Animatic peer feedback by Sophie T

1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK
DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?
Yes it makes sense. You can tell what
is happening between the characters.
IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX
WILL FIT IN?
Yes it is, you can clearly see that within the
sequence flames appear in the hand as well as
ice appearing, it works well.
Yes it is however at the beginning of the
sequence there is a space between the dialogue
that is slightly confusing from the delay.
I think the shot where they are walking towards
the college is longer than the others which is
where the dialogue delay is from.
It could be improved by fixing the dialogue at the
start and makes it slow down slightly so you
understand what is going on a bit better.
You could add in some camera movements to
make it cleaner, understand how the sequence
will be shot.
IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?
WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?
HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?
HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF
THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?