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Writing letters in the voice of AAA
Each year, AAA Members receive 80+ million transactional letters from us—
on topics ranging from welcome messages to the news that they’ve
bounced a check. Each of these letters creates its own brand experience
with the potential to deepen the reader’s relationship with us. So it’s
important we get these letters right.


Four guiding principles help us shape these experiences.
Be accurate and consistent We’re careful about spelling, branding, grammar, punctuation and
formatting. Our primary reference works for these mechanics of writing are Webster’s New
Collegiate Dictionary, 11th Edition, The Chicago manual of Style, 15th Edition, and the AAA
Masterbrand Guideline.
Be personal and appreciative As a Membership organization, AAA has a distinctively personal
relationship with those we serve. We demonstrate this by speaking in the warm, helpful voice of
a trusted fellow Member. Our language is simple, easy to understand, forthright and
conversational.
Be direct and transparent We show our respect for Members’ time and trust by being
forthright and to-the-point. We clearly state what we want the reader to know and what we
want the reader to do, ideally in the opening paragraph. We avoid sugar-coating difficult news
and when we make apologies we explain why we made the mistake and what we’ve done to
prevent it from happening again.
Sell the value of AAA Our letters are powerful tools for deepening Member relationships
through product usage, cross-sell and up sell. For this reason we include “sell” messages, to a
varying degree, in every letter. Refer to the Cross Sell Decision Chart at the end of this document
for guidance on which products to include in which letters.




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Here’s some specific guidance on style:
Voice

Write as you might speak to a Member if he or she were sitting across the desk from you. When
an individual is the author of a letter we speak in the first person singular voice. When a
business unit is the author of a letter we speak in the first person plural.
         We’re pleased to welcome you NOT         AAA is pleased to welcome you
We write in the active voice, not the passive
         We’ve determined that...        NOT      It has been determined that…
We avoid archaic or formal terms
         Per your correspondence of...
We strive, in all our communications, to leave the Members feeling confident that AAA “has
their back,” and assured that the road ahead will be enjoyable. Even unpleasant news, like the
cancellation of an insurance policy, should be delivered with humanity, compassion and
helpfulness. Our brand attributes support us in this:

         Expert       Convenient    Proactive     Supporting    Reliable   Responsible
Salutation
In both AAA Insurance and Membership communications we address Members by first name
preceded by the word “Dear.”
         Dear Jane
If system limitations prevent customization, we instead use
         Dear Valued Member
Signatures
We strive to make sure that letters are authored by an individual rather than a business entity.
For Guidance on this, see the “Who Signs What” chart at the end of this document.
Closes
We close our letters with
         Thanks for the trust you place in AAA.
         Your fellow AAA Member,
When, due to system limitations, letters need to be authored generically, we close with:
         Thanks for the trust you place in AAA.
         Sincerely,




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Calls to action
We follow direct response best practices and always include a prominent and clear response
method, ideally stating it at least twice. Use boldface and larger type to guide improve scan-
ability. It’s important have a single, clear call to action. A letter that asks the reader to figure out
what to do is never going to be as effective as one that tells the reader what to do.
Choose imperative sentences over declarative sentences
          Discover AAA Insurance           NOT      When you discover AAA Insurance
Apologies
When making apologies, state the reason for a mistake in simple terms and specify what we’ve
done to prevent it from happening again.
Brevity
We make letters brief and easily scan-able, limiting them to one page whenever possible.
Highlight important elements like calls to action with bold face and use paragraph spaces to
“chunk” content into quick hits of copy.


Typography/Layout
Because typography is an important element of our personality, we build consistency of voice by
using our primary house, Frutiger Next, and enhance legibility for all readers by following these
standard type specifications:
Body copy: set in Frutiger Next Light, 11pt minimum with 14pts of line spacing, and 7pts of
paragraph space
Legal/mice type: Frutger Next Light 9pt


Authorship
Whenever possible, an individual should be identified as the author of a letter. For AAA
Insurance and Travel letters the Member’s agent should be the signatory. We identify signatories
with a signature followed by name and title.

