The document provides feedback on a student's presentation assignment on the US healthcare system. It instructs the student to address issues in their work based on the feedback and grading rubric. The feedback notes some strengths but also identifies areas for improvement, such as limiting bullet points on slides to 5 words each and providing more detail on stakeholders' roles. The student is directed to incorporate the recommendations into their final paper.

1. The following files have been attached to your feedback
Please make sure to correct issues and address any
recommendations from your instructor's Week 3 Assignment
feedback.
You did well in the detail on Part 1 of your Presentation! Please
review the attached Week 3 Assignment Grading Rubric that
contains comments about meeting the criteria in the directions
of the assignment. Some of the issues were that the slides
should only 5 bulleted points of 5 to 7 words only. Long
sentences on the slide detracts from the presentation. The detail
should be in your speaker notes. In addition, I would have liked
to see more detail on the stakeholders and their roles. It is
important to cover how the stakeholders affected the US Health
Care system: the good and the bad. What you have is good, but
also look at the negative effects that each stakeholder has had,
such as the patient. For example, if the patient were using the
ER, which is costlier than seeing a physician, this would drive
up health care costs. Another example is the health care
providers that are committing fraud, such as billing errors or the
more recent issue of diagnosing people with cancer, and treating
them with chemo just to make money, (this was in the news in
August of 2015 about a doctor in Michigan). Including
information on both sides of the coin will illustrate a thorough
understanding. It is important to note that our health care
system is in its current state due to the positive and negative
contributions for each stakeholder. These are just some
thoughts for you... 8o) Also, as a reminder, citations need to
be included and in correct APA format and if you use quoted
material, make sure to place the information in quotation marks,
and include the page or paragraph number in the citation as
well. You can view the document I uploaded in DocSharing
within our classroom. Remember to incorporate the
recommendations into your Final paper.

2. (0.88 / 1) Identifies Themselves and Describes the Nature of the
Presentation
Proficient - Identifies themselves and describes the nature of the
presentation. Minor details are missing.
You did a nice describing your presentation by giving a brief
synopsis of what you will be covering. However, you missed
introducing yourself. It is important to not only state your
name, but also include information about yourself.
(2 / 2) Describes the History of the US Health Care System
Distinguished - Comprehensively describes the history of the
US Health Care System.
You have a solid understanding of how the US Health Care
System was developed. Congratulations on comprehensively
describing these key elements.
(3 / 3) Identifies Three to Five Major Developments That
transformed the System Into What it is Today
Distinguished - Correctly identifies at least three major
developments that transformed the system into what it is today.
(2.28 / 3) Differentiates the Stakeholders and Their Roles
Basic - Partially differentiates the stakeholders and their roles
by minimally addressing what they have to do within their roles.
Relevant details are missing and/or inaccurate.
Good attempt at differentiating the stakeholders, but you needed
to include more detail to explain the stakeholders' roles. Each
stakeholder has impacted the health care system making it what
it is today. Think about how you could have elaborated on their
roles by describing the positive and negative contributions.
(0.5 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Explanation of Issues
Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively explains the issue
to be considered, delivering all relevant information necessary
for a full understanding.
(0.44 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Evidence
Proficient - Employs applicable information from credible
sources to develop an analysis of the topic.
(0.44 / 0.5) PowerPoint Presentation: Graphics/Presentation of
Information

3. Proficient - Uses sufficient graphics, sound, and/or animation,
which assist in presenting the overall main point and enhance
understanding of concepts, ideas, and relationships. There is a
consistent theme, format, and font, however, there is too much
on the slides. Please see the documents in DocSharing of our
classroom for tips on developing scholarly and professional
PowerPoints.
(0.44 / 0.5) PowerPoint Presentation: Control of Syntax and
Mechanics
Proficient - Displays comprehension and organization of syntax
and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work
contains only a few minor errors and is mostly easy to
understand.
(0.38 / 0.5) PowerPoint Presentation: APA Formatting
Basic - Exhibits basic knowledge of APA formatting throughout
the presentation. The layout does not meet all APA
requirements.
(0.25 / 0.25) PowerPoint Presentation: Slide Requirement
Distinguished - The length of the presentation is equivalent to
the required number of correctly formatted slides.
(0.19 / 0.25) PowerPoint Presentation: Resource Requirement
Basic - Uses the required number of sources to support ideas,
however, the citations are missing so I am unable to determine
where the referenced information was used. Citations are
missing.
Overall Score: 10.8 / 12
The following files have been attached to your feedback
Please make sure to correct issues and address any
recommendations from your instructor's Week 3
Assignment feedback
.

