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the artist's lip syncing is not correct at the start time of 0:49 seconds.
there is too much shoulder in the way when the male character runs past the artist as well as the torch is
spotted on the car
the narrative was very clear
continuity of the bin needs adjusting
more female narrative
the door needs to be slammed at the start
the video would be preferred to start at start of music
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Some lip syncing needs work on
Best shot of the video was the solo
Over the shoulder shot needs work
More female narrative

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Clear narrative
Liked the solo
Lip sync needs work on
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Lip syncing needs to be taken care with more precision
The male character’s cuts to improve
The narrative is clear
Good solo shot
Over the shoulder shot needs improving
More detail in the narrative
Rushed shots for the male character