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Scene No 1 Page No 1
Slugline Exterior late afternoon walk in a street, close to the pub
Endpoint of last scene
Characters in scene Mike (Gabriel/Andrew, not decided)
Point of scene Showing that Mike is lonely, frustrated & depressed.
Conflict He is showing signs of depression
Ending / central
question
He walks into the pub
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (miseenscène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
We will be filming Mike, walking towards the pub. We will take some close up shots of his
feet walking, close up to his frustrated face. Filming of his face grunting, whilst walking, in the
direction of the camera pointed at him. Also close, wobbly shots, filmed from the back of
Mike, to show the mood of the situation. Also, a shot of Mike walking, nearly into the pub,
shoulder shot to be done. End shot of him walking into the outside area of the pub, from a side
angle. The editing, in this scene, consists of short clips, in succession, of the above. This
consists of him walking, in the street, in the direction of the pub, with a vented way of strutting
his walk. There isn’t much sound that we would need in this scene, if there is, cars passing by
could be the most sound in the surroundings. Wind, or rain, might be a factor to deal with,
depending on the weather of the scheduled shoot.
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Scene No 2 Page No 2
Slugline
Exterior late afternoon walk into the open space of the pub,
walking into the interior space of the pub
Endpoint of last scene Him walking into the open area of the pub
Characters in scene
Mike (Gabriel/Andrew, not decided), Barman (cousin or
someone who works there.)
Point of scene Showing Mike’s process to getting drunk.
Conflict
He is showing signs of depression, witnessing weaknesses
towards himself, through the abuse of alcohol. Shows him
drinking to the maximum point of possible drunk.
Ending / central
question
He goes to the outside area of the pub, to try smoke a cigarette.
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (miseenscène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
This scene consists of Mike walking into the pub, through the open area. We will take similar
shots to how the scene before was shot, but in the direction of him walking into the interior
pub, night time. We will film him opening the door, from the side angle. We will also film
the action of opening the knob/pushing the door, close up shot. We will also film another
shot of him walking into the pub, towards the cameras direction, which will be in the spot of
the bar. We will then film, a shot of him sitting on the stool, with a close up shot of him
assisting himself to comfort on the stool. We film the barman, acknowledging Mike how he
is & what he would like to order, from the side. We will then film Mike, in the direction of
the camera, behind the bar, like his looking at the barman, explaining he’s stressful situation.
The barman will be shot again from the side, for abit, acknowledging his sincere gratitude in
fixing his problems, and also, quickly shift into another shot, looking in the direction of the
camera, as if the camera is Mike. Mike is then shot, from the side, thanking his appreciation
& asking kindly for a pint. We then film the Barman, again from the angle of him looking
towards the camera, accepting the order. We then take a quick shot of him walking towards
the tap. We film a quick, close up shot of him grabbing a glass. We then take a quick shot of
him pulling the tap down. After this, we quickly shoot Mike’s frustrated face (could be
related to the impatience of wanting a pint, quickly.). We then shoot back to the pint, close
up, being poured, from the side angle. We shoot the bubbles, fizzing & frothing to the brim.
We then film the barman’s hand, placing a coaster on the bar, also places the beer on it. But
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Scene No 3 Page No 4
Slugline Exterior Outside Area Pub Scene
Endpoint of last scene Mike opening the door to the outside pub area.
Characters in scene Mike (Gabriel/Andrew, not decided), Becky (Marisa)
Point of scene
Showing Mike attempting smoking a cigarette and having a
conversation with a very pretty, unexpected lady.
Conflict
He is showing signs of being pissed, struggling to smoke &
stand. He also starts flirting with a lady he comes across, who
seems to be on the same situation as him.
Ending / central
question
Mike & Becky start walking to Becky’s place.
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (miseenscène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
We shoot in the direction of Mike, infront of the door. We shoot a close up of his hands,
grabbing his packet of fags, from his pocket. We shoot him taking the cigarette out of his
packet, putting it to his mouth, this would be a close up shot. There would be a side shot of
with the cigarette lighting it. We will also do a small shot of the camera looking in the
direction of his face lighting the cigarette. As soon as he tries to inhale, we film a normal
shot of his face coughing, from struggling to inhale. While he is coughing, from the side
shot, a lady pops from his other side. We film her face, close up, checking if Mike is OK,
since he is coughing from the cigarette. We then film Mike’s struggling/drunk face, saying
his fine & starts conversation with her. We will be doing different shots of there
conversation, close up to there faces & mouths, whilst talking, about personal, ongoing
issues. We also have shots in this conversation, of Becky smoking a cigarette, like it should
be, with simultaneous shots of her actions in inhaling the cigarette, whilst speaking to Mike.
This will consist of a lot of short shots, of there faces, happening fast paced, with a few side
shots of both showing. Whilst the face, close up shots are happening during conversation, we
film Becky inviting Mike to hers, for more drinks, from the side angle of Mikes back. We do
same way, from Beckys side (these shots will also be part of the conversation we said have
these different shots.) showing Mikes approval & go ahead for going to hers. The last shot
would be them walking towards the exit of the outside area. With 3 different shots, of them
looking at the camer, from the exit point. Another shot of there backs, walking towards exit
5. point. 3rd shot could be over the shoulder shots, towards the exit. The sound in this scene
could be cars passing, or weather conditions, like wind, rain or snow.
