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SCREENPLAY & DIALOGUES
Montage
[Gawon ke kuch log ekk hi pariwar ke 4 sadasyon ko iss buri trah
se pitai kar rahen hain..the jayse kisi pagal janwar ko pita jata
hai.Gawon ke sare log muk darshak bane ..iss tamashe ko khadhe
dekh rahe the..]
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Kyun koyi Kisi ko iss tarah pitai karega? Akhir yeh kaun log the Jo
kisi pariwar ko iss bedardi ke saath sare- aam pit rahe the...kya
yeh koi apradhi the..? Yeh phir bekasoor the…?? yeh inke saath
koi sadyantra ho raha tha…?? . aise hi aapke mann main bhi aa
rahi hongi...aakhir kya ho raha tha yahan kyun yaatnayen di ja
rahi thi inhe..? Yeh janne ke liye hamein 4..mahine pahle chalna
hoga..!!
[supoul Bihar ki yeh ghatna hai, jis main ek dalit pariwar rahta tha.
Bahut hi garib priwar tha yeh. Sukhdev apne do bachhaon aur
patni ke saath sukun ki zindagi guzaar raha tha]
S No.-1
Ext/Int/night
Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha-Father/mother/daughter/son
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[scene will be opend with the wide short, sukdev coming towards
his home and inter into it ]
Mamta
[sukhdev ki beti apne ghar main pareshan tahal rahi hai..darwaze
pe khat ki aawaz hoti hai..]
Pita ji !! aap ittna der kahen kar diya??
Sukhdev
[ghar ke ander… aate huye aur haaton main pakdha samaan
mamta ko dete huye…has ker mamata se kaha]
To tu perashaan ho rahi thi meri bitya?
Mamta
[thodhe naraaz hote huye]
To na hoti chinta karne ki baat hi hai? Aap jo itna der kar diya aur
kitna andhera ho gaya hai..dekhiye toh..??
Basanti
[Etne main basanti Ander se aati hai aur kahti hai]
Tum bhi na mamata ke bapu ..apni aadat sudhar lo jamana ka
dekho kab ka ho jaye koi nahi janta!! achcha kahe itna der kar diya
aane main…kitna bar aap ko kaha hai...ki sanjh hone se pahle ghar
aajaya Kariye.? Lekin kabhi aap sunten hain hamri baat...!!
Sukhdev
[sukhdev basnti ko dekh kar kahta hai]
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Age se dhayaan rakhegen ham..tum sahi kah rahi ho..are wo apna
anil hai na..wo sahar jar aha tha bas usi se baat main samay ka
oata hi nai chala..khana lagade jaldi se…aur munna kahan hai…??
So gya ka..??
Basanti
Haan –haan laga rahe hain..haan munna sut gya hai..
Montage
Basnti khana lagati hai..roti aur saag ek plate main karke sukhdev
ko deti hai waisa hi plate basanti aur mamtaka bhi hai..sab milkar
khana khate hain..
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S No.-2
Ext/day
Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha-
Sukhdev
[sukhdev apne khet jaane ke liye lagbhag tayaar ho chukka tha
usne kandhe pe kudaal rakkha,aur basanti ko bahar se awaz
lagayi]
Mamata ki maa are oo mamata ki maan ham khet ja rahe
hain..naasta karne ka samay nahi hai..bahut jaldi dhup aa jata
hai..achcha mamta ke haanth khet par roti bhijwa dena..?…
basanti
[ander se mamta ki maan chilla kar kahti hai.aavaaz deti hai ke
thik hai]haan-haan bhijwa denge ..!
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S No.-3
Ext/day
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Location: sukhdev’s Khet
Cha-
[treatment sukhdev khet main hal jot raha hai..mamta chilla kar
bulati hai
Mamta
Pitaji jaldi..aaye
Sukhdev
[beti ki awaz ko sunkar jawab deta hai.]
Haan bitiya bas aa rahe hain..!!
Treatment –sukhdev hal wahin par chodh kar kandhe se gamcha le
kar moonh pochta hua mamta ke pass aata hai..
Mamta
[gusse se apne pita ko dhekte huye]ee ka pitaji ..aapko ketna baar
kaha hai ke khet main jab kaam karo sar main gamcha baandh liya
karo lekin aap gamcha ko garden main lapete rahte hain..dekhte
hain kitna garmi padh ra hai..
Sukhdev
[beti ko zara manate hai,phir sukhdev bolta hai]achcha meri
maan !! pahle roti khila de uske baad ji bhar ke daat legi..bas!
[treatment -mamta jaldi…se roti,piyaaz aur hari mirch nikaal kar
apne pita ko dene lagi aur ruaansi ho kar apne pita ko khate huye
dekhne lagi]
Sukhdev
[beti ko udaas dekh kar kahta hai..]ka hua mamta kahe udas lag ri
hai..tu..maan ne kuch kaha hai..ka tujhe..??
Mamta
[udasi se ] nahi pitaji ..kuch nai ..aap din bhar dhup main kaam
karte rahte hain..aur roti pyaj khayenge to aapko taakat kaise hoga
..aaj ghar main koi sabji nai tha toh maan ne roti pyaj hi bhej
diya…
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Sukhdev
Achcha..!! to tu isliye udaas hai..are tere baap ko isi pyaj aur roti se
sarir main bahut takat milta hai..tu kahe paresaan hoti hai..achcha
tune roti khaya..??
Mamta
[thodha chwok si gayi phir samhalte huye boli]
Haan…pitaji ham roti khaa kar hi ghar se nikle hain.. maan ne
hamko Aur bablu ko pahle hi de diya tha..khane ko.
Sukhdev
[thodha chwokte huye]
Bablu..?? iss samay toh woh school main hota hai?
Mamta
Haan…haan pitaji!aaj oska jee thik nahin tha isliye maan usko
school nahin bheji!
Sukhdev
[thodha sochte huye]
Tu bhi kal se school jaana suru…kar de.. teri maastarni saher se aa
gayi hai hamko raste main mili thi.
Mamta
[khush hote huye]
Haan…pitaaji maasterniji!saher se aagae..??
Sukhdev
[beti ke taraf hasker dekte huye kahta hai]
Chal…ab tu jaldi se jaa!teri maan paresaan ho rahi hogi..?
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Mamta
[Khane ke dabba ko kapde men baandhti hai.]haan
Haan…pitaji…maan chinta kar rahi hogi.. ab ham jaa rahe hain !
[treatment mamta ghar jaane ke liye khadhi ho jaati hai.. uske
saath hi sukhdev bhi khadha ho jaata hai]
Mamta
Pitaji sar pe gamcha jaroor baandh lena,bahut dhoop hai…!!
Sukhdev
[sukhdev use bharosa dilate huye bola]
Haan…haan bandh lenge ab tu jaldi jaa…!![sukhdev hasta hai]
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S No.-4
ext/day
Location: village road
Cha-
[treatmenr mamta jaldi…jaldi kadam badhati apne ghar ki taraf jaa
rahi hai..use maan aur bimaar bhayi ki chinta thi woh khush bhi
thi ke use kal se school jana tha……
mamta apni dhun men… chali jaa rahi thi.achanak mamta ko aisa
mahsus hota hai ke koi uska picha kar raha hai pal bhar ko who
rukhti hai!!phir apna vaham samajh kar jaldi…jaldi ghar ki taraf
badhne lagti hai..mamta ke kadam tez ho jate hain…!
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Sola varshiye mamta bahut khush thi ke kal se woh school
jaayegi,mamta bahut mehnati bachchi thi.apne maata pita aur
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bhaai ki laadli. har waqkat apne ghar ki chinta rahti. woh bahut
aage tak padhna chaahti thi…aur masterni banna chahti thi. dalit
hone ki vajah se gawon me log kam hi sammaan dete the.lekin isse
mamta ko kuch phark nahin padhta tha.lekin mamta ko aisa
mahsoos kyun hua? Ke koi uska picha kar raha hai..kya koi mamta
ka sachmuch picha kar raha tha!yaa phir ye uska vaham?tha?
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S No.-5
ext/day
Location: sukhdev’s house
Cha-basanti,sukhdev bablu,mamta.
treatment basanti bahar nal pe bartan dho rahi hai,sukhdev lakdi
kaat raha hai, chota beta bablu apni kitaab nikaal kar bahar padh
raha tha.
Mamta
[Mamta ghar ke ander se bahaar aati hai kaandhe main school bag
Dale…aur school dress pahne aur khushi se kahti hai] Maan,pitaji
ham school jaa rahe hai..!!
Sukhdev
[khushi se beti ko dekhta hai.]
Haan…haan beta tu jaa…jaldi!!teri maasterni tera rastaa dekh rahi
hogi?
Bablu
Pitaji didi aaj kitni sunder lag rahi hai na…[hasta hua kahta hai..]
Basanti
[Has kar kahti hai.] chal tu padhayi kar chup se…mamta school se
tu sidha ghar aana kahin sakhi saheli ke saath ghumne nai chal
jana.
Mamta
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Haan maan school se sidha ghar hi aayenge..ab ham jayen..??
Bablu
Haan..didi ab jaw..!!
Treatment - mamta hasti huyi ghar se baahar nikal jaati
hai..sukhdev aur basabti bablu ki baat sun kar hasne lagte hain.
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S No.-6
ext/day
Location: school road
Cha-mamta
Treatment -Mamta khushi…khushi school ki taraf kadam badhaye
jaa rahi thi .Use is baat ki khushi hai,ke uski ek baar school phir se
shuru ho gayi hai mamta apne pawn se patthar ko maarti huyi
school ke taraf badhi chali jaa rahi thi woh bahar se apne school ke
gate ko dekh kar khush ho gayi kuch bachche bhi idhar udharr
nazar aa rahe the ,woh sidha apne class ke taraf badh jati hai.
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Scene no.7
Int/day
Location: mamta’s classroom
Cha-mamta masterni
Mamta
[treatment mamta apne classroom ke darwaze ke bahaar se hi apni
maasterni ko kursi main bhaiti kitabon ko check karti dekhti hai]
Mamta
[mamta ne Khushi se thodha zore se kaha masterni
se kaha] pranam maasterniji..??
Maasterniji
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[chowk kar! aur khushi se uski taraf dhekte huye kahti hai]
Are mamta!aawo…ander to aawo kaho kaisa raha…ek mahine ka
chooti??
Mamta
[bura sa munh bana kar ]
Nahin…maasterniji,ek dam bhi achcha nahin laga…ham to roj yehi
sochte…ke aap sahar se kab aayengi aur hamaara padhai kab
suroo hoga!
Maasterniji
[usko manaate huye]
Achcha..aisa tha..bachche to khush hote hain chutti ka sunkar…
aur tumko dukh ho raha tha..Chalo ab ham aaa gaye naa!..Tum roz
padhne aana??
Mamta
Haan masterni ji abb ham roj padhne ayenge hamko bhi apki tarah
masterni jo banna hai..!!
Masterniji
Are wah..! ye to badi achchi baat hai ke tum bhi hamari tarah
masterni banogi..!!
Treatment – mamta masterniji ki baat ko sun kar muskura deti
hai…masterni bhi hasti hai.
Charge to mamta.
Sc. No.-8
ext/day
Location: sukhdev’s house
Cha- mamta basanti.
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Basanti
[treatment –basanti kapdhe ko rassi pe dalte hai!mamta ghar ke
ander aati..Basanti beti ko dekh ker…kapdhe ko vahin chodhti huyi
beti ko aakar pyaar se kaandhe se pakad kar poochti hai
basanti
are ! hamri bitiyaa aa gayi?kaisa raha tumra pahla din
schoolka..??
Mamta
[khushi se maa ki taraf dhek huye]very good maan.!!
bahut majaa aayaa!maasterniji ne kaha…ke ek mahine ka jo
padhai naga huaa hai?woh sab bhi puraa maasterniji karvaa
dengi..!
basanti
are wah..! meri beti to angreji bol rahi hai…aaj??
mamta
haan maan !! ham bhi angreji bolenge jaisa masterni ji bolti
hain..na..waisa hi..??
basanti
achcha ..! ja abb jake school dress utar le abhi bablu bhi aane hi
wala hoga…khana laga deten hain aake khale ..
mamta
achcha maan ham abhi aate hain..!!
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Treatment – mamta ander chali jati hai..basanti phir kapda rassi
main dalne lag jati hai.
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S No.-9
Ext/day
Location: school road
Cha-mamta
Treatment -mamta roz ki tarah school jaa rahi thi apne aap main
magan Bahut dino ke baad use phir aisa mahsoos……huwaa ke koi
uska picha kar raha hai,usne do teen baar piche mudh ke bhi
dekha,lekin koi nazar nahin aayaa,darti huyi mamta jaldi…jaldi
school ki taraf badhne lagi…mamta ka chappal tut jata hai…mamta
apne tute chappal ko dekhti hai..phir piche moodh kar bhi dekhti
hai..mamta apne dono chappal ko haanth main lekar nange pawn
zor-zor se chalne lagti hai..itne main mamta ke pawn main kuch
chubh jata hai…mamta krah uthti hai..mamta ke pawn se khun
nikal raha hota hai..mamta ke aankhon main aansu aa jate hain
Mamta
[Mamta mutter] pawn main to bahut dard ho raha hai..ham school
kaise jayenge..?? [mamta apne bag se apna ek rumal nikalti hai aur
use apne pair main baandhti hai..phir idhar-udhar dekhti hai…use
koi nazar nahi aata hai..mamta langdate…huye wapas ghar ki taraf
chal padhti hai.
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Aakhir ek hi tarah ka anubhav mamta ko kyun ho raha tha. use
yeh uska vaham to nahin lag raha…tha yaa phir koi sahi main
uska picha kar raha tha..lekin iss choti si bachchi ka koi picha
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kyun karega…kya mamta ke saath koi anhoni hone wali thi yaa
kuch aur….hi ..baat thi…??
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S No.-1o
Int/day
Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha- basanti , mamta
Treatment – mamta ghar main aati hai..mamta ko dekh kar sabji
kaatti basanti chawk jaati hai.
Basanti
[basanti sabji katna chodh mamta se poochti hai] Are mamta tu iss
samay …??ka hua ..?
Mamta
[ruwansi hokar maan ke pass langdate huye aati hai] dekho
na..maan..mera chappal toot gya ! aur pawn main kaanch bhi
chubh gya hai..[ mamta apna khun main sana pair maan ko
dikhati hai.]