           Letter type                                 Author
           AAA Membership                              Steve Chan, AAA Membership Team Leader
           AAA Insurance                               Steve George, AAA Insurance Team Leader




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Cross-Sell Decision Chart

         Letter type                   “Volume” of sell                 Product(s) to cross-sell, prioritized
         AAA Membership welcome and     High                        AAA Auto Insurance
         renewal                                                    AAA ERS differentiation
                                                                    AAA Plus or Premier Membership
                                                                    AAA Member Discounts
         AAA Insurance welcome and     Medium                       Multipolicy discount
         renewal                                                    AAA Home or Renter’s Insurance
                                                                    AAA PUP
                                                                    Life Insurance
         AAA Insurance billing         Medium                       Multipolicy discount
                                                                    AAA Home Insurance
                                                                    AAA Member Discounts: Auto & Home

         AAA Insurance claims          Low                          AAA Member discounts: Auto
                                                                    Direct Repair Network

         AAA Membership transactions   Medium to low depending on   AAA Plus or Premier Membership
                                       letter topic                 ERS differentiation
                                                                    AAA Member discounts
         AAA Travel news               High                         Sojourns
                                                                    AAA Plus or Premier Membership (for travel
                                                                    benefits)
                                                                    AAA Member Discounts: Travel
         AAA Travel transactions       Medium                       Sojourns
                                                                    Plus or Premier Membership (for travel
                                                                    benefits)
                                                                    AAA Member Discounts




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Cialdini Principles
       We apply six principles of social psychology, as codified by Robert Cialdini, to improve
       our response rates.

         Principle                                            Example

         Reciprocity: when the customer has already           A gift, waived enrollment fee, coupon, helpful
         gotten something from you, they are more             information, etc.
         likely to reward you with loyalty and more
         likely to purchase more products; so be the
         first to give, and establish that reciprocal
         relationship

         Consistency: once you have made a                    “You’ve come to count on AAA for dependable road
         promise, follow up on the promise;                   service, now you can peace of mind from your insurance,
         customers appreciate it when you are                 too.
         consistent with existing commitments.
         Consistency also applies to our desire to
         align our current choices with past behavior.

         Consensus: customers are likely to follow            “We’re 55 million Members strong”
         the lead of many others, and of similar
                                                              “It’s no wonder that 1 in 5 drivers in Northern California
         others; emphasize what the Member’s peers
                                                              count on AAA Insurance.”
         are doing

         Authority: a credible communicator is                “Rated A+ by A.M. Best”
         knowledgeable and trustworthy; establish
                                                              “...knowledge gained from more than 100 years of
         yourself as an authority, reference other duly
                                                              rescuing motorists.”
         constituted authorities and always be honest


         Liking: give genuine compliments and                 [Member testimonials]
         praise, and emphasize your mutual efforts
                                                              “I know that my AAA agent, Patti, has my back.”
         and mutual goals

         Scarcity: people are more motivated by the           “Don’t risk losing the protection you need—renew
         fear of loss than by the possibility of gain;        today.”
         highlight the uniqueness of our products
         and let the customer know how they will be
         missing out if they don’t take advantage of
         what AAA has to offer




