1. HAVE I REALLY CHANGED?
OF COURSE
With reckless retaliations, bad
behaviour and outrageous
performances has, once adored
Disney Star, Miley Cyrus
redeemed herself to become a
household name again; this
time for the right reasons? In
light of her new album, the star
has revealed that she has
ditched the foam fingers and
trash talk and instead adorned
more of the “old Miley” style-
much to the joy of her younger
fans. The upcoming World Tour,
has been inspired after her the
latest album release sky
rocketed due to the new found
alternative music genre she has
created.
However, despite the love
shown by fans Miley admits,
exclusively to Spotlight
magazine, that she is “worried
about possible ridicule and
abuse from tabloids as the
sudden change in style and
representation could be taken
as a hoax or money scam.”
Miley said “I have already faced
disbelief from the media but I
don understand why they don’t
believe me!” The singer is
known for image changes but
we all know that whatever the
circumstances, rest be assured,
Cyrus doesn’t disappoint when
it comes to great music.
believe
Ahead of her new “Redemption Tour” Miley Cyrus speaks out about
her journey back into the publics hearts.
“Why don’t they
me?”
www.spotlightmagazine.com
www.mileycyrusofficial.com
By Lauren Holyoak
Editor's Notes
Thank you for your work Lauren. A/B grade
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