Basanti
[chikh kar] hay re dayya ee to bahute khoon bah raha hai…!! Tu
baith ham abhi haldi garam karke late hain…!
Treatment – basanti haldi garam karke laati hai aur mamta ko pair
main lagati hai…phir ek patti baandh deti hai.
Basanti
Abb tu aaram kar.
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Mamta
Maan aaj masterni ji..ganit ki pariksha lene wali thi..aur dekho
na..hamko ka ho gya..??
Basanti
To ka hua..? kal parikcha de degi..teri masterni to bahut achchi
hai..na.? tujhe pyar bhi to karti hai..!
Mamta
Haan maan…masterniji bahut achchi hain..lekin mera chappal bhi
to toot gya hai…
Basanti
Tu chinta na..kar bitiya abhi bablu school se aa jayega to tera
chappal silwa lenge..!
Treatment –mamta maan ki baat ko sunkar khush ho jati hai.
Charge to mamta.
S No.-11
Int/Night
Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha- sukhdev ,basanti ,bablu mamta.
Treatment - basanti apne pati aur dono bachchon ko raat ka khana
Khila rahi hai.
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Bablu
[khana ko dekh kar bablu bura sa moonh banakar bolta hai] ee……
kaa maan? sab din ek sa khana? bas roti dal? kabhi murgi bhi
pakaw naa maan ?
Mamta
[gusse se bhai ko dekhti huyi kahti hai]
Ae…bablu chup.. se khana kha.bas bakar-bakar karta hai.jo ghar
main hoga wahi toh pakayegi maan..!!
Sukhdev
[bachchon ko ladta dekh sukhdev thodha sa mood achcha karne ke
liye kahta hai.]
Thik toh..bitwa kah raha hai..? sab din ek sa khana? are…khabi
kabhaar murgi bhi banaa de bhagwaan hamra bachcha log ke
waste…
Basanti
[thodha gusse main pati ko dekh ke bolti hai] Kahan se murgi
banaaye? thik se roti daal toh jutta nai……hai..murgi kahan se
pakayen..
Sukhdev
[patni ko thodha gussa kam karne ke liye has kar kahta hai ]
Dekh…dekh gussa na ker.. mamta ki maan kal murgi hi
pakega..hamre bachcha log ke liye...
Mamta
Nai pitaji aap bablu ki baat mat suniye iska to dimaag hi kharab
hai..
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Sukhdev
Are bitiya ham bhi toh bahutte din se nai ‘khaye’ hai na murgi tera
dil nai karta achcha khana khane ko..bol..aur tere pair se khoon
nikla hai..usko waapas bhi to lana hai..[sukhdev bol kar hasta hai.]
kal to murgi hi banega…!!
[treatment - mamta sukhdev ko dekhti hai.. aur has deti
hai..sukhdev has deta hai..sabhi ke chehre main khushi thi ke kal
murgi banega khane main..]
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S No.-12
Int/day
Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha-
Basanti
[treatment mamta so rahi hai,basanti aakar mamta ko uthati hai. ]
Are…mamta uth school nahin jaana ka tujhe ..tera dard kaisa
hai..bitiya..?
Mamta
[dhire se uth baithti hai aur wahin se diwaar ki taraf dekhti ] maan
pawn main to thoda dard hai…lekin hamko school jana jaroori
hai..?
Basanti
Na..beti aisa dard main… tu paidal chalegi to aur dard badh jayga
aaj tu..hai na..school naga kar de..kal se school chali jaygi.!
Mamta
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[udas ho kar] thik maan jaisa …aaj ham school nai jaate hain…
maan ek baar aur haldi ka lape kar do na..pair main..??
Basanti
Haan bitya ham abhi lekar aate hain…tu abhi aaram kar.
Treatment - basanti kamre se nikal jati hai..mamta kuch sochne
lagti hai
Charge to mamta.
S No.-13
ext/day
Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti
Treatment –sukhdev ghar ke andar in karta hai..mamta ko charpayi
pe baithe dekh kar chawnk jata hai..apne haanth main pada thaila
ek taraf rakhta hai..
Sukhdev
Are bitya …aaj school kahe nai gayi..??
Mamta
[andar se aati basanti kahti hai] mamta ke pair main abhi bhi dard
hai isiliye aaj ham usko school nai bhejen hain..kal se school jaygi..
Sukhdev
Achcha..kiya aaj school nai bheja abb hamri bitya naya chappal
pahan kar school jayegi…
Mamta
[Khushi se] naya chappal pitaji..??
Sukhdev
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Haan…bitya naya chappal..[ sukhdev apne kapde ke jhole se ek
chappal nikal kar mamta ko deta hai..
Mamta
[mamta chappal dekh kar khush ho jati hai] wah pitaji ee to bahut
sunder hai…ek dam sahar ki ladkiyon ki tarah hai..ham pahan ke
dekhen..??
Sukhdev
Haan..haan..dekh pahan ke..!
Basanti
[basanti pahanne se rokti hai.] rook abhi ..mat pahan ismain to
edhi hai tujhe aur jayda dard hoga…
Mamta
[mamta zid karti hai.] nahi maan ..dard nahi hoga ..abhi ham
pahan kar dekhate hain..[ mamta chappal pahanti hai aur chal kar
dikhati hai..]
Sukhdev
[Khush ho kar] dekha hamri bitya ka..dard udanchu ho gaya.!!
Treatment mamta khushi..khushi chappal ko pahan kar chalti
hai..basanti aur sukhdev mamta ko khush dekh kar khush hote
hain.
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S No.-14
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Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti
[treatment Basanti ghar ke rasoi se mamta ko aavaaz deti hai..
naashta karne liya bulaati hai!]
Basanti
Are mamta jaldi se aake nasta kar le..
Mamta
[Mamta school dress pahne ander kamre se nikal kar basanti ke
pass aati hai.!] Nahin maa!ham nasta aakar karlenge hamko der ho
gayi hai ..! dekho maan ..?chappal kitna achcha lag raha hai…apni
masterni ko bhi ham apni chappal dikhayenge..!
[mamta khush ho kar maan ko dikhati hai.]
[basanti chappal ke taraf dekh kar] haan bitya bahut achcha lag
raha hai..! ekdam sahar ki ladki ki tarah..
Mamta
Achcha maan ham ja rahe hain …aate samay bablu ko bhi ham
saath leke ayenge..
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S No.-15
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Location: school road
Cha- mamta
[der ho jaane ki wajah se mamta jaldi –jaldi school ki taraf badh
rahi thi..apne nate chappal ko bhi muskura kar dejhe ja rahi
thi.jaldi-jaldi school jaa rahi hai.Achaanak mamta ko kisi ne ek
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divaar ke piche kisi ne khich liya…ye itna jaldi main hua ke mamta
ko kuch bhi samajh main nahi aya ..lekin mamta ke hosh udh
gaye..mamta ke face reaction lene hain.
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Aakhir Ye kya ho raha tha mamta ke saath..!! aur koun tha woh
jo mamta ke saath aisi harkaten kar raha tha?? kya ye mamta ke
marzi se ho raha tha ..? ya koi phir mamta ke saath koi
jabardasti….kar raha tha…aane wale din mamta ke liye kuch
kathin hone wale then..
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S No.-16
Int/Night
Location: sukhdev’s bed room
Cha- basanti, sukhdev.
[treatment sukhdev aur basanti zameen par lete huye the aur
mamta aur bablu ke bare main baaten kar rahe the]
Basanti
[lete huye chat ki taraf dekhte huye bolti hai.]
Mamta ke baapu!!ab tum mamta ke liye ver dhoondo 16 saal ki ho
gayi hai,kuch din se thodha chup…chup si rahti hai,pataa nahin…
padhai ka bojh hai ya …phir kuch aur?
Sukhdev
[thodha othte huye gusse se bolta hai ]
Yeh tu kya bol rahi hai?...tera dimag to kharab nai ho gaya
hai..mamta achchi bachchi hai!use to ham masterni banaayenge !
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haan padhai ka boj hoga isiliye chup rahti hogi bitia hamri…tu uski
maan hai ki dusman ..?? tub hi apni beti ko bojh samajhti hai
na..ke beti 16 saal ki ho gayi hai…ab uske liye war dhundo…abhi
mamta bachchi hai…sahar main mamta ki umar ki ladki frak
pahan ke khelti hai..! aur tu uski byah ki baat kar rahi hai..
Basanti
[basanti sukhdev ki baat soon kar use samjhane ki koshish karti
hai.] mamta ke bapu ye sahar nai hamra gawn hai..gawn ke log
padhe likhe hote nahi hote hain ….yahan ke log yahi chahte
hain ..ke jitna jaldi ho sake beti ki bidayi kar den …ham ka gawn se
alag hain..??
Sukhdev
[gusse se patni ke taraf bina dekh ke bola]
Haan alag hain ham ..hamri bitya masterni banegi..ketna sauk se
hamri bitya school jati hai..tu uske bare aisa baat kar rahi ke jaise
tu uski sauteli maan hai..!!Chal…ab so jaa subah hamko jaldi
uthna hai.. dusre gawon jana hai.. kheti ka kuch samaan lana hai..
sewere roti de degi raaste ke liye!!
[treatment -sukhdev dusri karwat leke sone ki koshish karta hai…
sukhdev ke chehre pe kuch pareshani jhalak rahi thi..basanti bhi
kuch pareshan nazar aa rahi thi.!]
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Int/Day
Location: sukhdev’s home
Cha-mamta
[treatment mamta gumsum aangan main bathi huyi hai aur kisi
soch main gum hai basanti mamta ko dekh kar pareshan hoti hai.]
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Basanti
[beti ko khamosh dekh kar basanti poochti hai]
Ka…bitia ka huwa? kaa soch ri hai jaa.. jake tayyar ho ja school ke
vaaste..school nai jana hai..ka..??
Mamta
[zameen ke taraf dekhte huye kahti hai.]
Maan…ji thik nai lag raha hai..school nahin jaane ka man kar raha
hai hamko !
Basanti
[paas aakar bathte huye kahti hai.]
Kaa huya?koi baat hai ka?..masterniji ne kuch kaha hai..kya..?
Bahut chup,chup hai do din se?
Mamta
[mamta jaldi se maan ko dekhti aur muskurati hui boli]
Nahin maa…koi baat nahin hai…masterniji to bahut achchi
hain..tu to bas toorant perashan ho jati hai…asal main pitaji dosre
gawon gayen hain na..? isliye socha aaj school naga karlete hai aur
aaj ham sara din ghar ka kaam kar lete hain..agar tu chahti hai ke
ham school chale jayen to thik hai ham chale jaate hain.!!
Basanti
[itminaan ka saas lete huye]
Achcha,isi vaste hamari laado dukhi hai.. bablu hai na!tu school
jaa…nahin to tera bap bahut gussa…kahega ke ham hi tujhe school
jane nahi diya hoga jaa jaldi se jake jaldi se tayyar …ho jaa!!
Treatment –mamta na chahte huye bhi school ke liye tayyar hone
chali jati hai…basanti muskurati mamta ko jate huye dekhti hai.
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Charge to basanti
S No.-18
ext/Day
Location: school road
cha-mamta
[treatment –mamta dare…dare kadmo se school ki taraf badh rahi
thi..Bahut saare bure aur daraawne khayal mamta ke mann main
aa…rahe the. aur us din ke ghatna se uska man bahut dara hua
tha! achaanak mamta ke kandhe me piche se kisi ne haanth
rakkha.. mamta bhaibit ho kar piche palti!!]
Sarita
[treatment sarita mamta ki saheli mamta ka dara chehra dekh kar
hasne lagi.aur haste huye kaha……] Are!tu to aise dar gayi ke main
koi bhoot hoon..!! aise ka dekh rahi hai apni sakhi ko? pahle
dekhaa nai ka kabhi..??
Mamta
[thodha sa normal hote huye kahti hai.]
Ooo ham samjhe ke pata nahin koun hai..? isi liye ham darr.. gaye
aur koi baat nai hai..! chal jaldi chal nahin to kachcha suru ho
jayegi!
Treat ment mamta aur sarita jaldi-jaldi school ki taraf badhne lagti
hain.
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S No.-19
Ext/Day
Location: school gate
cha-
[ school ki chutti ke baad sarita aur mamta school gate ke paas
khadhi hain]
Sarita
[apne baalo ke riban ko thik karte huye]
Mamta ham mousi ke ghar jaa rahe hai …amrood sita phal lane..tu
bhi chal na..thode der main aa jayenge!!
Mamta
[mamta kuch soch kar] nai sarita ham samay par ghar nahi
pahoonchenge to maan paresaan hogi…tu chali ja..
Sarita
Achcha thik hai…amrood aur sita phal ham tumkombhi denge
..achcha thik hai ham chalet hain..warna mausi phir hamko
dategi ..!!
Treatment Dono saheli hasti hai …phir dono apne raste chali jaati
hai
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Ext/Day
Location: school road
cha-mamta suresh
[mamta phir dari sahmi si ghar ki taraf badhne lagi
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Abhi kuch hi door……chali thi ke use piche se kisi ne khickh kar ek
taraf kar diya….mamta use apne saamne paakar paseene…paseene
ho gayi aur dar ke maare uske gale se aavaaj hi nahin nikli]
Suresh
[mamta ki taraf dekhte huye has kar bola]
Mamta Kaa ham itne bure hain jo dekh kar der gayi tum..??
Mamta
[ darte aur apne aapko chudhate huye]eee………tum…ham…hamre
saath aisa kahe kar rahe ho.. ham ka kiye hain tumra..hamko
chodho…hamko ghar jaane do hamri maan paresaan ho rahi hogi
hato hamre raste se..??!!
Sures
[suresh ek dam se mamta ko chodete huye bola] Lo chodha
diya!...abb khus..??
[treatment mamta ek taraf rote huye jaldi se apne aap ko khud
main samatte huye jaldi se jaane ke liye aage badhi hai lekin?
suresh uske saamne aa kar khadaa ho gaya aur kahne laga]
Sures
[mamta ke thodhi ko upar karte huye bola]
Pehle!!vada kar hamse kal yahin par milegi..?humko tum se bahut
sara……baat kar na hai milegi tabi to bataaenge aur kal tere liye ek
tohfa bhi layenge samjhi..??
