2. Thesis Statement: People aren’t always who they seem. For example, by looking at me, you would never guess I have a strong passion for animals, have two protective older brothers, or that I am striving to create a name for my self through the fashion industry.

4. Since I can remember, I have always had a love for fashion. Flipping through magazine to magazine, I couldn’t help but wanting to be fashion forward. My mom always says to me that I have to many clothes, but I say…

6. Because my brothers were given the special honor of being older than me, they were also sub-consciously protective. For instance, I was given this unwritten rule where I couldn’t date anyone there age or above. So really. I could only date people who were a year older than me. (I never followed that rule)

8. Growing up, my family and I owned a lot of animals. Because of large of amount of animals that we had, it lead to my increasing generosity throughout my life. For example, we owned 7 bunnies because they were all related in some way- I of course didn’t want or have the heart to break them all apart. (Plus more the better! Right?)

10. Main Point Summary: These are just a few traits about me, but you may however learn more as the class begins to unfold.

11. Clincher: (in main summary)