問題見本を使い解説
(参考)
https://www.eiken.or.jp/eiken/info/2015/pdf/20151225_pressrelease_1601renewal.pdf
【模範解答】
I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in
modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to
their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a
good idea of what they are looking for.
Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The
skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today
still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.
It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.
4つのパラグラフで構成する
2.1 書き方1:パラグラフの構成
【模範解答】
I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in
modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to
their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a
good idea of what they are looking for.
Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The
skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today
still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.
It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.
合格点を最短・最小の労力で狙う=考えよりこの型を使う
パラグラフ1: イントロ
パラグラフ2: ボディ1
パラグラフ3: ボディ2
パラグラフ4: 結論
イントロのポイント
2.2 書き方2:パラグラフの各要素(イントロ)
【模範解答】
I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in
modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to
their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a
good idea of what they are looking for.
Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The
skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today
still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.
It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.
イントロの役割は、「結論の提示」と「導入・つなぎ」
パラグラフ1: イントロ
(1) I agree with the idea that small,
independent shops and businesses will be
able to survive in modern society, (2) and I
have two reasons to support my opinion.
【型のポイント】
(1) 必ず自分のスタンス・主張(賛成・反対)を明確にします
(2) 次のパラグラフへのつなぎ言葉やテーマの背景について
1文入れます(準1級では例のようにつなぎ言葉を1つ覚
えて常にそれを使う=語法・文法ミスを避ける)
ボディ1のポイント
2.3 書き方3:パラグラフの各要素(ボディ)
【模範解答】
I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in
modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to
their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a
good idea of what they are looking for.
Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The
skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today
still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.
It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.
Topic+detailの2文で構成、頭のつなぎ言葉、トピックの明示
パラグラフ2:
ボディ1
(1) To begin with, (2) the (3) service at small,
independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores.
(4) Independent shops are usually more closely connected
to their communities, and their staff members often know
their customers personally and have a good idea of what
they are looking for.
【型のポイント】
(1) Firstly, secondly等パラグラフの頭に構成を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる
(2) Topic sentence: 4つのトピックから選んだものについて理由を明示
(3) 分かり易さ重視で、トピックから選んだキーワードは必ず入れる
(4) Supporting detail: トピックセンテンスを経験や例などでサポート
ボディ2のポイント
2.3 書き方3:パラグラフの各要素(ボディ)
【模範解答】
I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in
modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to
their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a
good idea of what they are looking for.
Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The
skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today
still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.
It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.
ボディは1,2ともに基本的に全く同じ構成で良い
パラグラフ3:
ボディ2
(1) Secondly, (2)many independent shops are responsible
for producing (3) traditionally made goods.
(4) The skills to make these products have been passed
down over generations, and consumers today still
appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that
these businesses sell.
【型のポイント】
(1) Firstly, secondly等パラグラフの頭に構成を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる
(2) Topic sentence: 4つのトピックから選んだものについて理由を明示
(3) 分かり易さ重視で、トピックから選んだキーワードは必ず入れる
(4) Supporting detail: トピックセンテンスを経験や例などでサポート
結論のポイント
2.4 書き方4:パラグラフの各要素(結論)
【模範解答】
I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in
modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores. Independent shops are usually more closely connected to
their communities, and their staff members often know their customers personally and have a
good idea of what they are looking for.
Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. The
skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers today
still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell.
It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.
ボディは1,2ともに基本的に全く同じ構成で良い
パラグラフ4: 結論
(1) It is for these reasons that (2)I believe people will
continue to use small, independent businesses.
【型のポイント】
(1) 解答例のようにパラグラフの頭に結論を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる
(2) イントロでも触れたが、再度自分のスタンス・主張(賛成・反対)を明確にし
ます
模範解答の文法とレベル
3.2 求められる文法の難易度
【模範解答】
I agree with the idea that small, independent shops and businesses will be able to survive in
modern society, and I have two reasons to support my opinion. (28 words)
To begin with, the service at small, independent shops is usually far better than the service at
larger businesses and chain stores. (22 words)
Independent shops are usually more closely connected to their communities, and their staff
members often know their customers personally and have a good idea of what they are looking for.
(30 words)
Secondly, many independent shops are responsible for producing traditionally made goods. (11
words)
The skills to make these products have been passed down over generations, and consumers
today still appreciate the quality and craftsmanship of the goods that these businesses sell. (28
words)
It is for these reasons that I believe people will continue to use small, independent businesses.
(16 words)
関係代名詞(that)や等位接続詞(andのみ)で1文平均15語