2. They looked at my first draft of my front cover,
and my unfinished contents page
3. What do you think of the font of the
cover lines on my front cover?
• I really like the font of the masthead. The cover
lines are bold and have a nice strong colour
theme through out
• I like how it blends in with the images and fonts
but also how it stands out at the same time as it
looks original and effective
• I really like the font on the masthead and the
colours used. It sets the scene for the magazine.
Maybe a few more cover lines
• Nice font
4. What do you think of the colours on
the front cover?
• Consistent and lovely
• They look nice and they go well together
• I think they all work well together. Sticking to
colours in a similar palette has really worked
well.
• The colour is very good and consistently tied
in with the masthead.
5. Any other comments on my front
cover?
• Going against codes and conventions with
subject facing other way (don’t forget to
mention that on blog) love the positioning of
the person. The background image could be a
little brighter
• I love the position your artist is in how it fits
nicely
• I like the position of your text, I also just really
love the colours! (My favourite colours!)
6. Comments on my contents page?
• Can see it is still in process…like the position of the top
image. Try mixing up fonts, colours and sizes on the
text.
• Overall really nice cover and contents page has
potential.
• It looks like it is going very well but obviously it is still in
progress but it looks like its successful at the moment
• Looks good so far! Not 100% sure on the grid layout
but I’m sure it’ll look amazing once it’s done judging
from your front cover Good luck completing it!!!
• Little more progression but very good and consistent, I
like the pictures.
7. My comments
To improve, or to have benefitted more from
this, I should have had a completed first draft
of my contents page.
However, from the feedback, especially helpful
to the improvement of my front cover, I know
what changes to make and consider.