Mamta
Tohfa wo kyun lawoge mere liye ?? maan kisi se kuch bhi lene
mana karti hai isliye hamko tumse kuch nahi lena hai..
Suresh
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[mamta ki baaten sunkar suresh has deta hai] are tubhi na ekdam
pagli hai.. tujhe batane ki kya jaroorat hai..ke hamne tujhe tohfa
diya hai.!!
Mamta
To kya maan se jhuth bolenge ham…!
Suresh
Tu maan se sab baat karti hai…kya..kya ..??
Mamta
Haan ham maan se sab baat karte hai..!!
Suresh
Aaj ki bhi baat maan se batayegi..??
Treatment suresh ki baat soon kar mamta suresh ko gaur se dekhti
hai…suresh mamta ko muskura kar dekhta hai…mamta bhi
muskura deti hai.
Suresh
Kabhi-kabhi koi baat maan se bhi… chupana padhta hai..!![mamta
ko gahri nazron se suresh dekhta hai]
Charge to mamta
S No.-21
int/Night
Location: sukhdev’s home
cha- bablu , sukhdev,basanti.
[ bablu laalten main padhai kar raha hai!.sukhdev kudaal thik kar
raha hai!basanti roti banaa rahi hai mamta ko wahan na dekh kar
basanti se poochta hai..]
Sukhdev
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[kudaal ek taraf rakhta hai]
Are! mamta ki maa…??aaj mamta badi jaldi so gay..i?uska tabiyat
to thik hai na..?
Basanti
[roti ek taraf rakhti huyi]
Haan ..tabiyat thik hai kahke suti hai ke kal masterniji jaldi bulayi
hai..khana khake suti hai..tum chinta mat karo !!
Sukhdev
Achcha-achcha…ab jaldi se khana de de bahut bhuk lagi hai..!!
haan ek baat toh ham batana hi bhul gaye ..ooo jo apna lohaar hai
na..sambhu…kal uski beti ka byah hai…hamlog ko bulaya hai..
Basanti
[kuch sochti hai] jaa ke ka karenge …sau pachas…ka kharcha
badh jayga..!!
Bablu
Nai maan hamlog jaroor byah main jaynge..!! wahan..achch-achcha
khane ko milega..hai na..pitaji..??
Sukhdev
Haan-haan…bitwa..ye teri maan hai na…bass aise hi bak-bak karti
rahti hai..!!
Basanti
[gusse se bablu ko ek thappad marti hai] tu bass khan eke liye
marr kahe tujhe ghar main to khana milta nai…hai.
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Treatment basanti se maar kha kar bablu rone lagta hai..sukhdev
bablu ko chup karane lagta hai..
Sikhdev
Tumko ka hua hai..?? badi..gusse main hai aaj tu…?bhala bachcha
ko aise koi marta hai..ka..?? kal mamta aur bablu ko saath le kar
byah main chal jana …sau rupya bitya ki maan ko de dena.
Treatment narazgi se sukhdev ko dekhti hai.
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Location: school road
Cha-
[ treatment aaj mamta ke pawn dar kar nahi balke tez..tez
chal rahe then aaj uske chehre main ajeeb si muskurahat thi solah
saal ki kishori…ke man main aaj ek naya ahsaas jaag raha tha!
woh baar…baar piche mudh kar dekh rahi thi maano kisi ka
intazaar kar rahi hai lekin koyi nahin aaya uske chehre ka rang
pikha padh gaya tha…mamta ke aankhen kisi ko dhund rahi thin
lekin wahan mamta ke alawa koi nahi tha..mamta udaas mann se
school ke gate main ghus jaati ha!!
Ext/day
S No.-23
Location: sukhdev’s house
Cha-mamta ,basanti,bablu.
Treatment mamta ghar main aati hai basanti bablu ke baal ko thik
kar rahi hai..maan ko naya kapda aur bablu ko naya kapda pahne
dekh kar mamta ko bahut hairat hoti hai…who apna school bag
charpayi pe fek kar basanti ke pass aati hai.
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Mamta
Maan tum sabne naya kapda kyun pahna..hai??
Basanti achcha tu aa gayi !! ja jaldi se tayyar ho ke aaja ..sambhu
lohar ki beti ka byah hai ..aaj ham sab wahin jaa rahe hai…!!
Mamta
[mamta boora moonh bana leti hai] nai maa tu bablu ke saath chali
ja mera ji nai hai jane ka..!
Bablu
Chalo na..didi..? wahan bahut mithayi bhi hogi khane ko..?
Basanti
Eee ka baat hua..?? tumko ka ho gya… jo nai jane ka mann hai…ja
jake jaldi se tayyar ho !.jab dekho to jiye thik nai hai..??
Treatment mamta basanti ki baat sun kar ander kamre main chali
jaati hai.
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Ext/day
Location: sambhu house
Cha-mamta ,basanti.sambhu ,bablu sambhu suresh sambhu wife
and others…
Treatment sambhu ki beti ka byah ho raha hai…kuch bheed
bhaadh hai..sab log ek jagah khade ho kar byah hote dekh rahe
hain mamta bhi bedili se byah dekh rahi hai..achanak mamta ki
nazar saamne khade suresh par jati hai..jo mamta ko dekh raha
tha..suresh ko dekh kar mamta ka udas chehra khil jata
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hai..suresh mamta ko ishare se bahar bulata hai..mamta ishare se
inkaar karti hai..suresh phir ishare se bulata hai..mamta dheere se
wahan se nikalna hi chah rahi thi ke basanti aa jati hai..mamta ruk
jati hai..suresh ko gussa aa jata hai..aur who wahan se chala jata
hai..mamta ko bahut dukh hota hai suresh se na milne ka.
Charge to mamta
Ext/day time 5 pm
S No.-25
Location: sukhdev’s house
Cha-mamta ,basanti,bablu
[treatment mamta ke haanth main do notebook hai woh maan ke
paas aati hai maa bahaar aangan main jhaadhu laga rahi hai bablu
lattu nacha raha hai..]
Mamta
[mamta kuch jhijhakte huye maan ke pass aati hai aur basanti se
kahti hai]
maan!ham sarita ke ghar jaa rahe hain thodha saa likhna rah gaya
tha…ham aadhe ghante main aa jayenge tum chinta mat karna.
Basanti
Eee achanak tu sarita ke ghar kahe ja rahi hai..?? aaj school to gayi
thi na..tu ..? to likhna kaise rah gaya..??
Mamta
[Thode gusse se] tum bhi na..maan kabhi-kabhi thanedarni..ban
jati ho ..bas abhi aa jate hain na ham..
Basanti
Achcha thik hai..bablu ko saath leja ..!!dekh saam hone ko hai..!
Mamta
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Tum bhi na..maan .bablu ka karega wahan par..ham to
likhenge..sarita ka to kio bhayi bhi nahi hai..jiske saath bablu
khelega…
[maan ki baat sune bina mamta ghar ke darvaaje se bahaar nikal
jaati hai.
Charge to basanti
S No.-26
Ext/Evening
Location: village road
Cha-
[treatment mamta jaldi…jaldi apni manzil ki taraf badhi chali jaa
rahi thi…kabhi usne jhoot nahin kaha tha apni maa se…is baat ka
use afsoos bhi hai lekin woh dil ke haanton majboor ho chuki thi.
Mamta
v/o ham aaj tak maan se aise jhuth kabhi nahi bola..pata nahi
maan ko kaisa laga hoga….mamta phir chalne lagti hai..mamta ko
samne suresh nazar aata hai…mamta khadi ho jati hai..suresh
mamta ke pass aata hai..
suresh
[mamta ko gaur se dekh kar kahta hai] aaj maan ko sach bata kar
aayi hai..ya jhuth bol kar aayi hai.
Mamta
Agar sach kahte toh ham tumse milne aa sakte then ka…??
Suresh
Achcha ab toh tum safed jhuth bolne lagi hai na..??
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Mamta achcha abb ham chalte hain..!! achcha..bulaya kyun
tha..hamko…yahan ??
Suresh
Abhi aayi aur abhi chal di..aisa bhi ka kaam hai..tumko..?? achcha
dekho ham tumre liye ka laye hain..?? [suresh apne pocket se ek
dabba nikal kar deta hai..
Mamta
Ka..hai..??
Suresh
Pahle kholo to !!
Mamta
[Mamta kholti hai] achcha nakhun paalis hai..!!
Suresh
Haan dekho ..kitna sunder rang hai..!!
Mamta
[Khushi se dekhti hai.] haan bahut sunder rang hai..!!
Suresh
Haan ekdam tumre jaisa sunder
Mamta
[Sharma kar]hatt ham sundar kahan hain..??
Suresh
Kaun andha kahta hai ke tum sundar nahi ho..?? hamri nazar se
dekho tum kitni sundar ho.!!
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Treatment suresh mamta ka haanth pakadta hai..mamta haanth
chudati hai..suresh phir pakadta hai..mamta chup rahti
hai..suresh mamta ko kiss karna chahta hai..mamta suresh ko
dhakka de deti hai..suresh ladkhada kar niche gir jata hai..mamta
darr jati hai mamta suresh ko uthane ki koshish karti hai..suresh
uske haanth ko jhatak deta hai..mamta ruwansi ho kar suresh ko
dekhti hai..suresh uth jata hai..aur jane lagta hai.
Mamta
[suresh ka haanth pakad kar] hamse ruth gaye tum ..??
Suresh
[Suresh gusse se] itna jor se hamko dhakka jo diya tumne..agar
ham mar jate to..??
Mamta
[Surash ki baat soon kar suresh ki moonh main haanth rakh deti
hai.] aise to mat bolo !! koi itna bhi jor se dhakka nahi de diya
tha..ham?? achcha ab ham chalet hain raat hone ko aayi hai maan
chinta kar rahi hogi
Suresh
Achcha wada kar ke kal khet ke pass ayegi school ke baad..tab jane
denge ham tumko..??
Mamta
[jhunjhla kar] haan baba ham aa jayenge ab jane do hamko ..!!
Treatment mamta chali jaati hai..suresh mamta ko kamini nazaron
se jate huye dekhta hai.
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S No.-27
Ext/night
Location: sukhdev house
Cha-mamta ,basanti ,bablu and sukhdev.
[treatment Raat ho chuki thi Ghar ke bahar aangan main..basanti
aur sukhdev mamta ka intazaar kar rahe the..achanak darwaaze
per khatka sunai diya..mamta darwazaa laga rahi thi ]
Sukhdev
[Gusse se mamta se bola]
itne der se kahan thi, ee..samaye ghar aane ka hai..?
Mamata
[Thartharati aur kapkapati aawaaz mein sukhdev se bolti hai]
Pi...pita ji hamm sahi samay pe sarita ke ghar se. ni..nikle the.
Lekin gali main kutta bahut tha. To hum uske hatne ka raah dekh
rahe the . isliye pitaji der ho gaya… Hamko ! maaf kar dena pita
ji..??
sukhdev
[zoor se haste huye]
Are! Hum to samjhe the ki hamari beti sherni hai, are ee to chuhiya
nikli..chuhiya..!!
Basanti
[daantte huyemamta ko ]
Chal jaldi se haanth munh dho le ham khana lagate hain..jara iss
ladki ko akal nai hai ke itna raat main ghar se baahar nai rahte
hain..jane kab akal ayga isko ..??
Treatment Mamta apne kamre main jaa kar char payi pe baith jati
hai..mamta ke jaan main jaan aati hai mamta itminan ka saans leti
hai.
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S No.-28
Ext/afternoon
Location: khet ke peeche
Cha-mamta and suresh
Mamta
[mamta Ghabraai Huyi suresh ke pass pahuchti hai..suresh
mamta ko dekhte hi gale laga leta hai mamta suresh ko apne se
alag karti hui kahti hai]
Mamta
Ye kya kar rahe ho tum ??Hamko ee sab achcha nai lagta hai !! ye
sab achcha kaam nai hai..??
Suresh
[Mamta ke baalon ko sahlaate huye kahta hai]
Are ! tumko koun ee sab bol diya hai ke ee sab galat hai..Galti hum
ka kar rahe hain? Ham to pyaar kar rahe hai…are pagli pyar karna
paap thode hai.Koi hai hamre jitna smart iss gawn main.. Are goan
ki sari ladhkiyan na tujhse jalan karti hai .aur ke..Ham hain ki sirf
tere par hi marte hain..!! aur tu hai ki sahi aur galat bata rahi hai
hamko ! tu nai janti hai…ke Tu kitni sunder hai…achcha ek gana
tumko sunate hain ..tumra mood hai na..ekdam achcha ho jayga
Mamta
[suresh ki ye sabb batein mamta ko achchi lag rahi thi ya nahi
Who khud samajh nahi pa rahi thi!saham ki gahraai ko dekhte
huye usne suresh se kaha] Bahut der ho gya ! Ab ham ghar jaate
hain
Treatment suresh mamta ki baat ko ansuna karke apne mobile
main gana lagata hai.[roop tera mastana pyar mera diwana bhul
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kahin hamse na ho jaye…ye gana soon ke mamta Sharma jati hai…
suresh mamta ka bag ek taraf phek deta hai..aur mamta ko bahon
main bhar ke kiss karne lagta hai…phir mamta aur suresh apne
had ko paar kar dete hain.]
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Mamta jo kabi jhoot nahin bolti thi ! lekin ab jhoot bolne lagi thi
.woh kiske vajha se jhoot bol rahi thi!..kya ye jhoot use bahut hi
mahanga padhne wala tha yaa woh sachmuch mamta se pyaar
karta tha?? Mamta suresh ko bina jane suresh se pyaar karne lagi.
kya mamta ko itni badhi galti karni chahiye thi use…apni maan se
ye baat zaroor bataani chahiye thi…ya apni saheli sarita se hi
suresh ke bare main bata deti .mamta ne aise aadmi par vishwaas
kar liya tha jisse woh sirf chand dino se hi jaanti thi…aane wale kal
main mamta ke liye kya tufan aane wala tha isse mamta bilkul
bekhabar thi.!
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Ext/day
Location: sukhdev house
Cha-mamta
[treatment mamta bhari man se thoda langdati huyi aangan main
jhaadhu laga rahi hai aur maan nal ke paas bartan dhoti basanti
mamta ko gumsum dekh kar pareshan ho jati hai basanti bartan
dhona chodh kar mamta ke pass ati hai.
