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Hamburger Paragraphs
How to write a really
great paragraph!
Click on me
to learn
about good
paragraphs!
The Topic Sentence (Top Bun)
• Very first sentence
of your paragraph.
• Always needs to be
indented.
• Tells what your
paragraph is going
to be about.
There are many reasons
that I love to teach. First of
all, I love to teach because I
love being at school. Another
reason I love teaching is that
the days go by quickly. A third
reason I love to teach is
because I love seeing a
student understand something
new. Finally, I love to teach
because I love to be around
kids. These are just a few
reasons I love to teach.
Click here to return to the hamburger
The First Detail (Lettuce)
• Should not be the most
important detail.
• Needs to follow directly
after the topic
sentence.
• Needs to be full of good
“lettucy” details!
There are many reasons
that I love to teach. First of all, I
love to teach because I love
being at school. Another
reason I love teaching is that the
days go by quickly. A third
reason I love to teach is
because I love seeing a student
understand something new.
Finally, I love to teach because I
love to be around kids. These
are just a few reasons I love to
teach.
Click here to return to the hamburger
The Second Detail (Tomato)
• Still should not be
the most important
detail.
• Needs to follow
directly after the
lettuce sentence.
• Needs to be full of
good “juicy” details!
There are many reasons
that I love to teach. First of all, I
love to teach because I love being
at school. Another reason I
love teaching is that the days
go by quickly. A third reason I
love to teach is because I love
seeing a student understand
something new. Finally, I love to
teach because I love to be
around kids. These are just a
few reasons I love to teach.
Click here to return to the hamburger
The Third Detail (Cheese)
• Still not be the most
important detail.
• Needs to start
differently than
other sentences.
• Needs to be full of
good “cheesy”
details!
There are many reasons
that I love to teach. First of all, I
love to teach because I love being
at school. Another reason I love
teaching is that the days go by
quickly. A third reason I love
to teach is because I love
seeing a student understand
something new. Finally, I love
to teach because I love to be
around kids. These are just a
few reasons I love to teach.
Click here to return to the hamburger
The Last Detail (Meat)
• Finally!! The most
important detail.
• Should start
differently than most
of the other
sentences.
• Needs to be full of
good “meaty” details!
There are many reasons
that I love to teach. First of all, I
love to teach because I love being
at school. Another reason I love
teaching is that the days go by
quickly. A third reason I love to
teach is because I love seeing a
student understand something
new. Finally, I love to teach
because I love to be around
kids. These are just a few
reasons I love to teach.
Click here to return to the hamburger
The Closing Sentence
(Bottom Bun)
• Should look a lot like
the topic sentence.
• Needs to summarize
the topic.
• Needs to be an
obvious end to the
sentence.
There are many reasons
that I love to teach. First of all, I
love to teach because I love being
at school. Another reason I love
teaching is that the days go by
quickly. A third reason I love to
teach is because I love seeing a
student understand something
new. Finally, I love to teach
because I love to be around
kids. These are just a few
reasons I love to teach.
Click here to see a good paragraph on the web!

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Parahamburger

  • 1. Hamburger Paragraphs How to write a really great paragraph!
  • 2. Click on me to learn about good paragraphs!
  • 3. The Topic Sentence (Top Bun) • Very first sentence of your paragraph. • Always needs to be indented. • Tells what your paragraph is going to be about. There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger
  • 4. The First Detail (Lettuce) • Should not be the most important detail. • Needs to follow directly after the topic sentence. • Needs to be full of good “lettucy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger
  • 5. The Second Detail (Tomato) • Still should not be the most important detail. • Needs to follow directly after the lettuce sentence. • Needs to be full of good “juicy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger
  • 6. The Third Detail (Cheese) • Still not be the most important detail. • Needs to start differently than other sentences. • Needs to be full of good “cheesy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger
  • 7. The Last Detail (Meat) • Finally!! The most important detail. • Should start differently than most of the other sentences. • Needs to be full of good “meaty” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to return to the hamburger
  • 8. The Closing Sentence (Bottom Bun) • Should look a lot like the topic sentence. • Needs to summarize the topic. • Needs to be an obvious end to the sentence. There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. Click here to see a good paragraph on the web!