1. Andrew Kenly 2509 Dory Dr
Bonita CA, 91902
(619) 887-7746
AKenly@gmail.com
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you had a printing problem. Use solid divider lines.
Objective:To obtain a position in Advertising, Marketing or Public Relations where I can apply my education, hard
work,customer service and adaptability skillsto achieve the goals and objectives set out by my employer. Comment [i2]: Objective? Really? This is an
outmoded resume feature. Your cover letter should
cover this information.
Education: Comment [i3]: The education section lacks
San Diego State University San Diego, CA impact.Where are relevant courses? Awards and
Bachelor of Applied Arts and Sciences Major: Business Administration: Marketing honors? Significant projects?
Specialization in Integrated Marketing Communications
Expected Date of Graduation: December, 2010
Experience: Comment [i4]: What did you actually do? How
did you help the company? There's little mention of
this anywhere.
Windows Campus Representative
September 2009-Present Comment [i5]: Funky formatting. Why are the
work dates and locations left-aligned and out in the
The Rice Company on behalf of Microsoft San Diego, CA middle of the page?
Comment [i6]: Emphasize achievements over
Responsible for executing Microsoft Windows marketing directives at San Diego State University.
responsibilities. Strike the word "responsible" from
Ranked #1 Windows Campus Representative out of 215 others during the ‘09-‘10 school year. your entire resume.
Surpassed program benchmarks by more than 700%.
Comment [i7]: Show impact by giving the size of
Compiled and communicated weekly reports to the program director. the university.
Comment [i8]: Great! But ranked #1 for doing
Publicity and Promotions Intern what? "Representing"? Explain what you did to earn
June2009-Present that ranking.
Allied Integrated Marketing San Diego, CA
Comment [i9]: What benchmarks did you exceed
and why was that important for the organization?
Executed multiple marketing projects on schedule, within budget and with excellent attention to details.
Comment [i10]: This generic statement doesn't
Managed external relationships as needed to develop and successfully execute programs and various marketing really say anything of consequence. Comes close to
projects, and negotiated with 3rd party vendors to secure services at optimal rates. bizspeak gibberish.
Collaborated on the creation and execution of a variety of high profile publicity events. Comment [i11]: Good, but lacks specificity. Add
Conducted advanced screenings of upcoming films. # of vendors, % discounts obtained.
Trained new agency interns. Comment [i12]: Details! Details!
Senior Account Executive Comment [i13]: Achievements, not
responsibilities. Say it with me now…
January 2009-May 2009
The Daily Aztec San Diego, CA Comment [i14]: Can you put numbers to these
accomplishments? If you sold ads, how many did
you sell in $$$? If you sourced leads, how successful
Responsible for sales of advertisement. were you?
Sourced leads through various forms of marketing including cold calls and appointments. Comment [i15]: "Elite," like "top," is an
Assisted and advised other account executives with help on sales issues and motivational matters infomercially term that often connotes the opposite
Responsible for overseeing various accounts with some of the most elite businesses in San Diego, from customer of its intended meaning. Just go ahead and mention
relations to quality control. some clients.
Comment [i16]: Special Skills? Ninjitsu and x-
ray vision, those are special skills—not proficiency
in Microsoft Word. Change this heading to
Additional Skills.
Special Skills: Comment [i17]: These phrases are the equivalent
IntermediateSpanish of those photos that come with the picture frame.
Ability to work within fast-paced, deadline driven environment They belong on generic job listings, not your
resume. Replace them with more substantive
Strong organizational skills and ability to focus on details achievement-oriented skills.
Proficient inMicrosoft Office (Word, Excel, Access, PowerPoint), Internet Explorer
Comment [i18]: Another example of a great
experience and missed . How big was the budget that
you ran? Are there any other quantifiable
Activities: achievements?
Sigma Alpha Mu Fraternity: served as, Treasurer, Executive Assistant and Public Relations Chair,and Gamma Sigma Comment [i19]: Hey, Gamma Sigma Alpha!
Alpha Honor Society I've, uh…never heard of them. Why is this
impressive? What were the selection criteria?