Basanti
Ka hua hamri bitya ko..jo itna chup hai..aur tere pawn main ka
hua hai..jo langda ke chal rhi hai..kahin chot oot lag gya ka..??
Mamta
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[mamta maan ke bbat ko sun ke darr jati hai.] nai maan kuch nai
hai..sar main dard ho raha hai..aur kuch nai..[achanak mamta ko
kuch yaad ata hai ] maan ham sarita ke pass se aate hain bas adha
ghanta main.
Basanti
[hairat se ] abhi to kah rahi thi ke sar dard kar raha hai..aur abhi
achanak sarita ke ghar jana hai..aram kar chup se..!!
Mamta
Nahi maan hamko bahut jaroori kaam hai..ham abhi aate hain
Treatment mamta maan se kah kar ghar se baahar nikal jaati
hai..basanti khud se sawal karti hai
Basanti
[basanti mutter] mamta ko ka ho gya hai..aisi to hamri bitya nahi
hai.
Charge to basanti
S No.-30
int/evening
Location: khet
Cha –mamta and suresh
Treatment suresh mamta ko dekh kar darr jata hai..mamta
ghabrayi si suresh se bolti hai
Mamta
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Sures hamko kuch bhi achcha nai lag ra hai..!! tum apne mata pita
ko hamre ghar bhejo byah ke liye..!!
Suresh
[Mamta ko samjhata hai] bhej denge ..itna paresaan kahe ho rahi
hai pagli ?? ham..kahin bhag jayenge ka..tumko chodh ke..?
Mamta
[Mamta gusse se suresh ka collar pakad leti hai.] aisa na..phir se
mat bolna !! nahi to ham tumri jaan le lenge….!
Suresh
[Thoda sambhalte huye ] dil to le hi liya hai..! jaan bhi ab le hi lo..??
Mamta [collar chodti hai] hamko na majaak ekdam pasand nahi
hai..!
Suresh
Ham majaak kahan kar rahe hain..?? bas ab ham kuch hi din main
apne pariwar walon ko bhejte hain .! tum chinta mat karo…aur
haan.. abb thoda hamlog ko kam milna chahiye hamari byah ki jo
baat hone waali hai….kyun sahi kah rahe hain na ham.??
Treatment mamta suresh ki baat ko soon kar has deti hai..aur
wahan se chali jati hai suresh sar main haanth rakh kar kuch der
kuch sochta hai phir wahan se chala jata hai.
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Sce no.31
int/day
Location: sukhdev Home
Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti,bablu.
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Mamta
Treatment mamta School jane ke liye tayyar hoti hai..apne baalon
main ribbon laga rahi hai..bablu baahar padh raha
hai..sukhdev..khet jane ke liye tayyar hai..basanti roti paka rahi
hai.
Sukhdev
[sukhdev Gale main tauliya rakhta hua kahta hai] bablu chal ham
tumko school chodh dete hain..!! mamta kahan hai..?? mamta ki
maan !
Mamta
School ke liye tayyar hoti hogi….[mamta ko chillati hai] mamta are
mamta..!! kabse tayyar ho ri hai tu…jaldi aa??
Treatment mamta ki aawaz soon kar mamta baahar aati hai..bablu
bhi uth kar sukhdev ke pass aa jata hai..
Sukhdev
[mamta se kahta hai] ka hai hamri bitya…?? Padhayi ka jayda bojh
ho gaya hai..ka…?? are mamta ki maan hamri bitya ko kabhi-kabhi
anda de diya kar..naaste main!!
Treatment mamta anda ka naam soon kar bura sa moonh banati
hai..
Basanti
Mamta ke bapu tum jawo na..ab? bablu ka school ka der ho
jayega…aa mamta ab tu baith ja naasta kar le!
Treatment basanti ki baat soon kar sukhdev aur bablu exit karte
hain…mamta zameen par baith jati hai..basanti mamta ke liye anda
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talti hai…mamta ko anda dekh kar ulti aane lagti hai..mamta
daudh kar nal ke pass chali jaati hai aur ulti karne lagti
hai..basanti bhag kar mamta ke pass aati hai..beti ki aisi halt ko
dekh kar wo bahut kuch samajh jaati hai basanti gaur se maan ki
taraf dekhti hai ..aur sar neeche kar leti hai..basanti wahin ppar
bejaan ho kar sar pe haanth rakh kar baith jati hai
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Sce no.32
int/night
Location: sukhdev Home
Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti
[treatment basanti ki maan sar haantho main liye ro rahi hai
mamta bhi darvaaze ke niche baithi ro rahi hai basanti…apne pati
ka intezaar kar rahi hai.baahar se khat ki awaaz aati…hai dono
maan beti ki nazar aapas main milti hai !mamta ke aankhon main
pachtaave ki aansu dikhaai de rahi thi.
Sukhdev
[treatment sukhdev ander aaya!dono maan beti ko aisi haalat mein
dekha to uska kaleja munh ko aaya .aur usne darte huye puchha]
Mamta ki maa sab thik to hai na..?tum log itna chup-chup kaahe
ho.??
Basanti
[Rote Huyi apne pati ko dekhte hui boli]
Mamta ke bapu ! hamm munh dekhane ke layak nahin rahe.. sab
khatam ho gaya..!!
Sukhdev
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[ghabra kar kahta hai] are tum ka bol ri ho hamri to kuch samajh
main nai aa raha hai..ka hua seedha-seedha bataw..?? to sahi ?
Basanti
Mamta….pet se hai..!!
Sukhdev
[Chilla kar] Ye tu pagal toh nahi ho gayi ! Hamri bitiya hamri saan
hai.. tu jaahil aurat hai..!!woh hamko jite ji nahi maar sakti hai.
[pass bathi mamta ki tarf sukhdev dekhta hai] bitya ye tu apni
maan ko samjhati nai hai…ulta seedha baat karti hai.
Treatment mamta apne pita ki baat ko soon kar sukhdev ke pair ko
pakad leti hai aur zor-zor se rone lagti hai.
Mamta
[darte aur rote huye]
Pita ji hamko maaf kar dijiye..!! Hamse bahut badha paap ho gaya !!
who…who hamse saadi karega pita ji .usne waada kiya hai
hamse..!! kal who aakar aap se saadi ka baat karega..??
[treatment sukhdev mamta ki baat ko soon kar shocked ho jata
hai..mamta ke haanthon se apna pair chuda kar andar kamre main
chal jata hai aur ja kar ander se kundi laga leta hai .Mamta basanti
ko dekhti hai..basanti mamta ko dekh kar moonh udhar fer leti hai]
Charge to mamta
Sc no.-33
Ext/day
Location: School Road.
Cha-mamta and suresh
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Mamta
[treatment suresh ke saamne mamta ro rahi hai mamta suresh ko
saari baten bata deti hai saarescene ko flash back main dikhana
hai. Suresh thoda pareshan ho jata hai lekin ..normal rahne ki
acting karta hai.]
Mamta
Suras Tum aaj hi mere pita se mera haanth maang lo! Nahi toh
ham kahin munh dikhaane layak nahi rahenge.
Suresh
Are pagli ro kahe rahi hai..yeh le mithaai kha..hamko to maloom
tha ke aisa hone wala hai..pyar kabhi chupne wala chiz hai..??
Samajh le aaj hamri baat pakki ! dhol baje ke saath aake tujhe le
jayen ge samjhi !![ suresh apne pocket se naikal kar ek mithayi
mamta ko deta hai aur kahta hai] chal abb ye mithayi khale
..kyunke hamlog maan baap jo banne wale hain..!!
[treatment mamta suresh ki taraf aankhen phaade hairat se dekh
rahi thi..use yakin hi nahin ho raha tha, ke suresh uski saari
pareshani ko yun dur kar dega, suresh wah mithai mamta ke
munh main daal deta hai..mamta dheere –dheere mithayi kha leti
hai…mamta Sharma jati hai..
Charge to suresh
S No.-34
int/day
Location: sukhdev Home
Cha-basanti,mamta ,sukhdev.
Treatment mamta ghar ke ander ghusti hai..apne pet ko pakde dard
se chillate mamta ki awaz ko sunkar basanti ander se aati
hai..mamta zameen par dard se tadap rahi thi..
Mamta
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[Mamta basanti se kahti hai rote huye] maan sures ne hamre saath
bahut bada dhoka kiya maan ..
Basanti
[Beti ke sar ko god main rakhe pareshani se kahti hai] ka hua
hamri bachchi..ka dhoka kiya …saadi nai karega thujhse ..??
Mamta
Maan mera gerbhpaat ho gya…maan..suresh ne zahar khila diya
maan…
Treatment mamta ki baat ko soon kar bsanti ke hosh udh jaate
hain
Charge to basanti
S No.-35
int/night
Location: sukhdev Home
Cha-basanti,mamta ,sukhdev
[treatment mamta ki haalat bahutt chinta janak ho gayi thi, mamta
ka garbpaat ho gaya tha uski maan uske sirhaane aur baap pair ke
pas baitha apni kismat par ro raha tha.
Sukhdev
Ham panchayat jayenge mamta ki maan ..!! ham aise haanth main
haanth dhare to baith nahi sakte ..apni bachchi ko insaaf to
dilayenge ham..sirf hamri beti dukh nai sahegi usko bhi saja
milegi.. !!
Treatment basanti apne pati ko dekhti hai..kahti kuch nahi
hai..phir mamta ki taraf dekhti hai..jo besudh bister par padi
thi..aakhir mamta ke maa-baap ne panchayat jaane ka faisla kiya.
Cut to
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S No.-36
Ext/Day
Location:Panchayat
Cha-sukhdev,basanti ,bablu and others.
[mamta ke maan-baap aur chota bhai sabhi insaaf ke liye
panchayat pahuchete hain]
Sukhdev
[pancho se apni beti ki gohaar lagate huye sukhdev kahta hai.]
Sarkar hamri zindagi barbaad ho gayi !hamari beti ko suresh ne
sahdi ka jhansa dekar..uske saath duskarm kiya..aur use dawa
dekar uska garbhpaat kara diya..hujur hamri bachchi ko insaaf
dilayen hoojur aur suresh se shadi karne ka aadesh de sarkaar...!
Punch 1
[sukhdev ki saari batein sunne ke baad pancho ne mamta ko hi
kusurwar thahraya aur kaha]
Tere beti hi kulachhani hai !! kahin ka paap aakar kisi par madh
rahi hai,tune apni beti ko yahi sichha di thi..ki shaadi se pahle hi
apna munh kala kar le..aur tu to masterni banana chahta tha..use
dekha kaisi masterni bani…hahahaha[loughing]
Sukhdev
[Panch ki baat soon kar aag babula hoa jata hai] ye aap ka kah
rahen hai sarkar…aap hamri hi bachchi ko dosi thahra rahe
hain..??
Punch 2
[Sukhdev ko daant kar] chup tu hamen batayega ke ham kya
Karen. ..Gawon ke logon apradhi suresh nahi..hai apradhi mamta
hai..isliye gawon ke log iske pariwar wale ki pitai karo ..ke dobara
aisi harkat koi aur ladki na kare are.. ladkon ki baat aur hai..!!
lekin ladkiyon ko apni maryada nahi bhulni chahiye.!
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[treatment punch ka fasla sunte hi... gowan ke log sukhdev ,basanti
aur bablu par tut padhe hain aur unhen lahu-luhaan kar dete
hain..]
Anchor Line 5
Yah kaise faisla tha..?? ye haiwaniyat nahi thi to aur kya tha..? kya
kisi bekasur ko aisi saza milni chahiye ? kya punch ka faisla ek
taraf hota hai? gawon main panchayat isliye hote hain ke gawon ka
masla gawon main hi hal ho jaye..walon ko jab insaaf ki zarurat ho
to use punch sahi faisla suna kar pidhit ke saath insaaf kare.lekin
Yahan to pidhit ko hi sazaa de di gayi hai .abb ye pidhit pariwar
kiska darwaza khatkhatayenge …??
Cut to
S No.-37
Inr/Ext/Day
Location:Police station
Cha-sukhdev,mamta ,basanti ,bablu
[sukhdev apne lahu-luhaan pariwar ke saath police thane
pahunchta hai]
Mamta
[treatment mamta rote bilakte apni aap biti batati hai montage
main dikhana hai.]
Sukhdev
Thanedaar saheb hamari beti ki jindagi barbad ho gayi..panchyat
ne bhi hamri madad nai ki ab bas aap sures ko giraftar kijiye uske
kiya ka usko saja dilwaye ?
police
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[sari batein sun kar mamta se bola]
Tumm chinta matt karo..tumm sahi jagah aayi ho..ab tumhara
apraadhi jail ke salaakhon ke andar hoga!
[treatment saare scene montage main dikhana hai Police apne
counstable ke saath Gawon se khoj kar suresh ko giraftaar kar use
jail bhej deti hai aur mamta ko chikitsak upchar ke leye sadar
aspataal bhej deta hai..
Cut to..
Closing Anchor Link:-
Lagatar 7 mahine tak mamta ka shoshan hota raha, shadi ke naam
par bholi bhali kishori dhokha khati rahi, ham apne pariwar se aisi
baat chupa leten hain jo hamain chupana nahi chahiye…jab
pariwar ko ghatna ka pata chalta hai tab tak bahut der ho chuki
hoti hai...!! jis baat ko ham chupana chahte hain jab who sabke
samne ayegi tab kaya hoga. ..te ham nahi sochte .!! aaj bhi Hamare
desh main mahilaon ko aaj woh sammaan nahi mila hai..jiski woh
haqdaar hain! Aaj bhi unka shoshan Ho raha hai..ghar
main..sasural main..office main..aaj hamein samaaj ko badalne ki
zaroorat hai !! suresh jaise log to hamen har modh har society
main milenge …bass hamen mamta nahi banna hai..hamen unke
soch par nahi balke apne dimaag se chalna hai..kyunki dil to
kamzor hota hai..lekin dimaag kamzor nahi hota hai hamen aise
ghatiya sochon se nikal kar aage badhne ki sochna hai…ab sahne
ki nahi jawab dene ki baari hai . kal phir ek sachhi ghatna ke saath
milenge ! tabtak ke liye savdhaan aur surakshit rahein..sawdhani
hamari suraksha apno ki .
