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I added the back text and then turned
down the opacity by 70% and used
the eraser tool making the model
come in front of the text. I got this
inspiration from a Florence and the
machine edition by vibe. I thought
that this would be effective for my
magazine as it looked a bit like graffiti
and seeing as my magazine genre
was hip hop and hip hop
stereotypically started on the streets
where there is a lot of graffiti.
My slug and page numbers correspond with each
other as they are the same colour and same
width apart. I chose to go with these colours as I
wanted the exclusive to stand out and using
black and yellow was very effective as these are
alerting colours and will grab readers attention.




                                             This was my main article
                                             which was a an interview
                                             and at the top was my
                                             leading text which was
                                             bigger than the interview
                                             showing that it was different
                                             ands was introducing what
                                             was to be included in the
                                             interview. I added a box
                                             behind the text ad turned
                                             down the opacity so that the
                                             text was clear to see as it
                                             would of been hard to read
                                             off the brick wall.

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  • 1. Double page spread commentary
  • 2. I added the back text and then turned down the opacity by 70% and used the eraser tool making the model come in front of the text. I got this inspiration from a Florence and the machine edition by vibe. I thought that this would be effective for my magazine as it looked a bit like graffiti and seeing as my magazine genre was hip hop and hip hop stereotypically started on the streets where there is a lot of graffiti.
  • 3. My slug and page numbers correspond with each other as they are the same colour and same width apart. I chose to go with these colours as I wanted the exclusive to stand out and using black and yellow was very effective as these are alerting colours and will grab readers attention. This was my main article which was a an interview and at the top was my leading text which was bigger than the interview showing that it was different ands was introducing what was to be included in the interview. I added a box behind the text ad turned down the opacity so that the text was clear to see as it would of been hard to read off the brick wall.