is art connected to language?
A. Art language.
Art has a meaningful and powerful message to communicate. The
artist uses an artwork as a vehicle for communication. Just as a writer
uses the written words or a storyteller uses oral words to communicate a
message, the artist uses brushstrokes, colors, lines, shapes, composition
to convey his or her message. The vehicle is different, but the process is
the same. In writing or reading, details and description in the form of
words lead the reader to the meaning of the story. In an artwork details
and visual description lead the viewer to discover the meaning of the
artist. Whether a writer, a storyteller or an artist, the goal is the same--
to communicate something to the audience.
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B. Art is the gsrliest form of language.
Art is the most ancient of recorded languages. Before people
wrote letters and words they wrote pictures which describe meaning.
These pictures were perceived without grammar or correct spelling but as
ideas.
Writing developed from pictures. Egyptian hieroglyphics are
the best example of this. Sumerian cuneiform and even Japanese
calligraphy seem to be based on some earlier pictures which were stylized
and simplified to what we call letters.
C. Art is the wholest language.
Today we still use pictures to communicate whole
meanings. I don't know how to speak or understand very much German, so
when I was in Germany in a train station and I needed to find information
about my train, I did it by drawing a picturenot of nouns and verbs and
adjectives with conjunctions, but with a picture, which conveyed my
meaning in one intuitive grasp. Whole language philosophy suggests that
this is the way people should learn to read. Art has always been used in
this way.
Because art is usually taken in, in one view, it conveys
meaning wholly, not in parts. It is nearly impossible to consider the parts
without the whole. Whole language instructors would like students to
read first as a whole, then through the parts. 'Reading' artworks Ls_the
first stage of reading. A child reads the story by looking at the pictures
before he or she ever knows how to decode the letters to make words.
D. Artworks can be understood on a variety of levels.
Just as a reader can gain more meaning, by delving deeper
into the parts, by discussing, by analyzing, so, too, with artworks.
Their message can be perceived on deeper and deeper levels by delving
into the parts of the artwork, analyzing them, and relating them to the
whole.
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E. Art making and talking about art fit all of the criteria
that we've just discussed about whole language.
A. The whole comes before the parts--i.e. whole meaning is more
important than the individual components.
We've already said that artworks are conceived of and perceived as a
whole unit, before they are viewed in parts.
B. Oral and written language are emphasized.
We as art educators have long believed that reading artworks and making
artworks go hand in hand. That is why 'lists visit galleries and view each
others' works--to see what others have done as stimulation for their own
imaginations. As ability in interpreting artworks grows, so does ability in art
making. Just as speaking and hearing language are a boost to reading and
writing language.
C. Tasks should be authentic or relevant, rather than:isolated exercises.
There is no reason for students to learn how to make brush strokes or
lines or blend colors, except to make art. Learnhg how to do the components of
art is almost always done in the context of making an artwork--not as an
isolated incident. Artwo;ks are by nature meant to describe the lives or society
of the person who makes them. Artworks are made to express something of the
artist, therefore are always relevant to the artist.
D. Whole language has as its goal that jj children become skilled learners
of language.
Art certainly has as its goal that all children become skilled users of the
language of art. This means a proficiency in speaking the language (making art)
and in reading the language (understanding and interpreting artworks).
E. Language skills are acquired in the process of using language, not in an
isolated way.
We, as artists, don't learn how to talk about artworks, except in front of
an artwork. We learn how to say what needs to be said, to understand what
needs to be understood about a work in front of it. We also learn how to make
art in the process of making it, not outside of that context. That is why the
next tenet also makes sense to artists.
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F. Words have meaning in context, as opposed to on an isolated word list.
Brush strokes, lines, colors, shapes don't have meaning outside of the
context of the artwork. A stroke of green may be a part of a tree, or a young
girl's dress, or a shadow down the center of a face (if you're Matisse). By itself,
it means nothing.
G. Writers create meaning in the process of writing.
One of the things that I think is the most exciting about art, is the fact
that art happens in process. Even artworks that are planned ahead of time, still
happen in process. Because we as artists are trained to watch for the unusual
and to be stimulated as we make art. We are always ready to alter or to change,
when the unexpected brush stroke gives us a new idea or a new way of looking
at our work. The whole meaning may change, in process. Isn't that what whole
language philosophy says about writing-- that the meaning happens in the midst
of making it?
