This is the final script that we have chosen to use within our film opening. After several redrafts we have decided this would be the most suitable script to fit with our film idea.

1. Script- Parental Figure
INT/HOUSE/DAY
JOEL rockinginthe corner.Mumbling.
JOEL
I’ve let you down. I’m sorry.
Repeated (whispered)
JOEL hearsa shuffling.Looksupsharply.BONNIEstoodinthe doorway.JOEL’Seyeslightup.
JOEL
(Whispering) Bonnie.
BONNIEturnsaround andruns away.JOEL getsup and followsherstumbling.
EXT/WOODS/DAY
JOEL exitsthe buildingfrantically,screamingafterher.
JOEL
Bonnie!
BONNIErunstowardssome blocksoutside.JOELfollowsbehindslowly.
EXT/WOODS/DAY
JOEL reachesa clearingandseesonlya noose.Lookingconfusedandguilty,JOELslowlywalksupto
the noose.JOEL putsthe noose slowlyaroundhisneck.Screencutsoff.
BONNIE
Laughs.
Costume andprops-
JOEL-
Scruffyeverydayclothing
BONNIE-
White dress,white socks,blackshoes.