1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK
DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?
Yes, the narrative does make sense, although talking with screen changes
confused me a little.
IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX
WILL FIT IN?
The special effects are easy to see with the use of close ups.
IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?
Very easy dialogue, easy conversation.
WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?
At the end when duke tells us about his power, scene could have been cut
down a little.
HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?
There aren't enough shots. Story is too quick.
HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF
THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?
Drawing of the people could be improved, confusing to see who's who
throughout the sequence.