I hope by now I have convinced you that art is whole language. If what I am
saying is true, the next step is to explain how to unite the two disciplines in
the exercise of art criticism.
Ill. What is art criticism?
A. According to Feldman "Art criticism is talk--spoken or
written about art." (I.e. it L language.) Art criticism begins
with viewing an artwork (either a famous work from history or
a work by a student). Students are encouraged to talk about
the artwork based on what they see in it. In the process of
talking the viewer reads and interprets the artwork.
B. It is a guided way to grasp the meaning and the message of
the artwork. While art criticism can be very spontaneous, it is
most effective if one applies a method. Students can grasp the
message of the artwork more thoroughly and at deeper levels
if one progresses in a logical sequence through the details of
the artwork. (In reading a story we encourage a guided
approach as well. One reads for meaning, but the nuances of
meaning are teased out as one deciphers the meaning of
individual words and their relationships.)
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C. It is part of a larger approach to art --Discipline Based Art
Education (DBAE). This is the approach developed by the Getty
Foundation which advocates that art instruction must include
art history, art making, art criticism, and aesthetics.
Some mode!s for art criticism
There ara tinny models which are given to you on your handout.
contain some way of examining the artwork (describing
what is seen) and of interpreting the artwork (telling what it
means). Other aspects which are often included are evaluation
of the artwork (assessing its success as an artwork), and
examining the historical context of the work.
The Feldman model for art criticism is the best known.
It begins with a description of the artwork. ("There is a red
circle at the bottom of the picture.") Then an analysis of the
relationships of the parts. ("The red circle seems to be closer
to the viewer because it is a warmer color, because it is
lower down in the picture.") Next Feldman suggests that we
interpret the artwork. ("The red circle is a red ball being
bounced by a girl, who is walking along the beach at night. The
girl is alone and she is lonely. The single red ball shows her
isolation from other people.') Finally, there is judgment of
the work. ("I like it because of the great sense of depth." "I
didn't like the color combinations that were used.")
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On your handout you have an inverted triangle which
exemplifies how one st.Ald read according to whole language
philosophy. One starts with the whole-- the story, then perceives
in terms of smaller and smaller parts, i.e. the sentence, the words,
the letters. The order is from highest to lowest or from largest to
smallest part. The fact that the triangle is inverted indicates that
in this model the most important, or largest aspect is not only
first, but pervades or overshadows the other parts. The main part
of the story --the meaning--overshadows and covers all the other
aspects of reading.
I have created an art criticism model to correspond with the
whole language reading diagram. In this model, the meaning, the
message or the interpretation of the artwork is the whole which
overshadows the parts. In this case, the parts are the context of
the work (when was it made, by whom, for what reason), the
relationship of the parts (the composition, the relationship of the
colors, brushwork, lines, shapes) and the smallest part which is
descriptive (what colors are there, what kinds of brushstrokes,
lines, etc.) I want you to notice that in this model the meaning or
interpretation overshadows all else that the viewer observes. In
both language and in art, the meaning is the overriding concern.
WHOLE LANGUAGE READING MODEL ART CRITICISM 'READING' MODEL
story
sentence
word
reaction-interpretation meaning
relationship of parts
description of objects
letter doqcription of individuat formal
characteristics
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Interpretation is the most important part of art criticism.
It is the part which makes the artWork relevant to the
student. It is the purpose of the artwork (i.e. to communicate
a message). It is the part of the work that give relevance,
that makes it authentic. It is the reason for the artwork. If
the reason for making art is to communicate a visual
message, then the importance of the work lies in the reading
and receiving of that message. Just as the value of the book
is in reading it and comprehending the meaning, not in the
way it decorates your desk or your bookshelf.
Terry Barrett, from Ohio State has compiled a list of
guidelines for interpretation. I would like to draw from that
list to help you to understand more what interpretation is.
1. Artworks demand interpretation. We've already said that
that is the purpose for which the artwork is made.
2. Responsible interpretations draw on the strengths of the
work, not the weaknesses. It's not fair to look at works of
art to criticize only.
3. Interpretations are arguments, they need to entail
premises which lead to conclusions. They are also
persuasive. If I interpret an artwork, I am trying to convince
those I am speaking with of my view of the artwork.
