1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK
DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?
Yes.
IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX
WILL FIT IN?
The effects seem to fit in pretty well through out the whole sequence.
IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?
It needs more fluency to make it engaging, however good effort.
WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?
Shot at 1.16 needs to be a little shorter.
HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?
More movement with the camera. Cuts between dialogue needs to be improved at some
points.
HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF
THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?
Some dialogue needs improving.
Mood/background music.
Make the shots actually move.