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EWRT 30 CLASS 16
AGENDA
Writers' Workshop:
Fiction Project #2
WRITERS’ WORKSHOP
WRITER’S WORKSHOP #3
Get into your groups and share your fiction so everyone has access to your
paper. Include me at kimpalmore01@gmail.com
Take turns reading a brief sample of your work aloud; note obvious errors
(typos, spelling) as the reader reads.
Let everyone read before making comments about content, style, and
conventions. Make sure each participant gets at least one thorough review of his
or her work.
Use the handout as a guide for your comments. Ask yourself the questions
about each piece. Where should the writer focus his or her efforts in revision?
Use the comment feature on Google Docs. Avoid editing!
DO NOT write on the fiction revision workshop handout
HOMEWORK
Submit Project #3
before noon, Friday,
week 9

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Ewrt 30 class 16

  • 4. WRITER’S WORKSHOP #3 Get into your groups and share your fiction so everyone has access to your paper. Include me at kimpalmore01@gmail.com Take turns reading a brief sample of your work aloud; note obvious errors (typos, spelling) as the reader reads. Let everyone read before making comments about content, style, and conventions. Make sure each participant gets at least one thorough review of his or her work. Use the handout as a guide for your comments. Ask yourself the questions about each piece. Where should the writer focus his or her efforts in revision? Use the comment feature on Google Docs. Avoid editing! DO NOT write on the fiction revision workshop handout