4. No single interpretation is exhaustive of the meaning.
This means that every student in the class may have a
different interpretation of the work you are viewing, yet
each have a convincing nature to the interpretation. That is
because we each respond to an artwork from our own
background. That is the beauty of art and literature. It has
meaning for each and every person in his or her own way. It
is unique for each individual. It is one size fits all. Also,
interpretations are not right or wrong, but more or less
'enlightening', 'original', 'insightful', etc.
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10. 5. Good interpretations tell more about the. artwork than the
viewer. While our interpretations have to do with ourselves,
they are ground in the work of art. The basis of a good
interpretation is the work of art itself. An interpretation is
less convincing, the less it is connected to the artwork.
6. Good interpretations have coherence, correspondence and
inclusiveness. By coherence we mean that it holds together,
it doesn't contradict itself. By correspondence--it matches
the details of the artwork. By inclusiveness we mean that all
the major aspects of the artwork are dealt with by the
interpreter.
7. Interpretations have to do with feelings, intuitions, and
thoughts.
8. An interpretation need not match the artist's intent for
the artwork. The artist did have some intent, but the
responsibility for the interpretation is on the critic. Once
again this is the beauty of artworks. Great artworks are not
bound by time but have meaning for the time they were
created and for all the times that they are viewed in.
Examining the Context of the Artwork
The second level of art criticism is the context of the work.
This is an examination of the history behind the work. It
might entail learning about the life of the artist who made it.
It might entail an understanding of the time era and culture
of the work. It might involve discovery of the purpose of the
artwork, or the materials used to make it. For instance,
understanding the meaning of an icon painting of Mary and
Jesus from 10th century Byzantium would certainly be
enhanced by knowing the reverence with which this sacred
image was treated, the miraculous stories attributed to it,
the belief in it as a 'true portrait' of those portrayed.
Examining the context of the artwork probably involves
research, but it might be drawn from the background of the
students. Their knowledge of American history might aid in
the interpretation of Trumbull's "Signing of the Declaration
of Independence." An understanding of the context should
enlarge and expand the interpretation.
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Examining the Relationship of the Parts of the Artwork
The artwork is made up of many small parts, but it is the way
they relate to each other that supports the meaning of the
work. If the colors used are harsh, or if they contrast each
other, this creates a certain mood in the picture. The
painting that makes use of black or brown to tone down the
colors may have a dull or a gloomy look to it. The artwork
that has a composition that encircles the parts of the picture
may be leading the viewer to look at certain things. The
relationship of objects in regards to size or placement on the
picture is what creates a sense of depth in an artwork. These
relationships give the viewer more information and therefore
add to the understanding that he or she has as to what the
picture is about.
Principles which are seen in relationships include structure,
space and rhythm.
Description of the Artwork
Finally one must examine the components of the artwork.
What kind of brushstrokes are used? Are they quick,
spontaneous, fluffy? This might give a sense of energy to the
picture. Are they concealed, smooth, rigid? They might give
the artwork stability. Are the lines horizontal? Then it is a
restful picture. Are they long and curvy? The sense of grace
might be given by them. The smallest part of the artwork,
are the building blocks which are put together to make up the
artwork. They create the meaning.
Elements in an artwork include line, shape, form, color, light,
texture, pattern.
A Word about Judgment of Artwor!:s and Relevance
Artworks may be judged by the viewer. Each of us has his or
her own opinion of what one likes or dislikes. By the time the
process of interpreting is finished, the viewer has already judged
and rejudged, forrn:nq many opinions. At the end of the art
criticism, it is important to go back and review, synthesize and
make a final statement about the artwork. This might be a
judgment--such as "I like the work because..." or "I don't think it is
a very good artwork because..."
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This is not always a component of art criticism. I feel
that it is important, because it adds relevance to the process.
It give the student an opportunity to interject a personal
opinion. It gives the student the opportunity to relate the
work to his or her own personal experiences. It gives the
student the chance to examine his or her own thoughts about
the piece.
Because each student is unique, each will have a
different and equally valid judgment of the work. The
judgment tells what the artwork means for a specific
viewer, regardless of the interpretation of other viewers.
Our students are the consumers of the next generation.