![Andrew Kenly 2509 Dory Dr
Bonita CA, 91902
(619) 887-7746
AKenly@gmail.com
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Comment [i1]: Dotted lines makes it look like
you had a printing problem. Use solid divider lines.
Objective:To obtain a position in Advertising, Marketing or Public Relations where I can apply my education, hard
work,customer service and adaptability skillsto achieve the goals and objectives set out by my employer. Comment [i2]: Objective? Really? This is an
outmoded resume feature. Your cover letter should
cover this information.
Education: Comment [i3]: The education section lacks
San Diego State University San Diego, CA impact.Where are relevant courses? Awards and
Bachelor of Applied Arts and Sciences Major: Business Administration: Marketing honors? Significant projects?
Specialization in Integrated Marketing Communications
Expected Date of Graduation: December, 2010
Experience: Comment [i4]: What did you actually do? How
did you help the company? There's little mention of
this anywhere.
Windows Campus Representative
September 2009-Present Comment [i5]: Funky formatting. Why are the
work dates and locations left-aligned and out in the
The Rice Company on behalf of Microsoft San Diego, CA middle of the page?
Comment [i6]: Emphasize achievements over
Responsible for executing Microsoft Windows marketing directives at San Diego State University.
responsibilities. Strike the word "responsible" from
Ranked #1 Windows Campus Representative out of 215 others during the ‘09-‘10 school year. your entire resume.
Surpassed program benchmarks by more than 700%.
Comment [i7]: Show impact by giving the size of
Compiled and communicated weekly reports to the program director. the university.
Comment [i8]: Great! But ranked #1 for doing
Publicity and Promotions Intern what? "Representing"? Explain what you did to earn
June2009-Present that ranking.
Allied Integrated Marketing San Diego, CA
Comment [i9]: What benchmarks did you exceed
and why was that important for the organization?
Executed multiple marketing projects on schedule, within budget and with excellent attention to details.
Comment [i10]: This generic statement doesn't
Managed external relationships as needed to develop and successfully execute programs and various marketing really say anything of consequence. Comes close to
projects, and negotiated with 3rd party vendors to secure services at optimal rates. bizspeak gibberish.
Collaborated on the creation and execution of a variety of high profile publicity events. Comment [i11]: Good, but lacks specificity. Add
Conducted advanced screenings of upcoming films. # of vendors, % discounts obtained.
Trained new agency interns. Comment [i12]: Details! Details!
Senior Account Executive Comment [i13]: Achievements, not
responsibilities. Say it with me now…
January 2009-May 2009
The Daily Aztec San Diego, CA Comment [i14]: Can you put numbers to these
accomplishments? If you sold ads, how many did
you sell in $$$? If you sourced leads, how successful
Responsible for sales of advertisement. were you?
Sourced leads through various forms of marketing including cold calls and appointments. Comment [i15]: "Elite," like "top," is an
Assisted and advised other account executives with help on sales issues and motivational matters infomercially term that often connotes the opposite
Responsible for overseeing various accounts with some of the most elite businesses in San Diego, from customer of its intended meaning. Just go ahead and mention
relations to quality control. some clients.
Comment [i16]: Special Skills? Ninjitsu and x-
ray vision, those are special skills—not proficiency
in Microsoft Word. Change this heading to
Additional Skills.
Special Skills: Comment [i17]: These phrases are the equivalent
IntermediateSpanish of those photos that come with the picture frame.
Ability to work within fast-paced, deadline driven environment They belong on generic job listings, not your
resume. Replace them with more substantive
Strong organizational skills and ability to focus on details achievement-oriented skills.
Proficient inMicrosoft Office (Word, Excel, Access, PowerPoint), Internet Explorer
Comment [i18]: Another example of a great
experience and missed . How big was the budget that
you ran? Are there any other quantifiable
Activities: achievements?
Sigma Alpha Mu Fraternity: served as, Treasurer, Executive Assistant and Public Relations Chair,and Gamma Sigma Comment [i19]: Hey, Gamma Sigma Alpha!
Alpha Honor Society I've, uh…never heard of them. Why is this
impressive? What were the selection criteria?](https://image.slidesharecdn.com/andrewkenlyresumebefore-101217133228-phpapp02/85/Andrew-kenly-resume-before-1-320.jpg)
