6. Clearly address your specific topic.
Clearly address your opinion
Tips for
Writing
Your
Claim:
Do
not use words like “In my opinion”
or “I think”.
Briefly
include reference to the evidence
that you will use to support your
opinion;
you
may also need/want to address
your recommendations in your claim.
7. Sample
Claim
Workplace discrimination is a
growing problem in America because
of the stereotypes and
misconceptions people have of the
diverse population. Employees must
fight for their rights and the
government needs to more thoroughly
enforce the laws to eliminate
workplace discrimination.
8. Brainstorming
•
Write your broad topic in 1-3
words.
High stakes testing
• Write your opinion in as few
I am against it
• Write down 3-4 key details that
Not accurate, biased, used
words as possible
you will address in your essay.
• Write down 2-3
recommendations that you will
address in your essay.
for inappropriate reasons
Revise the tests,
performance assessments
9. Sample Claim
High stakes testing is extremely detrimental to
both students and the state of public education.
The purpose and the nature of these tests must be
revised to include performance-based
assessments, instead of the current, biased
tests, which are not accurate portrayals of students’
learning.