2.  Rafaella Bastita- Grade C
Could have used Showed different
better close ups hands and
rings..Confusion
Could have emphasised
more what this meant

3. Good use of using times.
Showing the
gun before
showing what
happened;
builds up
tension.
Good close
up to
emphasis her
frustration
Showing
the
impact
after, and
the angle
of the
camera is
good

4. Kayleigh
Howlin-Grade
B  Could have been a clearer
 use of the close up.
Sun was in his
face so you
could not see
his expression.
Clearer image.

5.  Good use of showing the
 angle of when he threw the phone.
Using good
close up shots
Showing us her
going through
the park gates
before she got to
him and her
running which
shows her
determination to
get there as
quickly as
possible.