This document outlines a song and music video treatment, describing scenes and shots to depict a story of a woman named Sabrina who feels she is not good enough and everything she loves will burn up in the light. The treatment includes two verses with scenes of Sabrina walking in a graveyard and then as a vampire at night, as well as bridges, choruses and a final scene of Sabrina and another woman named Sophie burning a rose.
1. (Verse 1) Take me I'm alive Never was a girl with a wicked mind But everything was better when sun goes down Instruments at the start. All different images a grave yard, roses and long shots of Sabrina. Choppy fast images. In this verse I will have Sabrina walking around then sitting on a step and putting her head in her hands, showing she’s upset. (Bridge + chorus) I had everything Opportunities for eternity And I could belong to the night Your eyes, your eyes I can see in your eyes Your eyes In this part I want Sophie performing, in black and white and a range of shots and camera angels. You make me wanna die I'll never be good enough You make me wanna die And everything you love will burn up in the light Every time I look inside your eyes Make me wanna die Chorus will be Sabrina acting out, writing on the mirror with lipstick, smashing vases, ripping clothes ect. (Verse 2) Taste me, drink my soul Show me all the things that I shouldn't know And there's a new moon on the rise This will be the night scene where Sabrina has turned into a Vampire and Sophie is acting. She will be outside a grave yard and filmed in sepia. 1 2 3 4 5
2. Here Sophie will be acting again in the grave yard and then it will have some shots back of Sabrina that I used at the start too. Again to show that they are the same person and keeping the connection. You make me wanna die I'll never be good enough You make me wanna die And everything you love will burn up in the light Every time I look inside your eyes (burning in the light) Make me wanna die See section 2. (Bridge + chorus) I had everything Opportunities for eternity And I could belong to the night Your eyes, your eyes I can see in your eyes Your eyes everything in your eyes, your eyes 6 7 I'll die for you my love, my love I'll lie for you my love, my love (make me wanna die) I'll steal for you, my love, my love (make me wanna die) I'll die for you my love, my love Well burn up in the light Close up of the motif- the rose, close up of Sabrina just staring into the camera and the same with Sophie to show there emotions (upset). Also a shot of the moon, to emphasise the change between day/night. 8 (Chorus) Every time I look inside your eyes I'm burning in the light Every time I look inside your eyes I'm burning in the light Make me wanna die In this final chorus, I will introduce the man however only his eyes to keep the mystery ongoing...Also the end scene will be Sabrina and Sophie throwing a rose into the fire… when we music stops the sound of the fire with fade in. 9