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1. DigipackandPosterFeedback
We dida feedbacksessionwhere everyone gave feedbackoneveryone’sdigipacksandtheirposter,
thisgave me advice andimprovementstodoon mywork.This isthe feedbackthatI received from
everyone.
Startingwiththe negative andimprovements –
The posterstextiskindof hardto read withthe coloursof the back groundand the coloursof the
font.
Notsure of the placementof bandname on magazine ad,doesn’tshow importance.
The backgroundof the frontcover of the albumdoesn’tworkverywell andthe colourof the titles.
Needsmore legal informationanditsplacement.
The posterneedsmore informationlike website andrecordlabels.
Don’tlike the pineapple.
All the fonts’differentsizes –perhapstoodifferent…
Legal informationgoodbutnotformal
Back groundon postergoodbut hard to readtext.

2. 2nd
half bottommaybe playaroundwithfiles.
Preferfirstalbum.
These are the improvementsthatIneedtodo on the and I will includethem inmywork,the poster
doeshave a hard testto read to the back groundand afternoticingthisfromthe feedbackitdoes
needtobe improvedandIwill addressthisinmynextdraft.The placementof the artiststitlesdoes
needtobe shownsome attentionastheyare beingseenasnotmore importantthan otherthingson
the poster.There isnot enoughlegal informationonthe backof the albumand that doesneedsome
improvementsnotjustthe amountbe the fontas well.A draftcan be made withoutthe pineapple.
The positive feedback –
Front coveris“sick”, goodfontsand effective withbackground(album)
Back cover looksverygood.
Like the disklayout.

3. Nice images.
Pokerchipisa greatidea.
Like CD idearelevanttomusicvideo.
Good themedimages.
Co0loursmatch and pokerchipisa goodidea.
Nice layout,nice songtitle,simple/creativeimages.
Relevanttosong.
A lotof these comments contradictsoimprovementswill still be made butalongthe same lines.The
feedbackisveryhelpful andconstructive,itwill helpme improve mydigipackandposter.
In conclusionthe feedbackthatIhave got is veryhelpful andwillbe consideredinthe
improvements.