The document discusses why cats make good pets. It states that cats are clean because they wash themselves and rarely change their hair, so owners do not need to bathe them often. It also notes that cats are small and do not require a large living space or house. In conclusion, the document argues that cats are better pets than dogs because they are not dirty and do not need much space.
3. Topic sentence:I think a cat is a good pet because it is
clean and small
Supporting sentences
CLEAN
-Cats wash themselves.
-Cats rarely change their hair
-You just need a sand box for its waste
SMALL
-Cats don’t need a big space to live.
-You can take a cat everywhere
-You don’t need a bog special house for a cat.
4. First draft
I think a cat is a good pet because it is clean
and small.Cats wash themselves.Cats rarely
change their hair.You just need a sand box
for its waste. Cats don’t need a big space to
live.You can take a cat everywhere.You don’t
need a big special house for a cat.
5. Second draft
I think a cats are good pets because they are clean and small.First
of all,cats wash themselves, so you don’t need to spedn a lot of
time giving them baths.Also, cats rarely change their hair, so they
are less likely to drity your house.Besides,You just need a sand
box for its waste. This, of course, is not the case with dogs which
usually need to be taken to a park. A second important point to
favor cats is that they don’t need a big space to live.You don’t
need a big special house for a cat becasue it will basically sleep
ona small box with warm old clothes.
6. Concluding sentence
Original topic sentence:I think a cat is a good pet because it is
clean and small
Concluding sentence (paraphrasing the topic sentence)
In conclusion, cats would make better pets because they are not
dirty or too big.
7. Third draft
I think a cats are good pets because they are clean and small.First
of all,cats wash themselves, so you don’t need to spedn a lot of
time giving them baths.Also, cats rarely change their hair, so they
are less likely to drity your house.Besides,You just need a sand
box for its waste. This, of course, is not the case with dogs which
usually need to be taken to a park. A second important point to
favor cats is that they don’t need a big space to live.You don’t
need a big special house for a cat becasue it will basically sleep
ona small box with warm old clothes. In conclusion, cats would
make better pets because they are not dirty or too big.