They will consume visual art in the form of movies,
magazines, photographs as well as fine arts decorate their
homes. They will be making these kind of decisions in the
future and therefore should be given the opportunity now.
Judgment of the art critical process.
Can a judgment be made about an art criticism if it is a
matter of personal interpretation? That is, should an
instructor grade the written art criticisms which students
do for language arts classes? I believe that it is important
to evaluate the art criticism of students. Outside of the
writing and editing skills, the content of the art criticism is
important. Some of the criteria that might be used to
evaluate might include: inclusivity (Does the student go
through all four steps [interpretation, context, relationships,
components] in examining the artwork?) coherence (Does the
interpretation have consistency as to the meaning, as the
student goes through the steps?) correspondence (Do the
points made by the student correspond to the artwork?)
originality (Are the ideas presented by the student unique,
clever out of the ordinary?), convincing nature (Did the
student's interpretation present convincing arguments?) ,
etc.
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As for art criticism as a verbal exercise in class, I
believe that all answers should be accepted for discussion.
Probing questions such as "Why do you say that?" or "What
part of the picture gives you this idea?" keep the discussion
coming back to the artwork.
IV. An exercise in art criticism.
A. William Sidney Mount, The Power of Music is a painting by
an American artist pa:nted around 1830. The painting shows
a barn with three well-dressed white men inside. One is
playing the violin while two are listening. Outside the barn
is a black man in ragged clothes. He is holding his hand on
one hip and leaning against the barn with one leg supporting
him and one leg bent. Next to him is a jug and an axe. As I
show this
My first question to the class would be one of interpretation.
What do you think this picture is all about? Students
responses might include "It's a bunch of people listening to
music." "Some men are inside a barn." "A black man is
outside the barn and they don't know he is there."
My question "Why do you think that one man is outside the
barn and the others are inside?" Responses "He's a slave."
"He's planning something against them." "He's not suppose to
be there."
I ask "Why does the black man stay there? What is he doing
there?" Responses "He's listening to music." Question: "What
do you think he is suppose to be doing?" "Working." What kind
of work? "Cutting wood." "How do you know?" "He has an
axe."
"Where does this story take place?" No response. (Maybe the
students didn't understand my question.) "Is this a football
field?" "NO!" "Is it in a church?" "NO!" "Then where is this
place?" "In a barn." "How do you know?" "There is hay, there
is a horse stall, a pitch fork, wooden walls and floors."
"So put all that together and tell me what you think is
happening." "A man is going to work chopping wood and he
stops outside the barn to listen to music he hears inside."
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After this initial phase of interpretion, I go to the next level
which is the context.
"This painting was done in the United States in 1830 by an
American artist named William Sidney Mount. What was
happening in the United States during this time?" "Slavery."
"Mount was a genre painter. This means he liked to paint
scenes of ordinary people and ordinary events, that he saw
around him. Do you think that this is an ordinary event?" "Do
you think he painted a realistic view of life in the U.S. in the
19th century?" "Why do you think that people needed slaves?"
What do you think it is like to be a slave?"
"What do you think that the man in the picture is thinking?
How does he feel?" (This moves the information about the
context back to the level of interpretation.) "He feels sad,
because he can't come in with the other men." "No, he feels
happy, because he is smiling." "What is he. smiling about?"
"He likes to listen to the music." "But he is a slave." "He can
still be happy about the music."
While context could continue for any length of time, I will
move on to the level of the relationships among the parts.
"Often an artist will use a specific shape to help organize the
picture for the viewer. Does anyone see a shape?" "Yes,
there is a square." "There are two squares." "Why two
squares? Why doesn't he use just one square?" "Because
there are two parts to the picture--the men in the barn, and
the one outside the barn." "Why does he want them
separated?" "Because that is the way they were in that
time." "The artist makes a line down the center of the
picture separating the two. What separates these men?"
"Their race." "One is black, the others are white." "Some are
the rich people, the other man is a slave." "Is there anything
that unites them?" "Yes, they all like the music."
While we could delve into other aspects of the picture--the
depth, rhythm, let's move on to the components.
