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Mormons: beyond the big book
Brief summary. 
• Our documentary is about the religious group 
Mormons. The intention of our documentary is to 
inform the audience of the religion and to show 
they are not as different as people might think 
and their lifestyle is also very similar to ours with 
only a few minor differences.
Similar styles. 
 The style of the documentary is similar to the documentary “Meet the 
Mormons” because it has the same subject matter and shows that whilst at 
home Mormons live very normal lives, which is what our documentary is trying 
to show. 
 It is also in a similar style to Louis Theroux’s documentaries as it is reflexive 
with expository content which is the style we would like to film our 
documentary. 
 Another documentary is Catfish as we will have a few similar stylistic features 
such as montages and short clips of what will happen later on the show (after 
the break) so that the audience is intrigued and will want to find out what will 
happen.
Actors. 
The actors we have chosen are: 
Andrew Brumpton (M) 
Matt Russell (M) 
Tiffany Dudley (M) 
Sophie Trievnor 
The general public
Locations: 
 The locations we will use are: 
 A Mormon church, this will be used as a representation of how people perceive the Mormon 
religion (all about religion/different to us all) 
 The common room as we want to ask questions and do a montage of the responses and the 
common room as it is a normal everyday place which is what we want the audience to see 
that people who are pat of this religion are no different from us 
 Weybridge high street/ Staines shopping center, again these are both normal everyday 
places which you might also find Mormons, we are showing that they are just people who 
do everyday thing like us and also there is a church in Staines which could represent the 
Mormon religion being part of the “community” 
 We will also film in some of our interviewees homes or places they find normal to them, to 
represent the interviewee to the audience, so they can can see (Mormons/ Non Mormons) 
that there is little difference between lives.
Costumes/Props. 
There will be no set costumes, interviewees will be in 
their own clothes to show their role as normal 
people, to show the similarities between the 
subjects. 
The only prop we will be using will be one book of 
Mormon in the opening title to help emphasize the 
subject of the documentary.
Shot list. 
 The shots we will use will be: 
 Shot reverse shot for the interviews to show questions and responses. 
 Panning shots to show the church so we will be able to show it all and 
it will go well with a voice over narration. 
 Establishing shots to show where the interviews will be taking place. 
 Steady cam because we want to show a difference (informality) to 
the questions/answers in the montages to the actual official 
interviews.
Story Board. 
1. Opening introduction 
2. Opening title sequence 
3. Montage 
4. Interview 
5. Montage 
6. Interview 
7. Filming and narration(voiceover) 
8. Interview 
9. “After the break” 
We will use this to show the different techniques we have learnt and also it will keep 
the documentary interesting instead of interview after interview.
Timeline. 
• We want to get all the planning done quite fast so that we have enough 
time for for filming and editing. This will hopefully only take a few weeks 
• Scripts will only take a few days as scripts aren't that hard to write and we 
have a rough idea of what we would like to include. 
• Filming will take a few days maximum a week as we have been planning 
all summer who an where we will be filming so everything is planned and 
we just need to film. 
• We will leave the most time for editing as this takes the longest and is the 
hardest. Also it means if we realize we need some last minute footage we 
have enough time to go get it and edit to make the documentary look 
good and polished.
Skills. 
Skills we learnt last year: 
We will use cameras, tri pods and maybe lighting. 
We will use final cut pro . 
We can edit songs to fit in with our documentary. 
I’m hoping my editing skills will improve to make a better 
final piece.

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Final Ideas

  • 1. Final Ideas Mormons: beyond the big book
  • 2. Brief summary. • Our documentary is about the religious group Mormons. The intention of our documentary is to inform the audience of the religion and to show they are not as different as people might think and their lifestyle is also very similar to ours with only a few minor differences.
  • 3. Similar styles.  The style of the documentary is similar to the documentary “Meet the Mormons” because it has the same subject matter and shows that whilst at home Mormons live very normal lives, which is what our documentary is trying to show.  It is also in a similar style to Louis Theroux’s documentaries as it is reflexive with expository content which is the style we would like to film our documentary.  Another documentary is Catfish as we will have a few similar stylistic features such as montages and short clips of what will happen later on the show (after the break) so that the audience is intrigued and will want to find out what will happen.
  • 4. Actors. The actors we have chosen are: Andrew Brumpton (M) Matt Russell (M) Tiffany Dudley (M) Sophie Trievnor The general public
  • 5. Locations:  The locations we will use are:  A Mormon church, this will be used as a representation of how people perceive the Mormon religion (all about religion/different to us all)  The common room as we want to ask questions and do a montage of the responses and the common room as it is a normal everyday place which is what we want the audience to see that people who are pat of this religion are no different from us  Weybridge high street/ Staines shopping center, again these are both normal everyday places which you might also find Mormons, we are showing that they are just people who do everyday thing like us and also there is a church in Staines which could represent the Mormon religion being part of the “community”  We will also film in some of our interviewees homes or places they find normal to them, to represent the interviewee to the audience, so they can can see (Mormons/ Non Mormons) that there is little difference between lives.
  • 6. Costumes/Props. There will be no set costumes, interviewees will be in their own clothes to show their role as normal people, to show the similarities between the subjects. The only prop we will be using will be one book of Mormon in the opening title to help emphasize the subject of the documentary.
  • 7. Shot list.  The shots we will use will be:  Shot reverse shot for the interviews to show questions and responses.  Panning shots to show the church so we will be able to show it all and it will go well with a voice over narration.  Establishing shots to show where the interviews will be taking place.  Steady cam because we want to show a difference (informality) to the questions/answers in the montages to the actual official interviews.
  • 8. Story Board. 1. Opening introduction 2. Opening title sequence 3. Montage 4. Interview 5. Montage 6. Interview 7. Filming and narration(voiceover) 8. Interview 9. “After the break” We will use this to show the different techniques we have learnt and also it will keep the documentary interesting instead of interview after interview.
  • 9. Timeline. • We want to get all the planning done quite fast so that we have enough time for for filming and editing. This will hopefully only take a few weeks • Scripts will only take a few days as scripts aren't that hard to write and we have a rough idea of what we would like to include. • Filming will take a few days maximum a week as we have been planning all summer who an where we will be filming so everything is planned and we just need to film. • We will leave the most time for editing as this takes the longest and is the hardest. Also it means if we realize we need some last minute footage we have enough time to go get it and edit to make the documentary look good and polished.
  • 10. Skills. Skills we learnt last year: We will use cameras, tri pods and maybe lighting. We will use final cut pro . We can edit songs to fit in with our documentary. I’m hoping my editing skills will improve to make a better final piece.