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Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
Writing to score a Band 7, 8
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Writing to score a Band 7, 8

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Guide to improve your writing, to write academically, audio included.

Guide to improve your writing, to write academically, audio included.

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  • 1. PART 1/3WRITING TO SCOREBAND 7, 8. DOWNLOAD AUDIO HERE
  • 2. KILL THE NEGATIVECONSTRUCTION
  • 3. The government has not got infrastructurethat is suitable. (use lack, 5 words)
  • 4. The government has not got infrastructurethat is suitable. (use lack, 5 words)The government lacks suitableinfrastructure.
  • 5. It is argued it is not logical tolearn English just solely from abook.
  • 6. It is argued it is not logical tolearn English just solely from abook.It is argued it is illogical to learn Englishjust solely from a book.
  • 7. It is argued it is not logical tolearn English just solely from abook.It is argued it is illogical to learn Englishjust solely from a book.It is argued it is illogical to learn Englishjust from a book.
  • 8. Those students who can not organise theirstudy time efficiently in the time allocatedwill always suffer really badconsequences.(in 9 words clue: punish)
  • 9. Those students who can not organise theirstudy time efficiently in the time allocatedwill always suffer really badconsequences.(in 9 words clue: punish)Students unable to organise their time efficientlywill be punished.
  • 10. Those students who can not organise theirstudy time efficiently in the time allocatedwill always suffer really badconsequences.(in 9 words clue: punish)Those students unable to organise their studytime efficiently in the time allocated will alwayssuffer really bad consequences.Students unable to organise their time efficientlywill be punished.
  • 11. Nobody was able to conduct an analysisof the blood in the office because theoffice had not enough pieces ofequipment. (three modifications).
  • 12. Nobody was able to conduct an analysisof the blood in the office because theoffice had not enough pieces ofequipment. (three modifications).Nobody could conduct an analysis of theblood in the office because in the officethere was insufficient pieces ofequipment.
  • 13. Nobody was able to conduct an analysisof the blood in the office because theoffice had not enough pieces ofequipment. (three modifications).Nobody could conduct an analysis of theblood in the office because in the officethere was insufficient pieces ofequipment.Nobody could conduct an analysis of theblood in the office because there wasinsufficient equipment.
  • 14. We were not unable to decide to do thenecessary research needed. -(Reduce to 7words).
  • 15. We were not unable to decide to do thenecessary research needed. -(Reduce to 7words).We could decide to do the necessaryresearch needed.
  • 16. We were not unable to decide to do thenecessary research needed. -(Reduce to 7words).We could decide to do the necessaryresearch needed.We could decide to do the necessaryresearch.
  • 17. The government has not got infrastructurethat is suitable. (5 words)
  • 18. The government has not got infrastructurethat is suitable. (5 words)The government has unsuitableinfrastructure.
  • 19. The local government did not invest in thecommunity for six years.
  • 20. The local government did not invest in thecommunity for six years.The local government failed to invest inthe community for six years.
  • 21. ● Avoid get – try to use Latin verbs● Avoid contractions● Use a wide range of vocabulary and structures● Follow the task response -LIKE A ROAD MAP!● KILL negative structures● Verbs vs. Nouns● Use the passive – at least once.
  • 22. TO HEAR PART 2/3 SUBSCRIBE ATThanks to flickr! Pool table: http://bit.ly/WUjFQp

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