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You have a good essay just quite a few of small errors that need attention--here they are-- too much space above title and bellow date--you must keep double space para 1 short story "Everyday Use" where the story is told in the first person by Ms Johnson of view, it is evident Alice Walker, Dee is para 2 than words, and does go a long way (subject is things) out the fire, but she does not uneducated, including the life she and Maggie lived old house, and these have (refers to photos) para 3 comes back and starts she comes back and starts claiming received from Dee, she grows to be shy para 4 exclude the (subj=photos) she loves herself she does not want others Dee is dressed when she comes cherishes her roots (NO Dee despises her roots and hides them or denies them) ankle-length para 5 selfish--among other traits of Dee--have been people say about her what she does what she says Dee . . .plays important role in putting Dee, who grows through the traits acquired to become on works cited Literature: An Introduction to . . goes in italics
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1. These are the instructors requested corrections needed to this
paper:
You have a good essay just quite a few of small errors that need
attention--here they are-- too much space above title and bellow
date--you must keep double space para 1 short story "Everyday
Use" where the story is told in the first person by Ms Johnson
of view, it is evident Alice Walker, Dee is para 2 than words,
and does go a long way (subject is things) out the fire, but she
does not uneducated, including the life she and Maggie lived
old house, and these have (refers to photos) para 3 comes back
and starts she comes back and starts claiming received from
Dee, she grows to be shy para 4 exclude the (subj=photos) she
loves herself she does not want others Dee is dressed when she
comes cherishes her roots (NO Dee despises her roots and hides
them or denies them) ankle-length para 5 selfish--among other
traits of Dee--have been people say about her what she does
what she says Dee . . .plays important role in putting Dee, who
grows through the traits acquired to become on works cited
Literature: An Introduction to . . goes in italics
