2. DOCUMENTRY
-Camera shots and movements were shaky
-More interviews were needed
-Script was very basic
-produce a structure to let our documentary flow and make sense
- create a debate and needed to create an aim so our audience will learn something.
ANCILIRIES
-Need to look at more channel 4 adverts and double page spreads
-Take more photographs to experiment more
-Photos were blurry .

3. DOCUMENTRY
-The debate isn't clear enough
-Need a variety of camera shots
----Include more experts so documentary can be taken seriously
-Redo structure (including more detail)
Ancillaries
-Picture for advert didn’t send the right message-boring ,plain
-Double page spread should be more eye catching
-Find some INSPRATIONAL ancillaries.

4. DOCUMENTRY
Now following structure
Need to look more into the new topic were taking forward (riots)
Look into more media platforms to see how young people are represented
ANCILLARIES
Annotating different adverts and double page spread gave us inspiration to
create our own
We thought more about composition and layout

5. DOCUMENTRY
-A clear debate
-Followed storyboards
-Script was very detailed
-Clips flowed with each other-made
sense
ANCILLARIES
-Pictures came out clearer
-Colours were bright and consistent- eye catching