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COMPLETE_SCREENPLAY AND DIALOGUES rape viktim 1.1

  • 1. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 SCREENPLAY & DIALOGUES Montage [Gawon ke kuch log ekk hi pariwar ke 4 sadasyon ko iss buri trah se pitai kar rahen hain..the jayse kisi pagal janwar ko pita jata hai.Gawon ke sare log muk darshak bane ..iss tamashe ko khadhe dekh rahe the..] Cut to… Anchor link 1. Kyun koyi Kisi ko iss tarah pitai karega? Akhir yeh kaun log the Jo kisi pariwar ko iss bedardi ke saath sare- aam pit rahe the...kya yeh koi apradhi the..? Yeh phir bekasoor the…?? yeh inke saath koi sadyantra ho raha tha…?? . aise hi aapke mann main bhi aa rahi hongi...aakhir kya ho raha tha yahan kyun yaatnayen di ja rahi thi inhe..? Yeh janne ke liye hamein 4..mahine pahle chalna hoga..!! [supoul Bihar ki yeh ghatna hai, jis main ek dalit pariwar rahta tha. Bahut hi garib priwar tha yeh. Sukhdev apne do bachhaon aur patni ke saath sukun ki zindagi guzaar raha tha] S No.-1 Ext/Int/night Location: sukhdev’s home Cha-Father/mother/daughter/son Page 1 of 46
  • 2. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [scene will be opend with the wide short, sukdev coming towards his home and inter into it ] Mamta [sukhdev ki beti apne ghar main pareshan tahal rahi hai..darwaze pe khat ki aawaz hoti hai..] Pita ji !! aap ittna der kahen kar diya?? Sukhdev [ghar ke ander… aate huye aur haaton main pakdha samaan mamta ko dete huye…has ker mamata se kaha] To tu perashaan ho rahi thi meri bitya? Mamta [thodhe naraaz hote huye] To na hoti chinta karne ki baat hi hai? Aap jo itna der kar diya aur kitna andhera ho gaya hai..dekhiye toh..?? Basanti [Etne main basanti Ander se aati hai aur kahti hai] Tum bhi na mamata ke bapu ..apni aadat sudhar lo jamana ka dekho kab ka ho jaye koi nahi janta!! achcha kahe itna der kar diya aane main…kitna bar aap ko kaha hai...ki sanjh hone se pahle ghar aajaya Kariye.? Lekin kabhi aap sunten hain hamri baat...!! Sukhdev [sukhdev basnti ko dekh kar kahta hai] Page 2 of 46
  • 3. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Age se dhayaan rakhegen ham..tum sahi kah rahi ho..are wo apna anil hai na..wo sahar jar aha tha bas usi se baat main samay ka oata hi nai chala..khana lagade jaldi se…aur munna kahan hai…?? So gya ka..?? Basanti Haan –haan laga rahe hain..haan munna sut gya hai.. Montage Basnti khana lagati hai..roti aur saag ek plate main karke sukhdev ko deti hai waisa hi plate basanti aur mamtaka bhi hai..sab milkar khana khate hain.. Cut to S No.-2 Ext/day Location: sukhdev’s home Cha- Sukhdev [sukhdev apne khet jaane ke liye lagbhag tayaar ho chukka tha usne kandhe pe kudaal rakkha,aur basanti ko bahar se awaz lagayi] Mamata ki maa are oo mamata ki maan ham khet ja rahe hain..naasta karne ka samay nahi hai..bahut jaldi dhup aa jata hai..achcha mamta ke haanth khet par roti bhijwa dena..?… basanti [ander se mamta ki maan chilla kar kahti hai.aavaaz deti hai ke thik hai]haan-haan bhijwa denge ..! Cut to S No.-3 Ext/day Page 3 of 46
  • 4. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Location: sukhdev’s Khet Cha- [treatment sukhdev khet main hal jot raha hai..mamta chilla kar bulati hai Mamta Pitaji jaldi..aaye Sukhdev [beti ki awaz ko sunkar jawab deta hai.] Haan bitiya bas aa rahe hain..!! Treatment –sukhdev hal wahin par chodh kar kandhe se gamcha le kar moonh pochta hua mamta ke pass aata hai.. Mamta [gusse se apne pita ko dhekte huye]ee ka pitaji ..aapko ketna baar kaha hai ke khet main jab kaam karo sar main gamcha baandh liya karo lekin aap gamcha ko garden main lapete rahte hain..dekhte hain kitna garmi padh ra hai.. Sukhdev [beti ko zara manate hai,phir sukhdev bolta hai]achcha meri maan !! pahle roti khila de uske baad ji bhar ke daat legi..bas! [treatment -mamta jaldi…se roti,piyaaz aur hari mirch nikaal kar apne pita ko dene lagi aur ruaansi ho kar apne pita ko khate huye dekhne lagi] Sukhdev [beti ko udaas dekh kar kahta hai..]ka hua mamta kahe udas lag ri hai..tu..maan ne kuch kaha hai..ka tujhe..?? Mamta [udasi se ] nahi pitaji ..kuch nai ..aap din bhar dhup main kaam karte rahte hain..aur roti pyaj khayenge to aapko taakat kaise hoga ..aaj ghar main koi sabji nai tha toh maan ne roti pyaj hi bhej diya… Page 4 of 46
  • 5. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Sukhdev Achcha..!! to tu isliye udaas hai..are tere baap ko isi pyaj aur roti se sarir main bahut takat milta hai..tu kahe paresaan hoti hai..achcha tune roti khaya..?? Mamta [thodha chwok si gayi phir samhalte huye boli] Haan…pitaji ham roti khaa kar hi ghar se nikle hain.. maan ne hamko Aur bablu ko pahle hi de diya tha..khane ko. Sukhdev [thodha chwokte huye] Bablu..?? iss samay toh woh school main hota hai? Mamta Haan…haan pitaji!aaj oska jee thik nahin tha isliye maan usko school nahin bheji! Sukhdev [thodha sochte huye] Tu bhi kal se school jaana suru…kar de.. teri maastarni saher se aa gayi hai hamko raste main mili thi. Mamta [khush hote huye] Haan…pitaaji maasterniji!saher se aagae..?? Sukhdev [beti ke taraf hasker dekte huye kahta hai] Chal…ab tu jaldi se jaa!teri maan paresaan ho rahi hogi..? Page 5 of 46
  • 6. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Mamta [Khane ke dabba ko kapde men baandhti hai.]haan Haan…pitaji…maan chinta kar rahi hogi.. ab ham jaa rahe hain ! [treatment mamta ghar jaane ke liye khadhi ho jaati hai.. uske saath hi sukhdev bhi khadha ho jaata hai] Mamta Pitaji sar pe gamcha jaroor baandh lena,bahut dhoop hai…!! Sukhdev [sukhdev use bharosa dilate huye bola] Haan…haan bandh lenge ab tu jaldi jaa…!![sukhdev hasta hai] CUT TO… S No.-4 ext/day Location: village road Cha- [treatmenr mamta jaldi…jaldi kadam badhati apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi hai..use maan aur bimaar bhayi ki chinta thi woh khush bhi thi ke use kal se school jana tha…… mamta apni dhun men… chali jaa rahi thi.achanak mamta ko aisa mahsus hota hai ke koi uska picha kar raha hai pal bhar ko who rukhti hai!!phir apna vaham samajh kar jaldi…jaldi ghar ki taraf badhne lagti hai..mamta ke kadam tez ho jate hain…! CUT TO… Anchor link 2. Sola varshiye mamta bahut khush thi ke kal se woh school jaayegi,mamta bahut mehnati bachchi thi.apne maata pita aur Page 6 of 46
  • 7. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 bhaai ki laadli. har waqkat apne ghar ki chinta rahti. woh bahut aage tak padhna chaahti thi…aur masterni banna chahti thi. dalit hone ki vajah se gawon me log kam hi sammaan dete the.lekin isse mamta ko kuch phark nahin padhta tha.lekin mamta ko aisa mahsoos kyun hua? Ke koi uska picha kar raha hai..kya koi mamta ka sachmuch picha kar raha tha!yaa phir ye uska vaham?tha? CUT TO S No.-5 ext/day Location: sukhdev’s house Cha-basanti,sukhdev bablu,mamta. treatment basanti bahar nal pe bartan dho rahi hai,sukhdev lakdi kaat raha hai, chota beta bablu apni kitaab nikaal kar bahar padh raha tha. Mamta [Mamta ghar ke ander se bahaar aati hai kaandhe main school bag Dale…aur school dress pahne aur khushi se kahti hai] Maan,pitaji ham school jaa rahe hai..!! Sukhdev [khushi se beti ko dekhta hai.] Haan…haan beta tu jaa…jaldi!!teri maasterni tera rastaa dekh rahi hogi? Bablu Pitaji didi aaj kitni sunder lag rahi hai na…[hasta hua kahta hai..] Basanti [Has kar kahti hai.] chal tu padhayi kar chup se…mamta school se tu sidha ghar aana kahin sakhi saheli ke saath ghumne nai chal jana. Mamta Page 7 of 46
  • 8. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Haan maan school se sidha ghar hi aayenge..ab ham jayen..?? Bablu Haan..didi ab jaw..!! Treatment - mamta hasti huyi ghar se baahar nikal jaati hai..sukhdev aur basabti bablu ki baat sun kar hasne lagte hain. CUT TO S No.-6 ext/day Location: school road Cha-mamta Treatment -Mamta khushi…khushi school ki taraf kadam badhaye jaa rahi thi .Use is baat ki khushi hai,ke uski ek baar school phir se shuru ho gayi hai mamta apne pawn se patthar ko maarti huyi school ke taraf badhi chali jaa rahi thi woh bahar se apne school ke gate ko dekh kar khush ho gayi kuch bachche bhi idhar udharr nazar aa rahe the ,woh sidha apne class ke taraf badh jati hai. Cut to Scene no.7 Int/day Location: mamta’s classroom Cha-mamta masterni Mamta [treatment mamta apne classroom ke darwaze ke bahaar se hi apni maasterni ko kursi main bhaiti kitabon ko check karti dekhti hai] Mamta [mamta ne Khushi se thodha zore se kaha masterni se kaha] pranam maasterniji..?? Maasterniji Page 8 of 46
  • 9. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [chowk kar! aur khushi se uski taraf dhekte huye kahti hai] Are mamta!aawo…ander to aawo kaho kaisa raha…ek mahine ka chooti?? Mamta [bura sa munh bana kar ] Nahin…maasterniji,ek dam bhi achcha nahin laga…ham to roj yehi sochte…ke aap sahar se kab aayengi aur hamaara padhai kab suroo hoga! Maasterniji [usko manaate huye] Achcha..aisa tha..bachche to khush hote hain chutti ka sunkar… aur tumko dukh ho raha tha..Chalo ab ham aaa gaye naa!..Tum roz padhne aana?? Mamta Haan masterni ji abb ham roj padhne ayenge hamko bhi apki tarah masterni jo banna hai..!! Masterniji Are wah..! ye to badi achchi baat hai ke tum bhi hamari tarah masterni banogi..!! Treatment – mamta masterniji ki baat ko sun kar muskura deti hai…masterni bhi hasti hai. Charge to mamta. Sc. No.-8 ext/day Location: sukhdev’s house Cha- mamta basanti. Page 9 of 46
  • 10. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Basanti [treatment –basanti kapdhe ko rassi pe dalte hai!mamta ghar ke ander aati..Basanti beti ko dekh ker…kapdhe ko vahin chodhti huyi beti ko aakar pyaar se kaandhe se pakad kar poochti hai basanti are ! hamri bitiyaa aa gayi?kaisa raha tumra pahla din schoolka..?? Mamta [khushi se maa ki taraf dhek huye]very good maan.!! bahut majaa aayaa!maasterniji ne kaha…ke ek mahine ka jo padhai naga huaa hai?woh sab bhi puraa maasterniji karvaa dengi..! basanti are wah..! meri beti to angreji bol rahi hai…aaj?? mamta haan maan !! ham bhi angreji bolenge jaisa masterni ji bolti hain..na..waisa hi..?? basanti achcha ..! ja abb jake school dress utar le abhi bablu bhi aane hi wala hoga…khana laga deten hain aake khale .. mamta achcha maan ham abhi aate hain..!! Page 10 of 46
  • 11. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Treatment – mamta ander chali jati hai..basanti phir kapda rassi main dalne lag jati hai. CUT TO S No.-9 Ext/day Location: school road Cha-mamta Treatment -mamta roz ki tarah school jaa rahi thi apne aap main magan Bahut dino ke baad use phir aisa mahsoos……huwaa ke koi uska picha kar raha hai,usne do teen baar piche mudh ke bhi dekha,lekin koi nazar nahin aayaa,darti huyi mamta jaldi…jaldi school ki taraf badhne lagi…mamta ka chappal tut jata hai…mamta apne tute chappal ko dekhti hai..phir piche moodh kar bhi dekhti hai..mamta apne dono chappal ko haanth main lekar nange pawn zor-zor se chalne lagti hai..itne main mamta ke pawn main kuch chubh jata hai…mamta krah uthti hai..mamta ke pawn se khun nikal raha hota hai..mamta ke aankhon main aansu aa jate hain Mamta [Mamta mutter] pawn main to bahut dard ho raha hai..ham school kaise jayenge..?? [mamta apne bag se apna ek rumal nikalti hai aur use apne pair main baandhti hai..phir idhar-udhar dekhti hai…use koi nazar nahi aata hai..mamta langdate…huye wapas ghar ki taraf chal padhti hai. CUT TO Anchor link 3. Aakhir ek hi tarah ka anubhav mamta ko kyun ho raha tha. use yeh uska vaham to nahin lag raha…tha yaa phir koi sahi main uska picha kar raha tha..lekin iss choti si bachchi ka koi picha Page 11 of 46
  • 12. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 kyun karega…kya mamta ke saath koi anhoni hone wali thi yaa kuch aur….hi ..baat thi…?? Cut to S No.-1o Int/day Location: sukhdev’s home Cha- basanti , mamta Treatment – mamta ghar main aati hai..mamta ko dekh kar sabji kaatti basanti chawk jaati hai. Basanti [basanti sabji katna chodh mamta se poochti hai] Are mamta tu iss samay …??ka hua ..? Mamta [ruwansi hokar maan ke pass langdate huye aati hai] dekho na..maan..mera chappal toot gya ! aur pawn main kaanch bhi chubh gya hai..[ mamta apna khun main sana pair maan ko dikhati hai.] Basanti [chikh kar] hay re dayya ee to bahute khoon bah raha hai…!! Tu baith ham abhi haldi garam karke late hain…! Treatment – basanti haldi garam karke laati hai aur mamta ko pair main lagati hai…phir ek patti baandh deti hai. Basanti Abb tu aaram kar. Page 12 of 46