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Scene No 4 Page No 5
Slugline Exterior walk in the streets, towards Becky’s house
Endpoint of last scene
Walking towards the exit point of the outside pub area, into the
street
Characters in scene Mike (Gabriel/Andrew, not decided), Becky
Point of scene Mike & Becky making there way to Becky’s.
Conflict
Mike would be struggling to walk, Becky gives him a helping
shoulder to rest on, whilst trying to walk.
Ending / central
question
They enter Becky’s house
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (miseenscène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
Keep camera roll on same shot, looking at there backs, whilst they walk out of the exit point
of the outside pub area. We will be doing simultaneous side shots, front shots & over the
shoulder shots of there walk. This walk involves Mike’s struggle to keep his balance. We
would be taking close up shots of Mike’s balance & close up shots of his drunken face,
which could involve him closing his eyes. We would be also doing close up shots of Becky’s
help face & her action to move Mike’s hand over her shoulder. We will do a side shot and a
back shot for this action. We continue to film them, for a few seconds, in the different shots
planned. We could maybe fast forward there walk towards Becky, to the point were they
arrive outside Becky’s front door. Sound will be ongoing cars again & dependable weather
conditions.
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Scene No 5 Page No 6
Slugline Interior lift ride, inside Becky’s house, having more drinks
Endpoint of last scene They enter Becky’s Building
Characters in scene Mike (Gabriel/Andrew, not decided), Becky
Point of scene
Mike & Becky keep drinking & socialising, till the significant
twist
Conflict Mike gets drugged by Becky, & blacks out
Ending / central
question
He blacks out
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (miseenscène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
First shot would be a shoulder shot, of both of them entering the building. We will also be
doing a frontal shot, from inside the building, pointing towards them, both walking towards
the lift. We would then do a short, side shot of them waiting for the lift. We will do a small
close up shot of Mike/Becky pressing the lift button. We would then shoot, from side angle &
back angle, them walking into the lift. Whilst in the lift, we will film, from the underneath, a
shot of both of them awkwardly keeping up conversation. We then film the lift door opening,
with them walking in the direction of the camera pointed at them. Then, there will be another
shot, from the side, of Becky opening the door. We could also do another short, quick, close
up shot of the key being inserted into the lock. Another shot of them coming into the flat, one
shot from the outside of the door, on the sides. Another shot, of the camera pointed at them,
from inside the house. We will then film Mike walking towards the couch & Becky walking in
the other direction, towards the kitchen/bar to make some drinks. We will be doing different
shots of Mike trying to smoke, whilst trying to keep up conversation. Whilst there are quick
shots going on, of both of there actions, we will also be filming Becky’s action of pouring
shots of tequila. We will be doing similar shooting techniques to those done for the pints/shots
at the pub. The only difference is, we will be shooting Becky’s face, close up, of mischief,
were she will be reaching out for a certain drug she had hidden, & planned, for this occasion.
She subtly puts the pill in the shot for Mike, we will be doing all sorts of similar close up, side
shots, like of the shots done at the pub for the shot glasses. This time we will film, from
Becky’s view, of her placing the pill in the shot glass. We will also shoot the pill dissolve into
the tequila. Whilst we are doing short shots of these actions, we will be having short shots of
Mikes face, close up, whilst they are in conversation. When Becky is finished from preparing
the shots, we will film her walking towards the living room area, pointed at the camera & also
from the back, in the direction of Mike. We will then film Mike’s stumbling attempt to stand
7. up. We will then film Becky’s hands, close up shot, passing the drugged shot to Mike. We will
both faces signal a cheers, before they drink. We could also shoot both Mike & Becky’s eyes,
close up, to show how Mike was drunk (& horny possibly), & Becky’s eyes(which seemed up
to no good). As soon as they both drink the shots, we will do a quick shot of Mike’s face go in
disgust, & close his eyes instantly, which leads to the black out.
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Scene No 6 Page No 7
Slugline Interior of Mike’s Bedroom
Endpoint of last scene Mike’s Black Out
Characters in scene Mike (Gabriel/Andrew, not decided)
Point of scene Showing that Mike is hungover, confused & left with a mystery
Conflict He is showing signs of confusion, whilst really hungover
Ending / central
question
He gets a sudden flashback of what could/might have happened.
After flashback, he still is confused & startled to what
might/could have happened.
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (miseenscène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
We will start of the scene with a close up shot of Mike’s face, waking up, disgruntled due to
his hangover. We then shoot, a shot of Mike’s bed full of blood & garbage bags. We will also
do a small, side, close up shot of the gun beside him, in his bed. We then shoot Mike’s
confused face again, close up, were he is trying to remember his night. We then shoot him
reaching into his pocket, we will shoot from the above, looking at him & his whole body, We
will also do a close up shot, of his hand movement, into his pocket. We will then shoot, from
Mike’s view, lying down on the bed still, his hand movement to opening up this mysterious
note left with him. The note will signify an instant flashback, for Mike, on what might/could
have happened. After we shoot him reading it, we then shot, quick & shaky, towards Mike’s
confused face of thinking, into a flashback of what could/might have happened. We then shoot
a blurry, effected shot of Becky handing him a note, telling him its her number for next time.
She also hands him a gun, demanding him to shoot her. Mike was drugged, and agreed to do
anything of the sort at this point. We will be filming, for this flashback, everything in the view
of Mike, were he then has the gun in his hand. We will cutshort the flashback, as soon as Mike