1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK
DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?
IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX
WILL FIT IN?
IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?
WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?
The narrative goes well with what is shown.
They have added arrows and text to show what camera
shot types would be used. Also at the end they drew in
the electricity to show the effect.
Yes, I think that the dialogue is engaging because its
short and flows all the way through.
None, I think that all the shots are the right length and fit
with the dialogue length when it is used.
HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?
Some of the scenes the people don't have features.
HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF
THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?
They could add more effects and maybe add sound
effects to go with the special effects.