2. Facebook
• When gathering feedback for my
second screening, I posted the video
on to my Facebook, so that friends
and family can comment and say
there opinions.
• This helped me a lot, especially with
Yvette Rees comment, where she
gave me some tips on how to
improve myself, which is something
that I later than changed.
3. My Own
Facebook Page
• When creating my own Facebook page for
my music video, and to advertise my artist, I
also thought it would be a great
opportunity to get feedback on not just the
video, but the page aswell especially the
ancillary tasks such as the magazine advert.
• All by Liam Conlon, the man I asked to be
the cover of ‘Hoodie’ in my final products,
and it was very informative, especially as he
has been with this journey with me.
4. YOUTUBE
• After posting my video on Facebook, I
then started to get more views, and
after 1 ½ months, I went from 0 views,
to 102.
• By the help of Facebook, and people
giving positive feed back, more people
were viewing my music video, and
giving me feedback.
• One feedback was my first feedback
from YouTube is by LIMEN345 and he
suggests things that I could change to
make better such as the ending, where
the sequence takes place.
5. Analyse and take critism.
I could see where Yvette Rees was coming
from, his head in the performance shots
were cut of due to the fact of me zooming
too much in when it comes to uploading
videos from a DSLR camera, and not
setting it in the correct setting.
So I wanted this video to be perfect, so I
went back and changed all the clips, and
got his head back.
Another successful thing about this
comment, is that she notices the costume
and is clear on what the storyline of the
narrative is, which is what I wanted my
target audience to understand and relate
to.
6. Analyse and take critism.
High angel shot
Black and white
Two person shot
Reflection filming
Pretending to set up a
camera, when actually I
filmed it.
Close up
Liam Conlon’s comment I felt was positive
yet negative.
The positives of the critism was that he
understood the story line well, which was
the main goal to achieve by the end of the
final product.
However when he says I should ‘Look into
more camera techniques’ I felt that I
already did that, using all these camera
shots you see around you, and many more
such as mid-shots and establishing shots.
However to take what he said into
consideration, I added more angled shots,
to show dominance with the woman
breaking up instead of the man.
7. Analyse and take critism.
LIMEN345 had some real
constructive critism, and
pointed out to me that the
second screenings ‘rewind back
in time’ scene was too long,
and I needed to speed it up,
which I totally agree with.
So when finalising my final
product instead of it being 12
seconds long, I placed it at a
short 5 seconds long, speeding
it up almost twice as long, and
it looked better than it did
before.
