2. So… repeat this 8 times (4 in each para)
X is described as being ‘QUOTE’. This means…The use of the TECHNIQUE
implies… This is effective as it shows… This makes the reader feel…
Aunt Pegg is described as “leering, sneering, peering”, meaning
that she is always watching them and is always around. The use of
the syndetic list implies that there is no end to her negative qualities
and her desire to make their life difficult. This is effective as it is
clearly irritating to the children because they can’t do what they want
and they get caught out for very small offenses. This makes the
reader feel sympathy towards the children because she is
excessively controlling and they become unhappy.
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The reader always feels sympathy for the children when she
‘snarls’ at the them and uses short, snappy sentences like ‘How dare
you!’. This is effective because shows that she is intimidating them
because she is accusing them without any explanation and seems to
enjoy punishing them.
