1. A FILM REVIEW THAT NEEDS REVISION
The following text has both grammar and spelling mistakes. Correct as many as you can,
knowing that there are many mistakes!
Today I seed one film “Juno”.
The film's story is about one gril which get pregnat. The caracters are June, Mark,
June's father and step mother, the adoctive parents and Junes best friend.
June love music, terror movies and fun. Mark loves study and run with her team. Junes
father is funny and support June in every moments but in the beginning his step mother don't
acept the pregnancy but with time she start understand. His best friend was the first person
which know the pregnancy and hep June in every moments and the adoctive parents are very
rich, the woman have much of work and the man love music.
In the beginning of the film June have relations with Mark and pregnated, and the
next day, June do a pregnancy test and confirm her pregnancy.
June think in abortion but on front of the abortion center one girl fight against
abortionand June decide to give the baby to adoption. June begin shearch for persons
enterest on adoption.
When June have the perfect parents she anounce the pregnancy and the situation for
his father and he say he help him.
In the next day, June and his father went to the adoctive parents house and they
decided things to the adoption.
For duration the pregnancy June was very made fun of his school mates but she
became good friend of adopctive parents, special for the man.
In the last of the pregnancy the adoctive parents separate but the baby stay with the
adoctive mother and June grow up to fast and stay with Mark.
In my opinion, the film is to good to sensatise the persons about young pregnancy but I
think that in the end June chould stay with the baby.
I recomend teenagers watches the film because important for learn about act
responsible and pregnancy and adoption.
2.- Answer the following questions about the text?
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2. a) What kind of text is this?
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b) Is the structure of the text the best? Explain why or why not.
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c) What could be done to make the text easier to read?
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1. 4.- Now, watch the trailer for the film (movie) and then write a version of the
text that is more coherent and well-structured.
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