  • 13. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Mamta Maan aaj masterni ji..ganit ki pariksha lene wali thi..aur dekho na..hamko ka ho gya..?? Basanti To ka hua..? kal parikcha de degi..teri masterni to bahut achchi hai..na.? tujhe pyar bhi to karti hai..! Mamta Haan maan…masterniji bahut achchi hain..lekin mera chappal bhi to toot gya hai… Basanti Tu chinta na..kar bitiya abhi bablu school se aa jayega to tera chappal silwa lenge..! Treatment –mamta maan ki baat ko sunkar khush ho jati hai. Charge to mamta. S No.-11 Int/Night Location: sukhdev’s home Cha- sukhdev ,basanti ,bablu mamta. Treatment - basanti apne pati aur dono bachchon ko raat ka khana Khila rahi hai. Page 13 of 46
  • 14. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Bablu [khana ko dekh kar bablu bura sa moonh banakar bolta hai] ee…… kaa maan? sab din ek sa khana? bas roti dal? kabhi murgi bhi pakaw naa maan ? Mamta [gusse se bhai ko dekhti huyi kahti hai] Ae…bablu chup.. se khana kha.bas bakar-bakar karta hai.jo ghar main hoga wahi toh pakayegi maan..!! Sukhdev [bachchon ko ladta dekh sukhdev thodha sa mood achcha karne ke liye kahta hai.] Thik toh..bitwa kah raha hai..? sab din ek sa khana? are…khabi kabhaar murgi bhi banaa de bhagwaan hamra bachcha log ke waste… Basanti [thodha gusse main pati ko dekh ke bolti hai] Kahan se murgi banaaye? thik se roti daal toh jutta nai……hai..murgi kahan se pakayen.. Sukhdev [patni ko thodha gussa kam karne ke liye has kar kahta hai ] Dekh…dekh gussa na ker.. mamta ki maan kal murgi hi pakega..hamre bachcha log ke liye... Mamta Nai pitaji aap bablu ki baat mat suniye iska to dimaag hi kharab hai.. Page 14 of 46
  • 15. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Sukhdev Are bitiya ham bhi toh bahutte din se nai ‘khaye’ hai na murgi tera dil nai karta achcha khana khane ko..bol..aur tere pair se khoon nikla hai..usko waapas bhi to lana hai..[sukhdev bol kar hasta hai.] kal to murgi hi banega…!! [treatment - mamta sukhdev ko dekhti hai.. aur has deti hai..sukhdev has deta hai..sabhi ke chehre main khushi thi ke kal murgi banega khane main..] CUT TO S No.-12 Int/day Location: sukhdev’s home Cha- Basanti [treatment mamta so rahi hai,basanti aakar mamta ko uthati hai. ] Are…mamta uth school nahin jaana ka tujhe ..tera dard kaisa hai..bitiya..? Mamta [dhire se uth baithti hai aur wahin se diwaar ki taraf dekhti ] maan pawn main to thoda dard hai…lekin hamko school jana jaroori hai..? Basanti Na..beti aisa dard main… tu paidal chalegi to aur dard badh jayga aaj tu..hai na..school naga kar de..kal se school chali jaygi.! Mamta Page 15 of 46
  • 16. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [udas ho kar] thik maan jaisa …aaj ham school nai jaate hain… maan ek baar aur haldi ka lape kar do na..pair main..?? Basanti Haan bitya ham abhi lekar aate hain…tu abhi aaram kar. Treatment - basanti kamre se nikal jati hai..mamta kuch sochne lagti hai Charge to mamta. S No.-13 ext/day Location: sukhdev’s home Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti Treatment –sukhdev ghar ke andar in karta hai..mamta ko charpayi pe baithe dekh kar chawnk jata hai..apne haanth main pada thaila ek taraf rakhta hai.. Sukhdev Are bitya …aaj school kahe nai gayi..?? Mamta [andar se aati basanti kahti hai] mamta ke pair main abhi bhi dard hai isiliye aaj ham usko school nai bhejen hain..kal se school jaygi.. Sukhdev Achcha..kiya aaj school nai bheja abb hamri bitya naya chappal pahan kar school jayegi… Mamta [Khushi se] naya chappal pitaji..?? Sukhdev Page 16 of 46
  • 17. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Haan…bitya naya chappal..[ sukhdev apne kapde ke jhole se ek chappal nikal kar mamta ko deta hai.. Mamta [mamta chappal dekh kar khush ho jati hai] wah pitaji ee to bahut sunder hai…ek dam sahar ki ladkiyon ki tarah hai..ham pahan ke dekhen..?? Sukhdev Haan..haan..dekh pahan ke..! Basanti [basanti pahanne se rokti hai.] rook abhi ..mat pahan ismain to edhi hai tujhe aur jayda dard hoga… Mamta [mamta zid karti hai.] nahi maan ..dard nahi hoga ..abhi ham pahan kar dekhate hain..[ mamta chappal pahanti hai aur chal kar dikhati hai..] Sukhdev [Khush ho kar] dekha hamri bitya ka..dard udanchu ho gaya.!! Treatment mamta khushi..khushi chappal ko pahan kar chalti hai..basanti aur sukhdev mamta ko khush dekh kar khush hote hain. Cut to S No.-14 ext/day Page 17 of 46
  • 18. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Location: sukhdev’s home Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti [treatment Basanti ghar ke rasoi se mamta ko aavaaz deti hai.. naashta karne liya bulaati hai!] Basanti Are mamta jaldi se aake nasta kar le.. Mamta [Mamta school dress pahne ander kamre se nikal kar basanti ke pass aati hai.!] Nahin maa!ham nasta aakar karlenge hamko der ho gayi hai ..! dekho maan ..?chappal kitna achcha lag raha hai…apni masterni ko bhi ham apni chappal dikhayenge..! [mamta khush ho kar maan ko dikhati hai.] [basanti chappal ke taraf dekh kar] haan bitya bahut achcha lag raha hai..! ekdam sahar ki ladki ki tarah.. Mamta Achcha maan ham ja rahe hain …aate samay bablu ko bhi ham saath leke ayenge.. Cut to S No.-15 ext/day Location: school road Cha- mamta [der ho jaane ki wajah se mamta jaldi –jaldi school ki taraf badh rahi thi..apne nate chappal ko bhi muskura kar dejhe ja rahi thi.jaldi-jaldi school jaa rahi hai.Achaanak mamta ko kisi ne ek Page 18 of 46
  • 19. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 divaar ke piche kisi ne khich liya…ye itna jaldi main hua ke mamta ko kuch bhi samajh main nahi aya ..lekin mamta ke hosh udh gaye..mamta ke face reaction lene hain. CUT TO Anchor link 4. Aakhir Ye kya ho raha tha mamta ke saath..!! aur koun tha woh jo mamta ke saath aisi harkaten kar raha tha?? kya ye mamta ke marzi se ho raha tha ..? ya koi phir mamta ke saath koi jabardasti….kar raha tha…aane wale din mamta ke liye kuch kathin hone wale then.. CUT TO S No.-16 Int/Night Location: sukhdev’s bed room Cha- basanti, sukhdev. [treatment sukhdev aur basanti zameen par lete huye the aur mamta aur bablu ke bare main baaten kar rahe the] Basanti [lete huye chat ki taraf dekhte huye bolti hai.] Mamta ke baapu!!ab tum mamta ke liye ver dhoondo 16 saal ki ho gayi hai,kuch din se thodha chup…chup si rahti hai,pataa nahin… padhai ka bojh hai ya …phir kuch aur? Sukhdev [thodha othte huye gusse se bolta hai ] Yeh tu kya bol rahi hai?...tera dimag to kharab nai ho gaya hai..mamta achchi bachchi hai!use to ham masterni banaayenge ! Page 19 of 46
  • 20. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 haan padhai ka boj hoga isiliye chup rahti hogi bitia hamri…tu uski maan hai ki dusman ..?? tub hi apni beti ko bojh samajhti hai na..ke beti 16 saal ki ho gayi hai…ab uske liye war dhundo…abhi mamta bachchi hai…sahar main mamta ki umar ki ladki frak pahan ke khelti hai..! aur tu uski byah ki baat kar rahi hai.. Basanti [basanti sukhdev ki baat soon kar use samjhane ki koshish karti hai.] mamta ke bapu ye sahar nai hamra gawn hai..gawn ke log padhe likhe hote nahi hote hain ….yahan ke log yahi chahte hain ..ke jitna jaldi ho sake beti ki bidayi kar den …ham ka gawn se alag hain..?? Sukhdev [gusse se patni ke taraf bina dekh ke bola] Haan alag hain ham ..hamri bitya masterni banegi..ketna sauk se hamri bitya school jati hai..tu uske bare aisa baat kar rahi ke jaise tu uski sauteli maan hai..!!Chal…ab so jaa subah hamko jaldi uthna hai.. dusre gawon jana hai.. kheti ka kuch samaan lana hai.. sewere roti de degi raaste ke liye!! [treatment -sukhdev dusri karwat leke sone ki koshish karta hai… sukhdev ke chehre pe kuch pareshani jhalak rahi thi..basanti bhi kuch pareshan nazar aa rahi thi.!] CUT TO S No.-17 Int/Day Location: sukhdev’s home Cha-mamta [treatment mamta gumsum aangan main bathi huyi hai aur kisi soch main gum hai basanti mamta ko dekh kar pareshan hoti hai.] Page 20 of 46
  • 21. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Basanti [beti ko khamosh dekh kar basanti poochti hai] Ka…bitia ka huwa? kaa soch ri hai jaa.. jake tayyar ho ja school ke vaaste..school nai jana hai..ka..?? Mamta [zameen ke taraf dekhte huye kahti hai.] Maan…ji thik nai lag raha hai..school nahin jaane ka man kar raha hai hamko ! Basanti [paas aakar bathte huye kahti hai.] Kaa huya?koi baat hai ka?..masterniji ne kuch kaha hai..kya..? Bahut chup,chup hai do din se? Mamta [mamta jaldi se maan ko dekhti aur muskurati hui boli] Nahin maa…koi baat nahin hai…masterniji to bahut achchi hain..tu to bas toorant perashan ho jati hai…asal main pitaji dosre gawon gayen hain na..? isliye socha aaj school naga karlete hai aur aaj ham sara din ghar ka kaam kar lete hain..agar tu chahti hai ke ham school chale jayen to thik hai ham chale jaate hain.!! Basanti [itminaan ka saas lete huye] Achcha,isi vaste hamari laado dukhi hai.. bablu hai na!tu school jaa…nahin to tera bap bahut gussa…kahega ke ham hi tujhe school jane nahi diya hoga jaa jaldi se jake jaldi se tayyar …ho jaa!! Treatment –mamta na chahte huye bhi school ke liye tayyar hone chali jati hai…basanti muskurati mamta ko jate huye dekhti hai. Page 21 of 46
  • 22. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Charge to basanti S No.-18 ext/Day Location: school road cha-mamta [treatment –mamta dare…dare kadmo se school ki taraf badh rahi thi..Bahut saare bure aur daraawne khayal mamta ke mann main aa…rahe the. aur us din ke ghatna se uska man bahut dara hua tha! achaanak mamta ke kandhe me piche se kisi ne haanth rakkha.. mamta bhaibit ho kar piche palti!!] Sarita [treatment sarita mamta ki saheli mamta ka dara chehra dekh kar hasne lagi.aur haste huye kaha……] Are!tu to aise dar gayi ke main koi bhoot hoon..!! aise ka dekh rahi hai apni sakhi ko? pahle dekhaa nai ka kabhi..?? Mamta [thodha sa normal hote huye kahti hai.] Ooo ham samjhe ke pata nahin koun hai..? isi liye ham darr.. gaye aur koi baat nai hai..! chal jaldi chal nahin to kachcha suru ho jayegi! Treat ment mamta aur sarita jaldi-jaldi school ki taraf badhne lagti hain. CUT TO Page 22 of 46
  • 23. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 S No.-19 Ext/Day Location: school gate cha- [ school ki chutti ke baad sarita aur mamta school gate ke paas khadhi hain] Sarita [apne baalo ke riban ko thik karte huye] Mamta ham mousi ke ghar jaa rahe hai …amrood sita phal lane..tu bhi chal na..thode der main aa jayenge!! Mamta [mamta kuch soch kar] nai sarita ham samay par ghar nahi pahoonchenge to maan paresaan hogi…tu chali ja.. Sarita Achcha thik hai…amrood aur sita phal ham tumkombhi denge ..achcha thik hai ham chalet hain..warna mausi phir hamko dategi ..!! Treatment Dono saheli hasti hai …phir dono apne raste chali jaati hai CUT TO S No.-20 Ext/Day Location: school road cha-mamta suresh [mamta phir dari sahmi si ghar ki taraf badhne lagi Page 23 of 46
  • 24. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Abhi kuch hi door……chali thi ke use piche se kisi ne khickh kar ek taraf kar diya….mamta use apne saamne paakar paseene…paseene ho gayi aur dar ke maare uske gale se aavaaj hi nahin nikli] Suresh [mamta ki taraf dekhte huye has kar bola] Mamta Kaa ham itne bure hain jo dekh kar der gayi tum..?? Mamta [ darte aur apne aapko chudhate huye]eee………tum…ham…hamre saath aisa kahe kar rahe ho.. ham ka kiye hain tumra..hamko chodho…hamko ghar jaane do hamri maan paresaan ho rahi hogi hato hamre raste se..??!! Sures [suresh ek dam se mamta ko chodete huye bola] Lo chodha diya!...abb khus..?? [treatment mamta ek taraf rote huye jaldi se apne aap ko khud main samatte huye jaldi se jaane ke liye aage badhi hai lekin? suresh uske saamne aa kar khadaa ho gaya aur kahne laga] Sures [mamta ke thodhi ko upar karte huye bola] Pehle!!vada kar hamse kal yahin par milegi..?humko tum se bahut sara……baat kar na hai milegi tabi to bataaenge aur kal tere liye ek tohfa bhi layenge samjhi..?? Mamta Tohfa wo kyun lawoge mere liye ?? maan kisi se kuch bhi lene mana karti hai isliye hamko tumse kuch nahi lena hai.. Suresh Page 24 of 46