4. You did well in the detail on Part 1 of your Presentation! Please
review the attached Week 3 Assignment
Grading Rubric that contains comments about meeting the
criteria in the directions of the
assignment.
Some of the issues were that the slides should on
ly 5 bulleted points of 5 to 7 words
only.
Long sentences on the slide detracts from the presentation.
The detail should be in your speaker
notes. In addition,
I would have liked to see more detail on the stakeholders and
their roles. It is
important to
cover how the stakeholders affected the US Health Care system:
the good and the bad.
What you have is good, but also look at the negative effects that
each stakeholder has had, such as the
patient. For example, if the patient were using the ER, which is
c
ostlier than seeing a physician, this
would drive up health care costs.
Another example is the health care providers that are
committing fraud,
such as billing errors or the more recent issue of diagnosing
people with cancer, and treating them with

5. chemo
just to make money, (this was in the news in August of 2015
about a doctor in
Michigan).
Including information on both sides of the coin will illustrate a
thorough understanding. It is
important to note that our health care system is in its current
state
due to the positive and negative
contributions for each stakeholder.
These are just some thoughts for you... 8o)
Also, as a
reminder,
citations need to be included and in correct APA format and
if you use quoted material, make
sure to place the inform
ation in quotation marks, and include the page or paragraph
number in the citation
as well.
You can view the document I uploaded in DocSharing within
our classroom
.
Remember to
incorporate the recommendations into your Final paper.

6. (0.88 / 1) Identifies Themselves and Describes the Nature o
f the Presentation
Proficient
-
Identifies themselves and describes the nature of the
presentation. Minor details are missing.
You did a nice describing your presentation by giving a brief
synopsis of what you will be covering.
However, you missed introduc
ing yourself. It is important to not only state your name, but
also include
information about yourself.
(2 / 2) Describes the History of the US Health Care System
Distinguished
-
Comprehensively describes the history of the US Health Care
System.
You have
a solid understanding of how the US Health Care System was
developed. Congratulations on
comprehensively describing these key elements.
(3 / 3) Identifies Three to Five Major Developments That
transformed the System Into What it is Today
Distinguished
-

7. Co
rrectly identifies at least three major developments that
transformed the system into
what it is today.
(2.28 / 3) Differentiates the Stakeholders and Their Roles
Basic
-
Partially differentiates the stakeholders and their roles by
minimally addressing wha
t they have to
do within their roles. Relevant details are missing and/or
inaccurate.
The following files have been attached to your feedback
Please make sure to correct issues and address any
recommendations from your instructor's Week 3
Assignment feedback.
You did well in the detail on Part 1 of your Presentation! Please
review the attached Week 3 Assignment
Grading Rubric that contains comments about meeting the
criteria in the directions of the
assignment. Some of the issues were that the slides should only
5 bulleted points of 5 to 7 words
only. Long sentences on the slide detracts from the
presentation. The detail should be in your speaker
notes. In addition, I would have liked to see more detail on the
stakeholders and their roles. It is
important to cover how the stakeholders affected the US Health
Care system: the good and the bad.
What you have is good, but also look at the negative effects that
each stakeholder has had, such as the
patient. For example, if the patient were using the ER, which is
costlier than seeing a physician, this

8. would drive up health care costs. Another example is the health
care providers that are committing fraud,
such as billing errors or the more recent issue of diagnosing
people with cancer, and treating them with
chemo just to make money, (this was in the news in August of
2015 about a doctor in
Michigan). Including information on both sides of the coin will
illustrate a thorough understanding. It is
important to note that our health care system is in its current
state due to the positive and negative
contributions for each stakeholder. These are just some
thoughts for you... 8o) Also, as a
reminder, citations need to be included and in correct APA
format and if you use quoted material, make
sure to place the information in quotation marks, and include
the page or paragraph number in the citation
as well. You can view the document I uploaded in DocSharing
within our classroom. Remember to
incorporate the recommendations into your Final paper.
(0.88 / 1) Identifies Themselves and Describes the Nature of the
Presentation
Proficient - Identifies themselves and describes the nature of the
presentation. Minor details are missing.
You did a nice describing your presentation by giving a brief
synopsis of what you will be covering.
However, you missed introducing yourself. It is important to not
only state your name, but also include
information about yourself.
(2 / 2) Describes the History of the US Health Care System
Distinguished - Comprehensively describes the history of the
US Health Care System.
You have a solid understanding of how the US Health Care
System was developed. Congratulations on
comprehensively describing these key elements.
(3 / 3) Identifies Three to Five Major Developments That

