Paragraph by Analogy Original Paragraph by Charles Martin

1. PARAGRAPH BY
ANALOGY
Group 2

2. Original paragraph
The brain is like the universe. It is composed on an intricate weave of neurons,
neurotransmitters, and a neural network similar to the vast universe which
composed of the galaxies, planets and a galactic network. Its similarities are
profound for the physical appearances of both are shocking and astounding
at the same time. The brain, like the universe, is connected or held together
by the synapses in a neuron as a dark matter keeps the universe intact.
Without these things, each would break down and would cease to exist. Now
in terms of the use and contribution, as the brain contributes to the
understanding of the things we can comprehend so does the universe
contribute to everything that is here; had been and will be; in short,
everything. The brain is like a dark corner waiting to be fully discovered while
the universe is like a whole undiscovered planet waiting to be fully unveiled.
So similarly, both are complex in nature that we humans are still starting to
uncover its dark and hidden secrets.

3. BRAIN
1. Composed of:
a. Neurons
b. Neurotransmitters
c. Neural network
2. Connected by:
a. Synapses
3. Contributed to its being:
a. Understanding of things
4. Complexity
a. Complex
UNIVERSE
1. Composed of:
a. Galaxies
b. Planets
c. Galactic network
2. Connected by:
a. Dark Matter
3. Contributed to its being:
a. Everything
4. Complexity
a. Extremely Complex
Physical Makeup
Connection
Contribution
Complexity

4. Analyzing the Original Paragraph
1. Unity
• Topic sentence
• Subject
• Controlling idea
The brain is like the universe
Brain
Like

5. • Supporting details
• Clinching Sentence
BRAIN UNIVERSE
It is composed on an
intricate weave of neurons,
neurotransmitters, and a
neural network
the vast universe which
composed of the galaxies,
planets and a galactic
network
is connected or held
together by the synapses in
a neuron
dark matter keeps the
universe intact
contributes to the
understanding of the things
we can comprehend
contributes to everything
that is here; had been and
will be; in short, everything
a dark corner waiting to be
fully discovered
is like a whole undiscovered
planet waiting to be fully
unveiled
So similarly, both are complex in nature that we humans
are still starting to uncover its dark and hidden secrets.

6. 2. Coherence
• Paragraph Order
• Structural Devices
Logical Order- point-by-point comparison from the
similar or known aspects to the unfamiliar or unknown
ones.
Signal Words – like, and, while
Repetition of key words- connected, similar
Use of pronouns an pronominal adjectives- it, these

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