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there are a couple of grammar and punctuation mistakes, and a
few formatting flaws that we would like you to consider to
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that should be addressed.
· Instructions:
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· Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation:
A single missing article and a couple of cases of singular/plural
form misuse.
One misspelled word and a couple of issues with
uppercase/lowercase misuse.
A single case of comma misuse.
· Formatting:
Varying types of font, inconsistent reference to a chapter, and
minor cosmetic flaws (unnecessary blank spaces).
Have a wonderful day!

2. Running Head: DLA IS/IT IN SUPPLY CHAIN
MANAGEMENT 1
DLA IS/IT IN SUPPLY CHAIN MANAGEMENT
4
Comment by Author: Lowercase required for the word
head in the Running head line.
Defense Logistics Agency’s IS/IT in Supply Chain Management
Comment by Author: Please avoid placing multiple blank
spaces after the title.
Student’s Name
Institution Affiliations Comment by Author: Singular form
required instead.

3. Defense Logistics Agency’s IS/IT in Supply Chain Management
Comment by Author: Please avoid placing multiple blank
spaces after the title.
The Defense Logistic Agency’s (DLA) Information Technology
(IT) and Information Systems (IS) deal with automated
procurements, manipulation, storage, control, management,
display, interchange, switching, assurance, transmission, and
reception of information. Notably, the agency uses level 4 of
IS/IT supply chain management based on Shi & Chan (2010).
Internet-based Supply chain management (SCM) systems have
gained popularity and have recently replaced Electronic Data
Interchange (EDI). Through this IS/IT SCM level, the company
manages policy planning, system analysis, information security,
network services, operating systems, and data management. A
primarily significant benefit of Internet-based systems is
allowing the exchange of information from one-to-one to one-
to-many as well as many-to-many. Comment by Author: Please
consider rewriting it in uppercase to maintain consistency in
spelling.
The Internet-based SCM system is not only cost-effective
but also has consistent transfer standards. Therefore, Defense
Logistics Agency’s IS/IT leadership takes streamlined,
disciplines and enterprise-oriented tactic for the life cycle
organization of its IT investments. Importantly, the agency has
numerous federal and international catalogs including DD1685
and DD180 which allow users to revise catalog data and
appropriate action like approving, canceling, and replacing item
name. For partnerships, Defense Logistics Agency has inter-
organizational systems that will enable the exchange of
information supply organization and logistics undertakings.
Further, DLA trails investments, solutions, and aptitudes
through IS/IT investment portfolio set-up. The company’s Chief
Information Officer (CIO) keeps the investments recognized
within the portfolio set-up. Comment by Author:

4. Unnecessary comma. Please consider removing it. Comment by
Author: Misspelled word (life-cycle). Comment by Author:
Plural form suggested instead. Comment by Author: Indefinite
article required. Comment by Author: This fragment is
slightly confusing. Please consider revising it.
The level 4 SCM system is more powerful and flexible in
the distribution of information as well as guiding logistics
businesses (Shi & Chan, 2010). Through electronic portfolios,
the agency delivers information on the development of
concepts, viability determination, documentation of design and
development, implementation, testing, and continuity to aid in
making sound judgments. The company’s management of its
database is incomparable with its telecommunication systems.
Therefore, if there is a problem with the operations of their
computer systems, the issue affects the entire defense force. In
other words, the agency has the most complex challenge in
maintaining its systems; yet, it is very innovative. Comment by
Author: Please avoid placing multiple blank spaces between
words and sentences. Comment by Author: Please avoid
placing multiple blank spaces after sentences.
References
Shi, X., & Chan, S. (2010). Information systems and
information technologies for supply chain management. D.
Waters, Global Logistics: New Directions in Supply Chain
Management, 177-196. Comment by Author:

5. Inconsistent reference to a chapter in an edited book. Please
refer to the current APA guidelines for reference formatting:
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/08/
Comment by Author: Please consider rechecking the
correct page numbers.