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Aaa letters style guide

  • 1. Writing letters in the voice of AAA Each year, AAA Members receive 80+ million transactional letters from us— on topics ranging from welcome messages to the news that they’ve bounced a check. Each of these letters creates its own brand experience with the potential to deepen the reader’s relationship with us. So it’s important we get these letters right. Four guiding principles help us shape these experiences. Be accurate and consistent We’re careful about spelling, branding, grammar, punctuation and formatting. Our primary reference works for these mechanics of writing are Webster’s New Collegiate Dictionary, 11th Edition, The Chicago manual of Style, 15th Edition, and the AAA Masterbrand Guideline. Be personal and appreciative As a Membership organization, AAA has a distinctively personal relationship with those we serve. We demonstrate this by speaking in the warm, helpful voice of a trusted fellow Member. Our language is simple, easy to understand, forthright and conversational. Be direct and transparent We show our respect for Members’ time and trust by being forthright and to-the-point. We clearly state what we want the reader to know and what we want the reader to do, ideally in the opening paragraph. We avoid sugar-coating difficult news and when we make apologies we explain why we made the mistake and what we’ve done to prevent it from happening again. Sell the value of AAA Our letters are powerful tools for deepening Member relationships through product usage, cross-sell and up sell. For this reason we include “sell” messages, to a varying degree, in every letter. Refer to the Cross Sell Decision Chart at the end of this document for guidance on which products to include in which letters. 1
  • 2. Here’s some specific guidance on style: Voice Write as you might speak to a Member if he or she were sitting across the desk from you. When an individual is the author of a letter we speak in the first person singular voice. When a business unit is the author of a letter we speak in the first person plural. We’re pleased to welcome you NOT AAA is pleased to welcome you We write in the active voice, not the passive We’ve determined that... NOT It has been determined that… We avoid archaic or formal terms Per your correspondence of... We strive, in all our communications, to leave the Members feeling confident that AAA “has their back,” and assured that the road ahead will be enjoyable. Even unpleasant news, like the cancellation of an insurance policy, should be delivered with humanity, compassion and helpfulness. Our brand attributes support us in this: Expert Convenient Proactive Supporting Reliable Responsible Salutation In both AAA Insurance and Membership communications we address Members by first name preceded by the word “Dear.” Dear Jane If system limitations prevent customization, we instead use Dear Valued Member Signatures We strive to make sure that letters are authored by an individual rather than a business entity. For Guidance on this, see the “Who Signs What” chart at the end of this document. Closes We close our letters with Thanks for the trust you place in AAA. Your fellow AAA Member, When, due to system limitations, letters need to be authored generically, we close with: Thanks for the trust you place in AAA. Sincerely, 2
  • 3. Calls to action We follow direct response best practices and always include a prominent and clear response method, ideally stating it at least twice. Use boldface and larger type to guide improve scan- ability. It’s important have a single, clear call to action. A letter that asks the reader to figure out what to do is never going to be as effective as one that tells the reader what to do. Choose imperative sentences over declarative sentences Discover AAA Insurance NOT When you discover AAA Insurance Apologies When making apologies, state the reason for a mistake in simple terms and specify what we’ve done to prevent it from happening again. Brevity We make letters brief and easily scan-able, limiting them to one page whenever possible. Highlight important elements like calls to action with bold face and use paragraph spaces to “chunk” content into quick hits of copy. Typography/Layout Because typography is an important element of our personality, we build consistency of voice by using our primary house, Frutiger Next, and enhance legibility for all readers by following these standard type specifications: Body copy: set in Frutiger Next Light, 11pt minimum with 14pts of line spacing, and 7pts of paragraph space Legal/mice type: Frutger Next Light 9pt Authorship Whenever possible, an individual should be identified as the author of a letter. For AAA Insurance and Travel letters the Member’s agent should be the signatory. We identify signatories with a signature followed by name and title. Letter type Author AAA Membership Steve Chan, AAA Membership Team Leader AAA Insurance Steve George, AAA Insurance Team Leader 3
  • 4. Cross-Sell Decision Chart Letter type “Volume” of sell Product(s) to cross-sell, prioritized AAA Membership welcome and High AAA Auto Insurance renewal AAA ERS differentiation AAA Plus or Premier Membership AAA Member Discounts AAA Insurance welcome and Medium Multipolicy discount renewal AAA Home or Renter’s Insurance AAA PUP Life Insurance AAA Insurance billing Medium Multipolicy discount AAA Home Insurance AAA Member Discounts: Auto & Home AAA Insurance claims Low AAA Member discounts: Auto Direct Repair Network AAA Membership transactions Medium to low depending on AAA Plus or Premier Membership letter topic ERS differentiation AAA Member discounts AAA Travel news High Sojourns AAA Plus or Premier Membership (for travel benefits) AAA Member Discounts: Travel AAA Travel transactions Medium Sojourns Plus or Premier Membership (for travel benefits) AAA Member Discounts 4
  • 5. Cialdini Principles We apply six principles of social psychology, as codified by Robert Cialdini, to improve our response rates. Principle Example Reciprocity: when the customer has already A gift, waived enrollment fee, coupon, helpful gotten something from you, they are more information, etc. likely to reward you with loyalty and more likely to purchase more products; so be the first to give, and establish that reciprocal relationship Consistency: once you have made a “You’ve come to count on AAA for dependable road promise, follow up on the promise; service, now you can peace of mind from your insurance, customers appreciate it when you are too. consistent with existing commitments. Consistency also applies to our desire to align our current choices with past behavior. Consensus: customers are likely to follow “We’re 55 million Members strong” the lead of many others, and of similar “It’s no wonder that 1 in 5 drivers in Northern California others; emphasize what the Member’s peers count on AAA Insurance.” are doing Authority: a credible communicator is “Rated A+ by A.M. Best” knowledgeable and trustworthy; establish “...knowledge gained from more than 100 years of yourself as an authority, reference other duly rescuing motorists.” constituted authorities and always be honest Liking: give genuine compliments and [Member testimonials] praise, and emphasize your mutual efforts “I know that my AAA agent, Patti, has my back.” and mutual goals Scarcity: people are more motivated by the “Don’t risk losing the protection you need—renew fear of loss than by the possibility of gain; today.” highlight the uniqueness of our products and let the customer know how they will be missing out if they don’t take advantage of what AAA has to offer 5