2. Age:18 Gender: Male
Strengths Weaknesses
• Very good use of sound, amplified
• Camera pans and shots done very
well good soundtrack
• Builds suspense
• Editing very well done and good
special effects used to create a
CCTV camera effect
• Stick with one accent
• Improve interaction sound in
corridor
• The CCTV camera, could make it
behave more laggy, like a slideshow
of pictures.
Age:18 Gender: Female
Strengths Weaknesses
• Good use of CCTV
• I like the end shot with the
candlelight really conventional
• The beginning shot is really
good, when the door slam shut.
• The sound of the voices is quite
echoey.
Age:17 Gender: Female
Strengths Weaknesses
• Opening fades and camera effects
with fast cuts
• Music creepy
• Conventional – screams
• Transition of ghost girl
• Sound of two talking –unclear, high
pitch
• Camera goes too fast over Cora
• Text font could be darker
3. Age:18 Gender: Female
Strengths Weaknesses
• Good use of soundtrack to build
tension
• Followed conventions of the trailer
• Good use of editing and
camerawork
• There could be other visual effects
used.
• There static could gradually get
quiet at the end
Age:18 Gender: Male
Strengths Weaknesses
• Wide variety of shots and pacing
• Variety of editing techniques used-
CCTV camera scene
• Spooky sound effects- Creates
scary atmostphere
• Too loud in the first college scene
Age:17 Gender: Male
Strengths Weaknesses
• Editing looked good on it
• Was quite scary
• Fast paced trailer is good for
suspense
• Gave a climatic ending
• Maintained a sense of realism
• Felt that it gave away a bit too
much of a plot for a trailer
4. Age:18 Gender: Male
Strengths Weaknesses
• Really good use of effects • Sound could be better when
they’re in the street
Age:17 Gender: Female
Strengths Weaknesses
• Good use of the shots – wide
variety
• Good building of tension
• Soundtrack - well used
• Long shot –dragging jade away
worked well
• Sound levels
• American accent
Age:17 Gender: Male
Strengths Weaknesses
• Very good camerawork and editing
• Music Is really good
• Actors look good
• Sound at the beginning was a bit
inaudible
• Font could be a bit darker