  • 25. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [mamta ki baaten sunkar suresh has deta hai] are tubhi na ekdam pagli hai.. tujhe batane ki kya jaroorat hai..ke hamne tujhe tohfa diya hai.!! Mamta To kya maan se jhuth bolenge ham…! Suresh Tu maan se sab baat karti hai…kya..kya ..?? Mamta Haan ham maan se sab baat karte hai..!! Suresh Aaj ki bhi baat maan se batayegi..?? Treatment suresh ki baat soon kar mamta suresh ko gaur se dekhti hai…suresh mamta ko muskura kar dekhta hai…mamta bhi muskura deti hai. Suresh Kabhi-kabhi koi baat maan se bhi… chupana padhta hai..!![mamta ko gahri nazron se suresh dekhta hai] Charge to mamta S No.-21 int/Night Location: sukhdev’s home cha- bablu , sukhdev,basanti. [ bablu laalten main padhai kar raha hai!.sukhdev kudaal thik kar raha hai!basanti roti banaa rahi hai mamta ko wahan na dekh kar basanti se poochta hai..] Sukhdev Page 25 of 46
  • 26. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [kudaal ek taraf rakhta hai] Are! mamta ki maa…??aaj mamta badi jaldi so gay..i?uska tabiyat to thik hai na..? Basanti [roti ek taraf rakhti huyi] Haan ..tabiyat thik hai kahke suti hai ke kal masterniji jaldi bulayi hai..khana khake suti hai..tum chinta mat karo !! Sukhdev Achcha-achcha…ab jaldi se khana de de bahut bhuk lagi hai..!! haan ek baat toh ham batana hi bhul gaye ..ooo jo apna lohaar hai na..sambhu…kal uski beti ka byah hai…hamlog ko bulaya hai.. Basanti [kuch sochti hai] jaa ke ka karenge …sau pachas…ka kharcha badh jayga..!! Bablu Nai maan hamlog jaroor byah main jaynge..!! wahan..achch-achcha khane ko milega..hai na..pitaji..?? Sukhdev Haan-haan…bitwa..ye teri maan hai na…bass aise hi bak-bak karti rahti hai..!! Basanti [gusse se bablu ko ek thappad marti hai] tu bass khan eke liye marr kahe tujhe ghar main to khana milta nai…hai. Page 26 of 46
  • 27. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Treatment basanti se maar kha kar bablu rone lagta hai..sukhdev bablu ko chup karane lagta hai.. Sikhdev Tumko ka hua hai..?? badi..gusse main hai aaj tu…?bhala bachcha ko aise koi marta hai..ka..?? kal mamta aur bablu ko saath le kar byah main chal jana …sau rupya bitya ki maan ko de dena. Treatment narazgi se sukhdev ko dekhti hai. CUT TO S No.-22 ext/Day Location: school road Cha- [ treatment aaj mamta ke pawn dar kar nahi balke tez..tez chal rahe then aaj uske chehre main ajeeb si muskurahat thi solah saal ki kishori…ke man main aaj ek naya ahsaas jaag raha tha! woh baar…baar piche mudh kar dekh rahi thi maano kisi ka intazaar kar rahi hai lekin koyi nahin aaya uske chehre ka rang pikha padh gaya tha…mamta ke aankhen kisi ko dhund rahi thin lekin wahan mamta ke alawa koi nahi tha..mamta udaas mann se school ke gate main ghus jaati ha!! Ext/day S No.-23 Location: sukhdev’s house Cha-mamta ,basanti,bablu. Treatment mamta ghar main aati hai basanti bablu ke baal ko thik kar rahi hai..maan ko naya kapda aur bablu ko naya kapda pahne dekh kar mamta ko bahut hairat hoti hai…who apna school bag charpayi pe fek kar basanti ke pass aati hai. Page 27 of 46
  • 28. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Mamta Maan tum sabne naya kapda kyun pahna..hai?? Basanti achcha tu aa gayi !! ja jaldi se tayyar ho ke aaja ..sambhu lohar ki beti ka byah hai ..aaj ham sab wahin jaa rahe hai…!! Mamta [mamta boora moonh bana leti hai] nai maa tu bablu ke saath chali ja mera ji nai hai jane ka..! Bablu Chalo na..didi..? wahan bahut mithayi bhi hogi khane ko..? Basanti Eee ka baat hua..?? tumko ka ho gya… jo nai jane ka mann hai…ja jake jaldi se tayyar ho !.jab dekho to jiye thik nai hai..?? Treatment mamta basanti ki baat sun kar ander kamre main chali jaati hai. Cut to S No.-24 Ext/day Location: sambhu house Cha-mamta ,basanti.sambhu ,bablu sambhu suresh sambhu wife and others… Treatment sambhu ki beti ka byah ho raha hai…kuch bheed bhaadh hai..sab log ek jagah khade ho kar byah hote dekh rahe hain mamta bhi bedili se byah dekh rahi hai..achanak mamta ki nazar saamne khade suresh par jati hai..jo mamta ko dekh raha tha..suresh ko dekh kar mamta ka udas chehra khil jata Page 28 of 46
  • 29. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 hai..suresh mamta ko ishare se bahar bulata hai..mamta ishare se inkaar karti hai..suresh phir ishare se bulata hai..mamta dheere se wahan se nikalna hi chah rahi thi ke basanti aa jati hai..mamta ruk jati hai..suresh ko gussa aa jata hai..aur who wahan se chala jata hai..mamta ko bahut dukh hota hai suresh se na milne ka. Charge to mamta Ext/day time 5 pm S No.-25 Location: sukhdev’s house Cha-mamta ,basanti,bablu [treatment mamta ke haanth main do notebook hai woh maan ke paas aati hai maa bahaar aangan main jhaadhu laga rahi hai bablu lattu nacha raha hai..] Mamta [mamta kuch jhijhakte huye maan ke pass aati hai aur basanti se kahti hai] maan!ham sarita ke ghar jaa rahe hain thodha saa likhna rah gaya tha…ham aadhe ghante main aa jayenge tum chinta mat karna. Basanti Eee achanak tu sarita ke ghar kahe ja rahi hai..?? aaj school to gayi thi na..tu ..? to likhna kaise rah gaya..?? Mamta [Thode gusse se] tum bhi na..maan kabhi-kabhi thanedarni..ban jati ho ..bas abhi aa jate hain na ham.. Basanti Achcha thik hai..bablu ko saath leja ..!!dekh saam hone ko hai..! Mamta Page 29 of 46
  • 30. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Tum bhi na..maan .bablu ka karega wahan par..ham to likhenge..sarita ka to kio bhayi bhi nahi hai..jiske saath bablu khelega… [maan ki baat sune bina mamta ghar ke darvaaje se bahaar nikal jaati hai. Charge to basanti S No.-26 Ext/Evening Location: village road Cha- [treatment mamta jaldi…jaldi apni manzil ki taraf badhi chali jaa rahi thi…kabhi usne jhoot nahin kaha tha apni maa se…is baat ka use afsoos bhi hai lekin woh dil ke haanton majboor ho chuki thi. Mamta v/o ham aaj tak maan se aise jhuth kabhi nahi bola..pata nahi maan ko kaisa laga hoga….mamta phir chalne lagti hai..mamta ko samne suresh nazar aata hai…mamta khadi ho jati hai..suresh mamta ke pass aata hai.. suresh [mamta ko gaur se dekh kar kahta hai] aaj maan ko sach bata kar aayi hai..ya jhuth bol kar aayi hai. Mamta Agar sach kahte toh ham tumse milne aa sakte then ka…?? Suresh Achcha ab toh tum safed jhuth bolne lagi hai na..?? Page 30 of 46
  • 31. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Mamta achcha abb ham chalte hain..!! achcha..bulaya kyun tha..hamko…yahan ?? Suresh Abhi aayi aur abhi chal di..aisa bhi ka kaam hai..tumko..?? achcha dekho ham tumre liye ka laye hain..?? [suresh apne pocket se ek dabba nikal kar deta hai.. Mamta Ka..hai..?? Suresh Pahle kholo to !! Mamta [Mamta kholti hai] achcha nakhun paalis hai..!! Suresh Haan dekho ..kitna sunder rang hai..!! Mamta [Khushi se dekhti hai.] haan bahut sunder rang hai..!! Suresh Haan ekdam tumre jaisa sunder Mamta [Sharma kar]hatt ham sundar kahan hain..?? Suresh Kaun andha kahta hai ke tum sundar nahi ho..?? hamri nazar se dekho tum kitni sundar ho.!! Page 31 of 46
  • 32. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Treatment suresh mamta ka haanth pakadta hai..mamta haanth chudati hai..suresh phir pakadta hai..mamta chup rahti hai..suresh mamta ko kiss karna chahta hai..mamta suresh ko dhakka de deti hai..suresh ladkhada kar niche gir jata hai..mamta darr jati hai mamta suresh ko uthane ki koshish karti hai..suresh uske haanth ko jhatak deta hai..mamta ruwansi ho kar suresh ko dekhti hai..suresh uth jata hai..aur jane lagta hai. Mamta [suresh ka haanth pakad kar] hamse ruth gaye tum ..?? Suresh [Suresh gusse se] itna jor se hamko dhakka jo diya tumne..agar ham mar jate to..?? Mamta [Surash ki baat soon kar suresh ki moonh main haanth rakh deti hai.] aise to mat bolo !! koi itna bhi jor se dhakka nahi de diya tha..ham?? achcha ab ham chalet hain raat hone ko aayi hai maan chinta kar rahi hogi Suresh Achcha wada kar ke kal khet ke pass ayegi school ke baad..tab jane denge ham tumko..?? Mamta [jhunjhla kar] haan baba ham aa jayenge ab jane do hamko ..!! Treatment mamta chali jaati hai..suresh mamta ko kamini nazaron se jate huye dekhta hai. CUT TO Page 32 of 46
  • 33. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 S No.-27 Ext/night Location: sukhdev house Cha-mamta ,basanti ,bablu and sukhdev. [treatment Raat ho chuki thi Ghar ke bahar aangan main..basanti aur sukhdev mamta ka intazaar kar rahe the..achanak darwaaze per khatka sunai diya..mamta darwazaa laga rahi thi ] Sukhdev [Gusse se mamta se bola] itne der se kahan thi, ee..samaye ghar aane ka hai..? Mamata [Thartharati aur kapkapati aawaaz mein sukhdev se bolti hai] Pi...pita ji hamm sahi samay pe sarita ke ghar se. ni..nikle the. Lekin gali main kutta bahut tha. To hum uske hatne ka raah dekh rahe the . isliye pitaji der ho gaya… Hamko ! maaf kar dena pita ji..?? sukhdev [zoor se haste huye] Are! Hum to samjhe the ki hamari beti sherni hai, are ee to chuhiya nikli..chuhiya..!! Basanti [daantte huyemamta ko ] Chal jaldi se haanth munh dho le ham khana lagate hain..jara iss ladki ko akal nai hai ke itna raat main ghar se baahar nai rahte hain..jane kab akal ayga isko ..?? Treatment Mamta apne kamre main jaa kar char payi pe baith jati hai..mamta ke jaan main jaan aati hai mamta itminan ka saans leti hai. Page 33 of 46
  • 34. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Cut to.. S No.-28 Ext/afternoon Location: khet ke peeche Cha-mamta and suresh Mamta [mamta Ghabraai Huyi suresh ke pass pahuchti hai..suresh mamta ko dekhte hi gale laga leta hai mamta suresh ko apne se alag karti hui kahti hai] Mamta Ye kya kar rahe ho tum ??Hamko ee sab achcha nai lagta hai !! ye sab achcha kaam nai hai..?? Suresh [Mamta ke baalon ko sahlaate huye kahta hai] Are ! tumko koun ee sab bol diya hai ke ee sab galat hai..Galti hum ka kar rahe hain? Ham to pyaar kar rahe hai…are pagli pyar karna paap thode hai.Koi hai hamre jitna smart iss gawn main.. Are goan ki sari ladhkiyan na tujhse jalan karti hai .aur ke..Ham hain ki sirf tere par hi marte hain..!! aur tu hai ki sahi aur galat bata rahi hai hamko ! tu nai janti hai…ke Tu kitni sunder hai…achcha ek gana tumko sunate hain ..tumra mood hai na..ekdam achcha ho jayga Mamta [suresh ki ye sabb batein mamta ko achchi lag rahi thi ya nahi Who khud samajh nahi pa rahi thi!saham ki gahraai ko dekhte huye usne suresh se kaha] Bahut der ho gya ! Ab ham ghar jaate hain Treatment suresh mamta ki baat ko ansuna karke apne mobile main gana lagata hai.[roop tera mastana pyar mera diwana bhul Page 34 of 46
  • 35. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 kahin hamse na ho jaye…ye gana soon ke mamta Sharma jati hai… suresh mamta ka bag ek taraf phek deta hai..aur mamta ko bahon main bhar ke kiss karne lagta hai…phir mamta aur suresh apne had ko paar kar dete hain.] Cut to.. Anchor link 5. Mamta jo kabi jhoot nahin bolti thi ! lekin ab jhoot bolne lagi thi .woh kiske vajha se jhoot bol rahi thi!..kya ye jhoot use bahut hi mahanga padhne wala tha yaa woh sachmuch mamta se pyaar karta tha?? Mamta suresh ko bina jane suresh se pyaar karne lagi. kya mamta ko itni badhi galti karni chahiye thi use…apni maan se ye baat zaroor bataani chahiye thi…ya apni saheli sarita se hi suresh ke bare main bata deti .mamta ne aise aadmi par vishwaas kar liya tha jisse woh sirf chand dino se hi jaanti thi…aane wale kal main mamta ke liye kya tufan aane wala tha isse mamta bilkul bekhabar thi.! CUT TO S No.-29 Ext/day Location: sukhdev house Cha-mamta [treatment mamta bhari man se thoda langdati huyi aangan main jhaadhu laga rahi hai aur maan nal ke paas bartan dhoti basanti mamta ko gumsum dekh kar pareshan ho jati hai basanti bartan dhona chodh kar mamta ke pass ati hai. Basanti Ka hua hamri bitya ko..jo itna chup hai..aur tere pawn main ka hua hai..jo langda ke chal rhi hai..kahin chot oot lag gya ka..?? Mamta Page 35 of 46