9. transformed the System Into What it is Today
Distinguished - Correctly identifies at least three major
developments that transformed the system into
what it is today.
(2.28 / 3) Differentiates the Stakeholders and Their Roles
Basic - Partially differentiates the stakeholders and their roles
by minimally addressing what they have to
do within their roles. Relevant details are missing and/or
inaccurate.
Question 1
1. Employee benefits have become very important to many
employees. When benefits are cut, employees can become
disgruntled and feel cheated. Many employees do not realize or
understand the difference between the benefits required and
miscellaneous benefits. Identify and explain in detail those
benefits that are mandated/required for employers to offer
employees.
Question 2
1. Healthcare is a major topic of interest. The cost of healthcare
is increasing and employers have to determine what is best for
the employees, while maintaining the company budget. Discuss
the difference between the Health Maintenance Organization
(HMO), Preferred Provider Organization (PPO), Point-of-
Service Plan (POS), Health Reimbursement Arrangements
(HRAs) and Health Savings Accounts (HSAs).
Must be at 300 words
Final Presentation
For your Final Presentation you will be presenting on the U.S.
healthcare system. Imagine you are a community health director
educating a group of new healthcare professionals on the U.S.
healthcare system. You have been asked to create a PowerPoint

10. presentation, which includes the elements listed below:
Note: You will be using Part 1 from week three for the first
section of the Final Presentation. Please make sure to correct
issues and address any recommendations from your instructor's
Week 3 Assignment feedback.
Introduction: Include a title slide. Next, include an introductory
slide where you introduce yourself and explain what you are
about to present.
Part I: The U.S. Healthcare System – Define the U.S. healthcare
system by addressing the items below:
· Describe the history of the U.S. health care system. Include at
least three of the revolutionary factors (e.g., teacher’s union in
Dallas, Texas; the American Medical Association; Civil War,
and the First Marine Hospital, etc.). Chapter two in our
textbook discusses the evolution of our system and is a good
resource for this part of your presentation.
· Identify at least one major development from each of the
following: financial, legal, ethical, regulatory, and social [i.e.,
consumer demand]) that transformed the system into what it is
today. You may want to revisit the health care timelines
available in your course textbook.
· Differentiate the stakeholders and their roles (i.e., health care
professionals, clients [patients], government, colleges, and
health care agencies.
· Include the positive and negative contributions of how they
affect our health care system.
Part II: The Cost of the U.S. Healthcare System
· Describe the costs and how they are set (i.e., reimbursement
methods, managed care organizations, Medicare, Medicaid, and
private insurance).
· Explain how technology has affected costs (e.g., EHR, medical

11. research, equipment improvements like MRI, mammography,
etc.) and delivery of quality care (e.g., personalized medicine,
mobile services like ePrescribing, disease registries, etc.).
Part III: The United States Versus Other Health Care Systems—
an International Perspective
· Contrast the U.S. health care system with at least one other
(e.g., Canada’s universal health care vs. U.S. healthcare or
South Africa vs. U.S. health care, etc.).
· Include at least one positive aspect from the other country's
health care system that you would like to see added to the U.S.
healthcare system. Explain why you would like to see this in
our system.
Part IV: Reforms and Improvements
· Describe any potential reforms and improvements that are
currently being discussed at either the local, state, or federal
level. Your work must be based upon scholarly research, not
media commentary.
· Examples could include the following:
· Federal modifications (i.e., Medicare reform, repealing
PPACA, universal type system, etc.)
· State modifications(i.e., Medicaid reform, income tax credits,
etc.)
· Increased consumer controls
Note: The PPACA is not an appropriate reform or improvement
to be described here because it is already law and not a future
improvement. However, if there is a proposal to amend or
eliminate, then you can include that potential reform.
Conclusion: Future of the U.S. healthcare system
· Explain what you believe the U.S. healthcare system will look
like in the next 10 years. Give at least two recommendations for

12. change.
· Address access to care, quality of care, and cost of care
including an example of each in your vision of our future
healthcare system.
Creating the Final Presentation
The Final Presentation must:
· Be 15 to 20 slides, which includes Part 1, (excludes the title
slide and reference slides) and formatted according to APA
style as outlined in the Ashford Writing Center.
· Be presented using Microsoft PowerPoint slide presentation.
You have a choice of one of the following options for adding
the narrative to your presentation. Option 1 is using voice or
Option 2 is adding speaker notes to each slide.
· Option 2: Using speaker notes for each slide in the PPT. You
can review the tutorial using this link: adding speaker notes to
your presentation. You can also click on the following links to
view the Accessibility Statement , and the Privacy Policy.
· Speaker notes are the typed notes that appear below the slide
that complement the presentation slides. Whereas the slides will
have short bulleted items, the speaker notes will be more
detailed. They are essentially what the presenter would say
during the presentation to explain each of the bulleted points on
the slide. Therefore, it is important that the speaker notes are
concise and detailed when explaining the bullet points.
· It is recommended that PowerPoint Slides contain no more
than five bullet points and should not contain more than 5 - 7
words each. Do not type paragraphs or long sentences on the
slide. The information that explains each bullet point is
conveyed via speaker notes or by recording your voice to each
slide.

