The document appears to be notes from a training on writing good first drafts. It provides 10 sentences as examples of things to fix in writing and the corrected versions below. The corrections address issues like fragment sentences, punctuation errors, subject-verb agreement, and capitalization.

1. Quiz
David Marsh
Good First Drafts: Training for Better Writing
CORE Spring Meeting
Baltimore, MD – 25 April 2013

2. 1. Juliette is loved by Romeo
2. We do not allow smoking, fighting or people to spit.
3. Long sentences make me confused I don’t like them .
4. Apples which are very good for you, are cheap today.
5. Shouting is I M P O L I T E !
6. Tom said, “Please pass the salt”.
7. …for boys and girls respectively).
8. What is for Lunch?
9. Thai Nguyen province is one of the northern Provinces.
10. 9 boys and eleven girls passed the test.
Fix these sentences
1. Romeo loves
Juliette.
2. We do not allow
smoking, fighting, or
spitting.
3. Long sentences
confuse me. I do not
like them.
4. Apples, which are
very good for you, are
cheap today.
5. Shouting is impolite.
6. Tom said, “Please
pass the salt.”
7. …for boys and girls,
respectively).
8. What is for lunch?
9. Thai Nguyen
Province is one of the
northern provinces.
10. Nine boys and 11
girls passed the test.