  • 36. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [mamta maan ke bbat ko sun ke darr jati hai.] nai maan kuch nai hai..sar main dard ho raha hai..aur kuch nai..[achanak mamta ko kuch yaad ata hai ] maan ham sarita ke pass se aate hain bas adha ghanta main. Basanti [hairat se ] abhi to kah rahi thi ke sar dard kar raha hai..aur abhi achanak sarita ke ghar jana hai..aram kar chup se..!! Mamta Nahi maan hamko bahut jaroori kaam hai..ham abhi aate hain Treatment mamta maan se kah kar ghar se baahar nikal jaati hai..basanti khud se sawal karti hai Basanti [basanti mutter] mamta ko ka ho gya hai..aisi to hamri bitya nahi hai. Charge to basanti S No.-30 int/evening Location: khet Cha –mamta and suresh Treatment suresh mamta ko dekh kar darr jata hai..mamta ghabrayi si suresh se bolti hai Mamta Page 36 of 46
  • 37. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Sures hamko kuch bhi achcha nai lag ra hai..!! tum apne mata pita ko hamre ghar bhejo byah ke liye..!! Suresh [Mamta ko samjhata hai] bhej denge ..itna paresaan kahe ho rahi hai pagli ?? ham..kahin bhag jayenge ka..tumko chodh ke..? Mamta [Mamta gusse se suresh ka collar pakad leti hai.] aisa na..phir se mat bolna !! nahi to ham tumri jaan le lenge….! Suresh [Thoda sambhalte huye ] dil to le hi liya hai..! jaan bhi ab le hi lo..?? Mamta [collar chodti hai] hamko na majaak ekdam pasand nahi hai..! Suresh Ham majaak kahan kar rahe hain..?? bas ab ham kuch hi din main apne pariwar walon ko bhejte hain .! tum chinta mat karo…aur haan.. abb thoda hamlog ko kam milna chahiye hamari byah ki jo baat hone waali hai….kyun sahi kah rahe hain na ham.?? Treatment mamta suresh ki baat ko soon kar has deti hai..aur wahan se chali jati hai suresh sar main haanth rakh kar kuch der kuch sochta hai phir wahan se chala jata hai. Cut to Sce no.31 int/day Location: sukhdev Home Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti,bablu. Page 37 of 46
  • 38. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Mamta Treatment mamta School jane ke liye tayyar hoti hai..apne baalon main ribbon laga rahi hai..bablu baahar padh raha hai..sukhdev..khet jane ke liye tayyar hai..basanti roti paka rahi hai. Sukhdev [sukhdev Gale main tauliya rakhta hua kahta hai] bablu chal ham tumko school chodh dete hain..!! mamta kahan hai..?? mamta ki maan ! Mamta School ke liye tayyar hoti hogi….[mamta ko chillati hai] mamta are mamta..!! kabse tayyar ho ri hai tu…jaldi aa?? Treatment mamta ki aawaz soon kar mamta baahar aati hai..bablu bhi uth kar sukhdev ke pass aa jata hai.. Sukhdev [mamta se kahta hai] ka hai hamri bitya…?? Padhayi ka jayda bojh ho gaya hai..ka…?? are mamta ki maan hamri bitya ko kabhi-kabhi anda de diya kar..naaste main!! Treatment mamta anda ka naam soon kar bura sa moonh banati hai.. Basanti Mamta ke bapu tum jawo na..ab? bablu ka school ka der ho jayega…aa mamta ab tu baith ja naasta kar le! Treatment basanti ki baat soon kar sukhdev aur bablu exit karte hain…mamta zameen par baith jati hai..basanti mamta ke liye anda Page 38 of 46
  • 39. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 talti hai…mamta ko anda dekh kar ulti aane lagti hai..mamta daudh kar nal ke pass chali jaati hai aur ulti karne lagti hai..basanti bhag kar mamta ke pass aati hai..beti ki aisi halt ko dekh kar wo bahut kuch samajh jaati hai basanti gaur se maan ki taraf dekhti hai ..aur sar neeche kar leti hai..basanti wahin ppar bejaan ho kar sar pe haanth rakh kar baith jati hai Cut to Sce no.32 int/night Location: sukhdev Home Cha-mamta ,sukhdev,basanti [treatment basanti ki maan sar haantho main liye ro rahi hai mamta bhi darvaaze ke niche baithi ro rahi hai basanti…apne pati ka intezaar kar rahi hai.baahar se khat ki awaaz aati…hai dono maan beti ki nazar aapas main milti hai !mamta ke aankhon main pachtaave ki aansu dikhaai de rahi thi. Sukhdev [treatment sukhdev ander aaya!dono maan beti ko aisi haalat mein dekha to uska kaleja munh ko aaya .aur usne darte huye puchha] Mamta ki maa sab thik to hai na..?tum log itna chup-chup kaahe ho.?? Basanti [Rote Huyi apne pati ko dekhte hui boli] Mamta ke bapu ! hamm munh dekhane ke layak nahin rahe.. sab khatam ho gaya..!! Sukhdev Page 39 of 46
  • 40. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [ghabra kar kahta hai] are tum ka bol ri ho hamri to kuch samajh main nai aa raha hai..ka hua seedha-seedha bataw..?? to sahi ? Basanti Mamta….pet se hai..!! Sukhdev [Chilla kar] Ye tu pagal toh nahi ho gayi ! Hamri bitiya hamri saan hai.. tu jaahil aurat hai..!!woh hamko jite ji nahi maar sakti hai. [pass bathi mamta ki tarf sukhdev dekhta hai] bitya ye tu apni maan ko samjhati nai hai…ulta seedha baat karti hai. Treatment mamta apne pita ki baat ko soon kar sukhdev ke pair ko pakad leti hai aur zor-zor se rone lagti hai. Mamta [darte aur rote huye] Pita ji hamko maaf kar dijiye..!! Hamse bahut badha paap ho gaya !! who…who hamse saadi karega pita ji .usne waada kiya hai hamse..!! kal who aakar aap se saadi ka baat karega..?? [treatment sukhdev mamta ki baat ko soon kar shocked ho jata hai..mamta ke haanthon se apna pair chuda kar andar kamre main chal jata hai aur ja kar ander se kundi laga leta hai .Mamta basanti ko dekhti hai..basanti mamta ko dekh kar moonh udhar fer leti hai] Charge to mamta Sc no.-33 Ext/day Location: School Road. Cha-mamta and suresh Page 40 of 46
  • 41. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 Mamta [treatment suresh ke saamne mamta ro rahi hai mamta suresh ko saari baten bata deti hai saarescene ko flash back main dikhana hai. Suresh thoda pareshan ho jata hai lekin ..normal rahne ki acting karta hai.] Mamta Suras Tum aaj hi mere pita se mera haanth maang lo! Nahi toh ham kahin munh dikhaane layak nahi rahenge. Suresh Are pagli ro kahe rahi hai..yeh le mithaai kha..hamko to maloom tha ke aisa hone wala hai..pyar kabhi chupne wala chiz hai..?? Samajh le aaj hamri baat pakki ! dhol baje ke saath aake tujhe le jayen ge samjhi !![ suresh apne pocket se naikal kar ek mithayi mamta ko deta hai aur kahta hai] chal abb ye mithayi khale ..kyunke hamlog maan baap jo banne wale hain..!! [treatment mamta suresh ki taraf aankhen phaade hairat se dekh rahi thi..use yakin hi nahin ho raha tha, ke suresh uski saari pareshani ko yun dur kar dega, suresh wah mithai mamta ke munh main daal deta hai..mamta dheere –dheere mithayi kha leti hai…mamta Sharma jati hai.. Charge to suresh S No.-34 int/day Location: sukhdev Home Cha-basanti,mamta ,sukhdev. Treatment mamta ghar ke ander ghusti hai..apne pet ko pakde dard se chillate mamta ki awaz ko sunkar basanti ander se aati hai..mamta zameen par dard se tadap rahi thi.. Mamta Page 41 of 46
  • 42. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [Mamta basanti se kahti hai rote huye] maan sures ne hamre saath bahut bada dhoka kiya maan .. Basanti [Beti ke sar ko god main rakhe pareshani se kahti hai] ka hua hamri bachchi..ka dhoka kiya …saadi nai karega thujhse ..?? Mamta Maan mera gerbhpaat ho gya…maan..suresh ne zahar khila diya maan… Treatment mamta ki baat ko soon kar bsanti ke hosh udh jaate hain Charge to basanti S No.-35 int/night Location: sukhdev Home Cha-basanti,mamta ,sukhdev [treatment mamta ki haalat bahutt chinta janak ho gayi thi, mamta ka garbpaat ho gaya tha uski maan uske sirhaane aur baap pair ke pas baitha apni kismat par ro raha tha. Sukhdev Ham panchayat jayenge mamta ki maan ..!! ham aise haanth main haanth dhare to baith nahi sakte ..apni bachchi ko insaaf to dilayenge ham..sirf hamri beti dukh nai sahegi usko bhi saja milegi.. !! Treatment basanti apne pati ko dekhti hai..kahti kuch nahi hai..phir mamta ki taraf dekhti hai..jo besudh bister par padi thi..aakhir mamta ke maa-baap ne panchayat jaane ka faisla kiya. Cut to Cut to.. Page 42 of 46
  • 43. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 S No.-36 Ext/Day Location:Panchayat Cha-sukhdev,basanti ,bablu and others. [mamta ke maan-baap aur chota bhai sabhi insaaf ke liye panchayat pahuchete hain] Sukhdev [pancho se apni beti ki gohaar lagate huye sukhdev kahta hai.] Sarkar hamri zindagi barbaad ho gayi !hamari beti ko suresh ne sahdi ka jhansa dekar..uske saath duskarm kiya..aur use dawa dekar uska garbhpaat kara diya..hujur hamri bachchi ko insaaf dilayen hoojur aur suresh se shadi karne ka aadesh de sarkaar...! Punch 1 [sukhdev ki saari batein sunne ke baad pancho ne mamta ko hi kusurwar thahraya aur kaha] Tere beti hi kulachhani hai !! kahin ka paap aakar kisi par madh rahi hai,tune apni beti ko yahi sichha di thi..ki shaadi se pahle hi apna munh kala kar le..aur tu to masterni banana chahta tha..use dekha kaisi masterni bani…hahahaha[loughing] Sukhdev [Panch ki baat soon kar aag babula hoa jata hai] ye aap ka kah rahen hai sarkar…aap hamri hi bachchi ko dosi thahra rahe hain..?? Punch 2 [Sukhdev ko daant kar] chup tu hamen batayega ke ham kya Karen. ..Gawon ke logon apradhi suresh nahi..hai apradhi mamta hai..isliye gawon ke log iske pariwar wale ki pitai karo ..ke dobara aisi harkat koi aur ladki na kare are.. ladkon ki baat aur hai..!! lekin ladkiyon ko apni maryada nahi bhulni chahiye.! Page 43 of 46
  • 44. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [treatment punch ka fasla sunte hi... gowan ke log sukhdev ,basanti aur bablu par tut padhe hain aur unhen lahu-luhaan kar dete hain..] Anchor Line 5 Yah kaise faisla tha..?? ye haiwaniyat nahi thi to aur kya tha..? kya kisi bekasur ko aisi saza milni chahiye ? kya punch ka faisla ek taraf hota hai? gawon main panchayat isliye hote hain ke gawon ka masla gawon main hi hal ho jaye..walon ko jab insaaf ki zarurat ho to use punch sahi faisla suna kar pidhit ke saath insaaf kare.lekin Yahan to pidhit ko hi sazaa de di gayi hai .abb ye pidhit pariwar kiska darwaza khatkhatayenge …?? Cut to S No.-37 Inr/Ext/Day Location:Police station Cha-sukhdev,mamta ,basanti ,bablu [sukhdev apne lahu-luhaan pariwar ke saath police thane pahunchta hai] Mamta [treatment mamta rote bilakte apni aap biti batati hai montage main dikhana hai.] Sukhdev Thanedaar saheb hamari beti ki jindagi barbad ho gayi..panchyat ne bhi hamri madad nai ki ab bas aap sures ko giraftar kijiye uske kiya ka usko saja dilwaye ? police Page 44 of 46
  • 45. Written by Qurratul Ain Mehboob 7738855181 [sari batein sun kar mamta se bola] Tumm chinta matt karo..tumm sahi jagah aayi ho..ab tumhara apraadhi jail ke salaakhon ke andar hoga! [treatment saare scene montage main dikhana hai Police apne counstable ke saath Gawon se khoj kar suresh ko giraftaar kar use jail bhej deti hai aur mamta ko chikitsak upchar ke leye sadar aspataal bhej deta hai.. Cut to.. Closing Anchor Link:- Lagatar 7 mahine tak mamta ka shoshan hota raha, shadi ke naam par bholi bhali kishori dhokha khati rahi, ham apne pariwar se aisi baat chupa leten hain jo hamain chupana nahi chahiye…jab pariwar ko ghatna ka pata chalta hai tab tak bahut der ho chuki hoti hai...!! jis baat ko ham chupana chahte hain jab who sabke samne ayegi tab kaya hoga. ..te ham nahi sochte .!! aaj bhi Hamare desh main mahilaon ko aaj woh sammaan nahi mila hai..jiski woh haqdaar hain! Aaj bhi unka shoshan Ho raha hai..ghar main..sasural main..office main..aaj hamein samaaj ko badalne ki zaroorat hai !! suresh jaise log to hamen har modh har society main milenge …bass hamen mamta nahi banna hai..hamen unke soch par nahi balke apne dimaag se chalna hai..kyunki dil to kamzor hota hai..lekin dimaag kamzor nahi hota hai hamen aise ghatiya sochon se nikal kar aage badhne ki sochna hai…ab sahne ki nahi jawab dene ki baari hai . kal phir ek sachhi ghatna ke saath milenge ! tabtak ke liye savdhaan aur surakshit rahein..sawdhani hamari suraksha apno ki . Page 45 of 46
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