13. · Be visually engaging. For assistance with designing the
visuals for your presentation, view the video Don McMillan:
Life after death by PowerPoint (click on the following links to
view the Accessibility Statement or the Privacy Policy) or
the PowerPoint Best Practices tool.
· Include a title slide with the following:
· Title of the presentation
· Student name
· Course name and number
· Instructor name
· Date submitted
· Address the sections in the order outlined above (Introduction,
Part I, II, III, and IV).
· Present the issues with critical thought.
· Use at least two scholarly sources (none of which should be
media commentary).
· Document all sources in APA format (including graphics,
charts and pictures that may be used within the
presentation). Wikimedia Commons is a recommended source
for creative commons images (to view the privacy policy,
click here).
· Include a separate reference slide formatted according to APA
style.
Final Presentation

14. For your Final Presentation you will be presenting on the U.S.
healthcare system. Imagine you are a
community health director educating a group of new healthcare
professionals on the U.S. healthcare
system. You have been asked to create a PowerPoint presen
tation, which includes the elements listed
below:
Note: You will be using Part 1 from week three for the first
section of the Final Presentation. Please make
sure to correct issues and address any recommendations from
your instructor's Week 3 Assignment
f
eedback.
Introduction:
Include a title slide. Next, include an introductory slide where
you introduce yourself and
explain what you are about to present.
Part I: The U.S. Healthcare System
–
Define the U.S. healthcare system by addressing the items
below:
·
Describe the history of the U.S. health care system. Include at

15. least three of the revolutionary
factors (e.g., teacher’s union in Dallas, Texas; the American
Medical Association; Civil War, and
the First Marine Hospital,
etc.). Chapter two in our textbook discusses the evolution of our
system
and is a good resource for this part of your presentation.
·
Identify at least one major development from each of the
following: financial, legal, ethical,
regulatory, and social [i.e.
, consumer demand]) that transformed the system into what it is
today.
You may want to revisit the health care timelines available in
your course textbook.
·
Differentiate the stakeholders and their roles (i.e., health care
professionals, clients [patient
s],
government, colleges, and health care agencies.
o
Include the positive and negative contributions of how they
affect our health care system.
Part II: The Cost of the U.S. Healthcare System

16. ·
Describe the costs and how they are set (i.e., reimbursement m
ethods, managed care
organizations, Medicare, Medicaid, and private insurance).
·
Explain how technology has affected costs (e.g., EHR, medical
research, equipment
improvements like MRI, mammography, etc.) and delivery of
quality care (e.g., personalized
med
icine, mobile services like ePrescribing, disease registries, etc.).
Part III: The United States Versus Other Health Care Systems
—
an International Perspective
·
Contrast the U.S. health care system with at least one other
(e.g., Canada’s universal health c
are
vs. U.S. healthcare or South Africa vs. U.S. health care, etc.).
o
Include at least one positive aspect from the other country's
health care system that you
would like to see added to the U.S. healthcare system. Explain

17. why you would like to see
this in
our system.
Part IV: Reforms and Improvements
Final Presentation
For your Final Presentation you will be presenting on the U.S.
healthcare system. Imagine you are a
community health director educating a group of new healthcare
professionals on the U.S. healthcare
system. You have been asked to create a PowerPoint
presentation, which includes the elements listed
below:
Note: You will be using Part 1 from week three for the first
section of the Final Presentation. Please make
sure to correct issues and address any recommendations from
your instructor's Week 3 Assignment
feedback.
Introduction: Include a title slide. Next, include an introductory
slide where you introduce yourself and
explain what you are about to present.
Part I: The U.S. Healthcare System – Define the U.S. healthcare
system by addressing the items below:
at least three of the revolutionary
factors (e.g., teacher’s union in Dallas, Texas; the American
Medical Association; Civil War, and

18. the First Marine Hospital, etc.). Chapter two in our textbook
discusses the evolution of our system
and is a good resource for this part of your presentation.
nt from each of the
following: financial, legal, ethical,
regulatory, and social [i.e., consumer demand]) that transformed
the system into what it is today.
You may want to revisit the health care timelines available in
your course textbook.
entiate the stakeholders and their roles (i.e., health care
professionals, clients [patients],
government, colleges, and health care agencies.
o Include the positive and negative contributions of how they
affect our health care system.
Part II: The Cost of the U.S. Healthcare System
methods, managed care
organizations, Medicare, Medicaid, and private insurance).
medical research, equipment
improvements like MRI, mammography, etc.) and delivery of
quality care (e.g., personalized
medicine, mobile services like ePrescribing, disease registries,
etc.).
Part III: The United States Versus Other Health Care Systems—
an International Perspective
(e.g., Canada’s universal health care
vs. U.S. healthcare or South Africa vs. U.S. health care, etc.).
o Include at least one positive aspect from the other country's
health care system that you
would like to see added to the U.S. healthcare system. Explain

19. why you would like to see
this in our system.
Part IV: Reforms and Improvements