2. Feedback
After showing my teacher and a few people from my target audience my finished
trailer, I asked if there were any improvements they recommended I tried before
the final work was to be submitted at the end of December.
Things people picked up on:
-The production logo moves too quickly and spreads out too far, it’s very hard to
read it.
-Make the title of the film in read like the subtitle and have it larger so it is more
important.
-Make the use of the colour red more obvious, have red on the knife and
throughout the trailer in other places if possible, so that red is a theme
throughout the trailer.
3. Schedule
Saturday 8th
10.00 Create fake blood on knife and scatter liquid onto floor for desired blood effect
10.30 Film knife drop on floor with blood
Monday 10th
11.30 Arrive at editing suite
11.45 Add new scene to montage. Change colour to match with rest of trailer.
12.00 Reediting film production company so that title does not move so quick
12.15 Change main title of film to red
12.20 Have effect so that title changes from white to red. Or red to darker red.