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"This picture has some light in it. Where is the light
shining?" "On the outside of the barn." "Where the slave is
standing." "A little of the light goes in to the barn, too." "It
is dark inside the barn where the men are sitting." "What
does the artist do to make it look dark?" "He uses a lot of
yellow for the light and brown and black in the background
where the barn is." "Why do you think he does this?" "It helps
you to see the difference between the two groups of people."
"It shows that the people in the barn are farther away from
us than the man outside." "What do you think it might mean
for the picture?" "Maybe that the men in the barn are really
in the dark in their feelings about the black man." "Maybe it
means that the African American is more enlightened than
they are."
"Having looked at this picture and some of it's parts, would
you say that William Sidney Mount is a slave owner, or an
abolitionist?" "I think he is an abolitionist." "Why?"
"Because he paints the slave as a person with feelings. He
shows how he can appreciate music, just like the other men."
"I think he sympathizes with the black man because he shows
him in the light, kind of like a hero." " The slave is the one
that is closest to us. He looks like the main character of the
picture."
"What do you think that Mount's message is in this picture?"
"I think that he is saying that music is a very powerful force.
That no matter who you are, you can appreciate music." "I
think that he is trying to show that all people are the same.
Whether you are black or white or whatever color, certain
things can be appreciated by everyone."
"Do you like the work or dislike it, and why?" "I like the work
very much, because I like the message of equality." "I like
the work because I like all of the realistic details, like the
axe and the red scarf." "I dislike the work, because I think it
has too many dark colors, but I do like the message about the
music." "I dislike the work because I don't like the idea of
slavery. I don't think that people should be showing pictures
about it."
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This exercise shows how the model works. We started off with an initial
interpretation about the meaning of the work. From there we went
through the, steps of the model, each time referring information back to
check the interpretation. We ended by formulating a final interpretation,
based on all the evidence we acquired by looking at the components of the
work. Then we made the art criticism personal, by giving each student a
chance to judge the value that they placed on the artwork, based on their
knowledge of it. I might end the exercise by having each student write
their own interpretation, instead of discussing it in class.
This art criticism model works just as well with non-objective or abstract
works. It is an exercise in thinking, evaluating, and reading the details of a
work, to come up with an interpretation. It's the exact same skill that we are
cultivating when we teach reading through the whole language method. That's
why I say that art Ls...whole language.
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Technical
Sensory
Formal
Expressive
Laura Chapman
deductive
inductive
empathetic
MODELS OF ART CRITICISM
Edmund Feldman
Description
Formal Analysis
Interpretation
Judgment
Donald Fehr
Historical Context
Interpretation
Formal Analysis
Judgment
Ralph Smith
eZploratory aesthetic criticism
argumentative aesthetic criticism
Tom Anderson
I. Reaction
II. Perceptual Analysis
A. Representation
B. Formal Analysis
C. Formal Characterization
III. Personal Interpretation
IV. Contextual Examination
V. Synthesis
A. Resolution
d. Evaluation
Whole Language Reading Model
Bloom's Taxonomy
Knowledge
Comprehension
Application
Analysis
Synthesis
Evaluation
Art Criticism 'Reading' Model
reaction - meaning of the work
context of the artwork
relationship of parts of the artwork
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Resources
In order to talk about artworks, one needs to have reproductions of artworks.
Here are some places that reproductions can be purchased.
University Prints, 21 East St., P.O. Box 485, Winchester, Massachusetts
01890. 5" x 8" color prints for about $.15 each
Shorewood Prints, 27 Glen Road, Sandy Hook, Connecticut 06482. A variety of
large sized prints for display in the classroom. Some come in sets with a
variety of themes.
BIBLIOGRAPHY
Barrett, Terry. "Principles for Interpreting", Art Education, (September, 1994),
PP. 8-13.
Broudy, H.A. Enlightened Cherishing. Urbana Illinois: University of Illinois
Press, 1972.
Fehr, D. E. "Applying the Historical Context Model of Art Criticism" Art
Education, September, 1994.
Fehr, D.E. "Mona Lisa's millstone: The modern gods of criticism." Art Education,
(January, 1993), pp. 68-70.
Striker, Susan. "Whole Language and Art." Teaching K-8, (August-September,
1992, p. 107.
Feldman, E. "Art as image and ideal." Englewood Cliffs, NJ: Prentice-Hall. 1967.
Feldman, E. "Becoming human through art: Aesthetic experience in the school."
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