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1. Language Content Style Proof read:
Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation
Headlines
There ae a lot
of descriptive
w ordsused
for example;
amazing,
pesky and
beautiful,
although the
language
used is fairly
straight
forward here
are next to
non-
metaphors
and similes
but I think that
this goes w ell
w ith the formal
style of review
that he has
done.
The
purpose
if this
review
was to
inform
people
about
certain
aspects
of a
particular
game.
The style of
the reviewis
mostly
formal;the
review gives a
detailed
explanationof
the game in
subjectand
seems fairly
professionally
done.
There were only a couple of words
that needed to be changed for
example “mutagems” is actually
spelt mutagens so I comments at
the side of the review with the
correct spelling. There was one a
few sentences that required a full
stop and a comma but overall he
punctuation was good.
There were no
headlines as the review
its self was a
description of the game
as well as brief synopsis
about the characters.